Nice letter, littlek!
Umm...just one teency weency little thing I noticed.....
Quote:Learning in an interactive format will allow me to not only learn by doing, which how I prefer to learn, but also to see how my classmates learn and teach.
I would change this sentence to read as follows:
Learning in an interactive format will allow me to learn, not only by doing, which is how I prefer to learn, but also by observing how my classmates learn and teach.
That way, the tenses of your verbs, "doing" and "observing" are consistent. (I changed "see" to "observe." Sounds more teacher-like, no?)
(I used to work as a proof-reader in an ad agency! Can you tell? Ha!)
Anyway, best wishes with your letter!