@edgarblythe,
Is this your Great American novel ed.
I think Flaubert got to something like it in the end. I can't remember. I haven't read it. I'm not sure it has been published. A list of ideas he had picked up along the way.
The reader is supposed to pick up the general idea, the tone, the hero's way of looking at the world--that sort of thing. You don't fluff it out like I do. And I would never say which of us has the best method. The reader decides that.
Do you mean like the red lights are only supposed to come on when the green lights are off, and then only the alternate ones, and the orange lights are supposed come on in a fast sequence so that they look like they are running around the edges for 20 seconds, then all flash at once on and off for 5 seconds and then go back to running round the edges in that general manner that the behaviourists have found stimulates the part of the brain which derives pleasure from spending money, and the lights on the reins of Father Christmas's team of reindeers have to be synchronised so it looks like he's driving them fast and with a degree of urgency, and then all the lights go off and a poster comes on for 10 seconds, if that is legal under the subliminal regulations in the US, showing a house with a ladder up against it with a bloke in white overalls painting the windows, a dog on the lawn, a kiddie's plastic slide and, in large red print--"Ed's Friendly Home Maintenance Service. (from a blocked plughole to complete restoration)."
The lights in the pub window have two positions. Did you see the guy in Croatia, I think it was, it might be Serbia, who had a million lights on his house all timed to perfection. He had been working on it for six months they said and I can believe it. It looked like an ocean liner on the last night before a fully booked cruise returned to port.
The main thing ed is not to proffer any bad advice to young lads. They are sufficiently in the **** as it is without us old codgers leading them astray.
I think young lads should beware of girls called Kennedy. They obviously have idiotic parents.