Neverending Rap Battle

8 bars is not enough. How about a 16 instead?

I've battled some pricks and swines in my past life, but you must come from a repulsive kind of plant life
You think you're taller than I 'cause you stand high?
It's almost noon in my country, but I don't reside in Shanghai
You're standing underneath a hot sun, deserted and alone, fried in the backside
Where you must live, the tumbleweeds don't stop and say hi, they just pass by
It's a Mexican standoff when a plant comes toe-to-eye with a cattle guy
I'll rustle you like livestock and thrash you on your hinds like cow-hides
Oh, and just in case you don't know what I was describing you as earlier? That's right, you're CACTI!

Disregard my first post.

Yea much better....i was thinkin the same

I ant extendin it to 16 bars cos i don have itrest in dissin if u want 16bars i can post em day after tmarw .....i thought u said '10'....
here i go

from inside my soul is feelinin EMPTY
so dont PUSH ME,dnt TEMPT ME
PUSSYS

ima kill SOMEBODY if SOMESHORTY
again talk about BUCKS,AUDI,CREAM,PURSE OR BUGATTI

its DEEP VERSE,misery GOES WORST,my history 's WHOLE CURSED
atheists can not merge the mosque and church

my life starts at night when i start fucckin wit NY FUZZ
cos i know shoddy kives dont kill but shoddy EL-LIFE DOES

theres a man,hah ILLITRATE to penetrate in competition with ILLEST 8
INFILTIRATE,m talkin bout ILLUSTRATE,Ima WIN THIS RACE even if he run in SICKEST PACE

cuz VILLAINS QuELL IN THIS WORLD,
my lifes SICK AS HELL,i LIVE AND DWELL IN THE DIRT

blood made a river beneath my bed,in which i DIP AND FELL
it vanishes my thirst and my hungers INEXPLICABLE till i eat this UNSPITABLE ****

ima get in ghetto,and kill some ILL's AND BELLES
and this WICKED PAL knows it,i don know how hes bearin brunt, his assshole became an UNFILLABLE BUNT

my WHACK HOPES keep fuckin MAC HOLEs
last time i made a narrow escape from BACKDOOR,after fuckin his BACK,CHOKE!

U gonna post ur rap or what....?

Your soul is feeling empty because I extracted all feeling
I'm Shang Tsung, taking away souls is self-appeasing
The fact that you use fillers is the SOUL length of your vocab
You're just a cheap chick pulling tricks out of your hoe bag
I'd like to congratulate you if I might
You're the 1000th person to use one of Eminem's lines
And you think that was nice? You're trifling, brother
Your Destiny is written on the wall like the front cover
I had no idea you were a high-performance car hater
Well ..... how do these next four lines about cars relate to ya?
Let's see, my Mum owns a Vauxhall, but before, she had a Ford
Plus I know a colleague of mine who owns an Audi 4-door
I like Ferraris, and I also dig Bugattis
And I know that 50 Cent once drove a Maserati
I just thought you should know you've written 18 lines, not 16
Plus your rhymes are all over the place like whipped cream
And damn right your hopes are whack, as well as dashed
I just pulled another ownage out of your ass!

First of all none of line is like eminems,secondly this is y i said u go first cuz i knew u would yry to flip the sctipt and thats some thin any body can do and yeah i wrote 9 bars and over 35 multies.....fucck it let the judges decide ....m waitn...darknova,glitch and whitey

1)

against:


Line in bold is from Eminem's "Soldier". Said line says otherwise.
I do know a certain line when I see one, 8-e-tude, so don't split hairs with me.

2) 1 bar is not equivalent to 2 lines. 1 bar is the same is 1 line.

3) In order to win a rap battle, people use certain methods to gain advantage; flipping the script is one of them. YOU HAVE TO MAKE FUN OF THE PERSON IN FRONT OF YOU IN TERMS OF APPEARANCE, NAME, SKILL, IMAGE, THE RHYMES THEY USE ON YOU, ET CETERA. In a volleyball match, the ball is hit back and forth over the net between the players; you don't see someone whacking the ball anywhere else, do you?

Whats the match...haha...i mean how is my first bar bitten from eminems soldiers last line,first bar...resemblin syllables don mean its bitten iln i swear to god i didnt had his lyric in ma mind while writin mine...and fucck eminem i have ambition to beat him.....plus stop more postin winnin the debate wont let u win compitition,l and all three judges chosen are just they arent gonna see yr filthy posts,fo me their decision would b final even if they go in your favour i wont hasitate or argue....and if u say i made 1 bar of 1 line than cut my first bar and consider the last one....thay still be 8 bars

M waitin whitey,glitch and nova

If I didn't know you better, I'd say you were a little cocksure, but then I'd be bursting that little bubble of delusion you seem to be in right now.

If you look at the lyrics very closely, you'd see that line is similar to Em's; whether it is resembled or not, IT IS STILL BITING. If you don't believe me, GOOGLE it.

Quote: "stop more postin winnin the debate wont let you win competition". Who said this was a competition? This was only started because you criticised me poorly without looking back at the PROOF of my skill. Where there is fire, there's always smoke. Additionally, YOU'RE the one who wanted me to post a verse, YOU'RE the one who challenged me, and YOU'RE the one who even MENTIONED my name in one of your stupid little critiques.

I've looked back at your last comments and I still can't think for the life of me how you've had the gall to insult my use of talent, let alone put me at the bottom.

**** my posts being filthy; right now, I feel like shovelling it in your face!

hey homies ive been battling on a differnt forum on this site and i was wondering if you guys could tell me somethings i need to workon and tell me if im doin alright http://able2know.org/topic/191480-4#post-5360143

https://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/i-pray-hip-hop

ur styles evolving , your getting better at removing filler an going right to the point ur multis are building id like to see harder punches "

Your multies are much better and may be punch llines too,but punchlines need improvement in the sence that u should concentrate on hittin em in more effective way,,do not hit punchlines all through dissin cuz this aint freestyle,,if u fill disstrack all throug wit p.lines ur content would get weaker,it is not necessory to hit punchlines endin with milti syllable,use multi in mid if they flow better or seem more effecient,if u have an excellent punchline in yr mind spit itwrit it dont think that it would not look impresive........content should be the firs priority

overall
who was better ?
Him or me

U see your punchlines are better than his,especially i love those written agais samy boy i.e"you are at sea level"it was good but u shouldnt further extend it to"i mean at sand on seashore"....ur multies and pnchline are good and its fun to read em....i loved the rap u posted against samy but the rap against darknova was reall good,even better than darknovas in beginin but u mad the flow go weaker and weaker at the end....if i consider yr only first half you were better but if i consider your whole content he is better xuz u fuccked the second half

thanks for the feedback, I agree with you on the flow part

Yo, does anybody know what happened to J. Blake?

He agreed to battle me a few months ago ...... but I think he got carried away by the pussies of Neverland.

I don't know, just a thought .......

hey does anyone want to do a rap battle tournament if so i could host and i made a rap tournament forum just in case http://able2know.org/topic/216559-1

I'm in