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I want honest opinions about this rap please. Thanks. Please rate my rap from 1⭐- 5⭐ from 1 being horrible and 5 being the best. Thanks in advance. Here we go :/

Do you remember the time when everyone used to drag you down?
And I came in and brought you back up
I cared for you, but then you brought me back down and let yourself rise once again

Now, its like you're not you
I don't even know you anymore
Your promises, turned into lies
Now everything you touch dies

You're killing me, what happend to you?!
Come back, I can't do this
I need you

But now you don't care
You just let me fall
Its not fair
Now I just bawl
Thinking about you
Is that what you wanted me to do?

We were so alike
We stood up for each other
But no, you gave it up and stabbed my heart with a spike

How come you chose her?
She's just a liar
A backstabber, a faker
She'll never be there for you
Like I was

Every minute, every second I wasted on you
What did I even do?
Now I'm going to get my revenge
And get back at you

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@ShyanneRae,

Well, I don't usually enjoy angry rap or whiney rap, but this would make for one hell of a stalker note. I would advise against it, unless you have unlimited patience with the police department.

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@glitterbag,

"Stalker"? This is about my ex best friend. She chose someone else over me. We were so alike and I never met anyone like her, until she changed. :/

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@ShyanneRae,

Well, she wasn't a friend worth keeping. I know it sucks when friends disappoint us, but I sincerely hope this is the only time you are ever disappointed.

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@glitterbag,

Thanks

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@ShyanneRae,

ShyanneRae wrote:

Every minute, every second I wasted on you
What did I even do?
Now I'm going to get my revenge
And get back at you

WELCOME to the forum, Shyanne!
It was good of u to write out a personal profile
so that we can know who u r. Too few people do that.

I expect to be in San Diego in late June n July of 2016
for the American Mensa Annual Gathering. I look forward to
re-visiting your wonderful zoo. I was in your city a few years ago
attending the Annual Convention of the International Association
of Near Death Studies www.IANDS.org and I fulfilled a life long
ambition of seeing your famous zoo, for the first time.
I dedicated 2 days to that; rented a little electric car
n zipped all over the place.

U r a good poet. How long did it take u to draw that up ?

What form will your vengeance take?
Will it be lawful ?

Do u c a possibility of reconciliation with your (ex-?) best friend ?

David

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