Neverending Rap Battle II

Now I'm here rappin to tell ya'll what i mean
I'm burnin up in here im one big machine
we're rappas that are spittin rhymes and only in out teens
puttin our lives down on paper and makin one great scene

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hey ive never rapped b 4 this is my first time, so if it wouldnt be too much trouble can i have some feedback of how i did?

Slim Shorty wrote:

Now I'm here rappin to tell ya'll what i mean
I'm burnin up in here im one big machine
we're rappas that are spittin rhymes and only in out teens
puttin our lives down on paper and makin one great scene

~~~~~~~~~~~

hey ive never rapped b 4 this is my first time, so if it wouldnt be too much trouble can i have some feedback of how i did?

Ive been faded for a minute but im back on here
dont trip im not go diss you i just wanna make that clear
i see you new to this stuff you need widin ur vocabulary
so stick ur head look up words in the dictionary
u can become a king of this site if you get good like my crew
but we dont let anyone in you gotta be 1 of the good few

Just keep practicin

quietStorm7 wrote:

Slim Shorty wrote:

Now I'm here rappin to tell ya'll what i mean
I'm burnin up in here im one big machine
we're rappas that are spittin rhymes and only in out teens
puttin our lives down on paper and makin one great scene

~~~~~~~~~~~

hey ive never rapped b 4 this is my first time, so if it wouldnt be too much trouble can i have some feedback of how i did?

Ive been faded for a minute but im back on here
dont trip im not go diss you i just wanna make that clear
i see you new to this stuff you need widin ur vocabulary
so stick ur head look up words in the dictionary
u can become a king of this site if you get good like my crew
but we dont let anyone in you gotta be 1 of the good few

Just keep practicin

aight i c how it is, u dont like my vocabulary//
i'll headbutt you, harder than a cassowary//
i bet ya dont know what that word is, yea bitch it's a bird//
and afta im done wit u, yo ass u'll be in third//
i'll be king of this site in just a few months//
and afta that ill be busy wit yo mom's c(_)nt//
im 12 years old just keepin it real//
its gonna be hard to beat me pretty soon cuz my rhymes are made of steel//
after im finished with yo ass it'll be hard to heal//
im gonna be king of dis site, yea im takin da wheel//
i just started on this site and im not 2 good right now//
but u beatin me is just somtin i cannot allow//
if u try and dis me .. man... ill punch a hole in ur chest like Kung Pow//
in a few moons time ill have ya sayin "wow"//
im gonna be here for a while, puttin' on a show//
and ya'll can sit back and watch my rhymes flow//
i know i ain't black that is somtin u should already know//
with a name like Slim Shorty my skin is as white as snow//

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no offense man im just tryin to rap dont be affended

Slim Shorty wrote:

quietStorm7 wrote:

Slim Shorty wrote:

Now I'm here rappin to tell ya'll what i mean
I'm burnin up in here im one big machine
we're rappas that are spittin rhymes and only in out teens
puttin our lives down on paper and makin one great scene

~~~~~~~~~~~

hey ive never rapped b 4 this is my first time, so if it wouldnt be too much trouble can i have some feedback of how i did?

Ive been faded for a minute but im back on here
dont trip im not go diss you i just wanna make that clear
i see you new to this stuff you need widin ur vocabulary
so stick ur head look up words in the dictionary
u can become a king of this site if you get good like my crew
but we dont let anyone in you gotta be 1 of the good few

Just keep practicin

aight i c how it is, u dont like my vocabulary//
i'll headbutt you, harder than a cassowary//
i bet ya dont know what that word is, yea bitch it's a bird//
and afta im done wit u, yo ass u'll be in third//
i'll be king of this site in just a few months//
and afta that ill be busy wit yo mom's c(_)nt//
im 12 years old just keepin it real//
its gonna be hard to beat me pretty soon cuz my rhymes are made of steel//
after im finished with yo ass it'll be hard to heal//
im gonna be king of dis site, yea im takin da wheel//
i just started on this site and im not 2 good right now//
but u beatin me is just somtin i cannot allow//
if u try and dis me .. man... ill punch a hole in ur chest like Kung Pow//
in a few moons time ill have ya sayin "wow"//
im gonna be here for a while, puttin' on a show//
and ya'll can sit back and watch my rhymes flow//
i know i ain't black that is somtin u should already know//
with a name like Slim Shorty my skin is as white as snow//

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no offense man im just tryin to rap dont be affended

Uh oh you done messed up now
im at the top when you say my name you should bow
I wasnt going to get it twisted i was gonna get you some fame
but u had to sit here and diss my poor momma name
she dead muthafuka so now you got to die too
now you cant talk anymore cuz i stuck ur lips together with glue
imma hit you harder than 18 wheeler
its a new millinum now black people are the slave dealers
now you think u all tight got a big head and a ego
imma have slice u bitch ass up i made killen legal
compton where i from so u dont want any beef
ill eat ur ass and steal everything u got like im a americas most wanted theif
ill cut you some releif i wont diss on u again
as long as ur dumb ass dont talk about my mom or ill uppercut u in the chin
I already dont like ur ass so ur goin to have to earn ur respect
u overthrown Vanilla Ice and Beastie boys reject
man i thought u was a homie but ur only garbage like others
Venom and NoDj are the real but u can pretend ur one of or brothers
we have a family line that serves anyone that wants some
especially when u talk about our dead moms we will smash u under our thumbs
So there u have it fukin bicth i kno ur inside prolly all torn
but once again muthafuka dont be dumb u just been warned!

DON'T EVA MESS WITH DA STORM!

i'm a newbie too but i wanna play,
so do i just insult or curse?
whatever it is, i'm ready to take on the course.
my brothers, yo, i dont care
just tell me if this rap is too hard to bear.
and give me some feedbacks to help with my head
and hopefully next time, i wont be a dread.

Yo slim shorty your already getting better man but you do need to stop rantin and ravin about being on top other wise I'm gonna bring your **** to a stop.

Spitting Venom wrote:

Yo slim shorty your already getting better man but you do need to stop rantin and ravin about being on top other wise I'm gonna bring your **** to a stop.

hey spitting venom i didnt try to get you offended
but the battle between me and quiet is ended
cuz we know who won that lyrical race
he rhymin like i just sprayed him wit mace
all he is to the rhymin community is a disgrace
all i have to do is say one thing and it'll erase
all his rhymes,
his rhymes will drown in a world of slime
he wishes he could go back in time
and practice ova & ova his childish rhymes
guess what quiet, my dad died too
cuz some semi driver was drunk, psff he was just a stupid jew
my dad tried to dodge him but his reflexes were glue
he had no time because he knew he was screwed

so quietstorm, dont use " my mom died " as an excuse
cuz pretty soon u'll be wavin the flag of truce
u wonderin who my dad is? bitch, it's Zeus
i can throw lightnin bolts and watch ur blood ooze
outta ur skin..
dont try to beat me cuz im sure to win
what ur rappin should be a fukin sin
ur rappin like ur ret4rded like a conjoined twin
so all i gotta do is just grin
and then hit u on the chin
cuz all i gotta do to get you beat
is throw u in the feilds and let u pick some wheat
cuz all i am is an elite
pretty soon ull be layin at my feet

any man wanna come clash youll get burned
ok let jus drop a for bar

come to your ends with my dick hangin out now whats that white **** round your mums mouth why do you rap there no need its like girls with hair on there need knees next to the girls your trying to be a g but your the one with the hiv gettin gunned out how does it feel go help your mum with her dvd deal
time to finish and finsh in a way so ill finish with f*** you and have a nice day

Slim Shorty wrote:

Spitting Venom wrote:

Yo slim shorty your already getting better man but you do need to stop rantin and ravin about being on top other wise I'm gonna bring your **** to a stop.

hey spitting venom i didnt try to get you offended
but the battle between me and quiet is ended
cuz we know who won that lyrical race
he rhymin like i just sprayed him wit mace
all he is to the rhymin community is a disgrace
all i have to do is say one thing and it'll erase
all his rhymes,
his rhymes will drown in a world of slime
he wishes he could go back in time
and practice ova & ova his childish rhymes
guess what quiet, my dad died too
cuz some semi driver was drunk, psff he was just a stupid jew
my dad tried to dodge him but his reflexes were glue
he had no time because he knew he was screwed

so quietstorm, dont use " my mom died " as an excuse
cuz pretty soon u'll be wavin the flag of truce
u wonderin who my dad is? bitch, it's Zeus
i can throw lightnin bolts and watch ur blood ooze
outta ur skin..
dont try to beat me cuz im sure to win
what ur rappin should be a fukin sin
ur rappin like ur ret4rded like a conjoined twin
so all i gotta do is just grin
and then hit u on the chin
cuz all i gotta do to get you beat
is throw u in the feilds and let u pick some wheat
cuz all i am is an elite
pretty soon ull be layin at my feet

look at this youngen tryin to mess with the big boys
u kno what? take yo ass in ur room and start playin with ur toys
u mess with the best who will beat any of the rest
i kno ur ass is scared of gettin shot so go get u a vest
ur mess is whack bitch so imma have to throw u in this ditch
I never lost yet especially to no young ass kid who watches lilo and stitch
learn lil boy u not even on my level at all
ur like on the size of a snail im Goliath im 10 feet tall
U mess with a storm and ur raps will be done
Cuz u mess with the only mother nature grandson
Im crazy ass hell ask anyone in the street
if ur ass wasnt blind u could prolly look and u'll see
u sorry as fuk and i dont no why im battlin u but im weiling
but u never had a fan the only fan u had was on the ceiling
im chillin and still servin u alot
cuz im hot im everything u wish u was but ur not.
I got crazy skills and smooth like a snake on the ground
but i can go crazy 2 and i can rap fast like a grey hound
Im sicker than most but ur ass need to learn
imma a crazy ass nigga so imma serve u now its ur turn
Imma show the fate of the people who thought they are better than me
Throw u in the sea and let ur ass drown and fill ur mouth up with pee
for sayin words against me is like u gettin married to a man
o my bad i forget u did right now i bet u have dik in ur hand
so right now imma let u talk all ur mess
so i can come back with skill and show u talent i have blessed

U CANT COMPARE TO ME FOO