Neverending Rap Battle II

o ight cool i been on here a while so i'm a vet and people call me a legend on here but idk bout that

lol..ionno tho man..you pretty good yo, im ight 2.

yeah man u goood i seen ur level of skill elevate alot

yea dude...we pretty much ownin this site......LAs aint on this site no more...

o thats good i guess

yea.....

I'm here tonight
Looking for a fight
One of you poodles
Should be about right

Let's see...

I don't care which one it be
Just aim that mo' fuc ker at me
I'll take on your best
Then I'll butcher all the rest
I don't care if it get bloody
I got a sharp knife and I'm in no hurry
Come on you cheap cuts
You gona lap it up?
I'm no stylish talker
But my rage is gona stab and sort ya
Its a one off fight
And maybe I'll be dead tonight
But hell, that's alright
Long as I go out fighting
Read the writing
I'm sick of your flip flopping
Gossip lines
You behind the times
You got stardom rhymes
But it don't mean jack ****
You just vomit and then suck on it
Anger?
I'll tell you true
Here's what I'm gona say to you

WAKE UP
WAKE UP
WAKE UP

Am I getting through?

I got rage, oh yeah
I could take you right there

__________________


nothin personal
Peace,
Endy

yo hitman u wanna take this one or should i?

lol ionno...only ONE true way to decide...

ennie meenie minie mo.... ahh you take him....im kinda tired to spit now...

What d'you think you are?

A fu cking casualty nurse?

forget it
I'm outta my ******* skull

dj quick kid u been on it since i was on here as high time that ages ago blood couldnt believe u still was here when made me new name i was shocked an u still reppin it lol

-1- d-d-d-d-anger

yeah i'm still reppin here puttin it down for all the real mcees that know how 2 spit that hot stuff

lmao, I'm no Newb... lmao. Quick could tell ya I'm not.. Chea.. anywho here's my verse...

do the same ammount.. why do more?? why do less?? just FUCCIN' DO IT!

I'll smash you lame fuCC!! and put you to a hault B
.......Cuz beatin' you is as simple as your FuCCin' Multies!!!
you still on that weak ****......face it! You'll never make it
It's funny, I've been for ages and you still haven't elevated!
I'm smashin' you with a pro style, You don't understand mayne?
Cuz after I kill you.....Well, I'll inheriet you're damn name! (hitman)
People said you was decent? we'll see after I slay your verse
Cuz see.....
Last time you brought heat to the table...you microwaved it first
I'm simply not seein' you but somehow you stand in my ring
but I'm not feelin hitman like assassination just wasn't my thing!
You aint buzzin' **** bitch, You a nice guy in a fuCCin' mean game
Only time you makin' Hits, You're typin in you're screen name!
theres nothi'n nice about you, thinkin' youd see me fold if I went first?
This is my wackest bar and it's better than your whole damn verse
You're not hittin me in anyway dawg...cuz just a bitch man!
I don't fucc with video games much, but it's game over for hitman*
You're punches are wack as fuCC, thinkin' somehow they faze me
Only 'fresh concepts you think up'... you're dreamin' of daisies!
Wack people beat Eryk??That's a thought I just can't bare again
cuz hitman just got dropped harder than the thought of a good Samaritan!!

for the slow pokes:
* Hitman is a video game..


if ya don't get anything, simply don't vote.

*bell rings*

*eryk sits down* me: School in session!!

punk im the hitman you just the pimpled teenager flippin burgers
cuz stickin a 'corpse in ya mouth' iz da only way you be 'spittin murder!'
now less go back to medieveil times where you have to 'fight for land'
and my mic-in-hand i guess i have to enlight-this-man
im like a 'construction crane' cuz i Demolish-ya-hood
you must be da 'corner store maid' cuz you love 'polishin-they-wood!'
listen dude, i know you tihnk you tough but ive heard gay porn-rumors
HaHaH this 'newbie-a-joke' (nubia joke) like im dissin on 'Foreign-humor!'
you tryna face da king dawg you tryna battle wanna the Head-emcees
oh wel cuz 'givin blowjobs' iz the only way your get 'A head' of me!
he must be bad at writin lyrics, check how long the man-took [to drop]
this guy cant be 'in the game' without his 'instruction handbook!'
man this dude tryna get on my dick or summin.. this punk-is-lame
Check his verse, DUKE, this guyz desperatly wants-my-name!
AhA this dude almost over, but **** i aint 'done yet'!
yea duke i am 'hitman' but i didnt need to threatin you da 'gun yet!'
ya head like a 'baby-rattle' ill shake ya and leave ya 'mind-shook'
This is a one sided 'crazy-battle' cuz empty pages fill ya 'rhyme- book!'
ya raps 'doin more work than you' becuz ya damn 'lines are forced'
this dude a 'mental ship captain' and his 'mind off course'!
he to busy to joke wid my name to relize how sorry-he-sound
dude ill murder you straight up but no body-be-found
my 'body is steel' go ahead take a punch ill turn ya 'fist blu'
Yeah my 'name rings' but dont think that this 'Diss-missed/Dismissed U'

*polishin wood=suckin dick*

iyt yall get to votin..

pretty decent, but you're setups need work BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol watchu mean by that?

lmfao, you're setups!! need some serious work. the way you constructed you're verse is like this

punch
punch

that is pretty forced if you try go line after line with a punch.... it's

Setup
Punch

the setup, Setups the punch.. but the way you were doin' it. you have a punchline followed by another punchline.. that's called FORCIN'!..


See how the firstline setups the punch, notice that the line isn't a punch itself.. it's setin' up the punch. and it sets it up nicely.. and the punch is just NICE... Hard.... if you look at my verse, in every bar. there's a connection between myset up and my punch.... but only the second line is a punchline....

lol yup yup.. so you're intro to your verse just got flipped. It's schoolin' session for you!! lmao, jk man.. but yeah.. work on your setups!!!

hey quik, you know who it is.. It's eryk yo.. dropped the Doctor from my name, but the same duke.. lol what's good man?

lmfao...w/e man .....

so ppl VOTES UP!!!