Hello. I'd like some help with what I've written. I'm sure it's got some mistakes in it, including deliberate instances where I intentionally created a bizarre word order (subject object verb instead of subject verb object).
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<tr> <th>Latin Lyrics</th>
<th>English Translation</th>
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<tr> <td><pre> Ave
Ave O Angelus
Hoc rogo exsurge de cinis</pre></td>
<td><pre> Hail!
Hail, Oh Angel!
I beg you, rise up out of the ashes</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> Mors eternus
Eternus et mirus
Mors eternus
Gloriosa Deus</pre></td>
<td><pre> Death - eternal,
Eternal and wonderful.
Death - eternal,
Glorious God</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> O Pius Angelus
Adoramus tuus gloriae
Hoc rogo
Exide noster Mundum
O Aeternus Angelus
Me nolo diutus vivere
O Dominus
Hoc rogo me trucida</pre></td>
<td><pre> Oh Godly Angel!
We praise your glory!
I beg you, please
Burn down our world.
Oh, Everlasting Angel!
I do not wish to live any longer!
Oh Lord
I beg you, please kill me.</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> Noster Dominus
Estuans interius lucto</pre></td>
<td><pre> Our Lord,
Filled inside with grief.</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> Humilis humanus
Sacrifica tuus vita
Et suus ante moris
Humilis humanus
Sacrifica tuus vita
Et noster Dominus ante moris</pre></td>
<td><pre> Lowly mortal,
Give your life,
And die before him.
Lowly mortal,
Give your life,
And die before our Lord.</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> Ave
Ave O Angelus
Hoc rogo exsurge de cinis</pre></td>
<td><pre> Hail!
Hail, Oh Angel!
I beg you, rise up out of the ashes</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> Mors eternus
Eternus et mirus
Mors eternus
Gloriosa Deus</pre></td>
<td><pre> Death - eternal,
Eternal and wonderful.
Death - eternal,
Glorious God</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> O Pius Angelus
nos morituri te salutamus
Sumus gratus
Pro tuus cari doni mors
O Humilis Humanus
illum nunquam potes occidere
Est in aeternum
Angelus vivet pro umquam</pre></td>
<td><pre> Oh Godly Angel
We who are about to die salute you
We are grateful
For your precious gift of death.
Oh lowly mortal,
You will never kill him.
He is eternal,
An Angel who will live forever.</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> Noster Dominus
Estuans interius lucto</pre></td>
<td><pre> Our Lord,
Filled inside with grief.</pre></td>
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<tr> <td><pre> Humilis humanus
Sacrifica tuus vita
Et suus ante moris
Humilis humanus
Sacrifica tuus vita
Et noster Dominus ante moris</pre></td>
<td><pre> Lowly mortal,
Give your life,
And die before him.
Lowly mortal,
Give your life,
And die before our Lord.</pre></td>
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Here's the entire thing. The Latin is on the left. What the Latin is intended to mean is on the right.
Would some of you please go over the Latin and see if it's grammatically correct? Would someone also please check that what is said on the left matches the English on the right?
Thank you for your help. It will be appreciated greatly.
