Neverending Rap Battle

no shakespeare would be shakespeare an write plays an poems

u know if you did u "RESEARCH" before even having this debate did u know lyrical braggadocio spoken word poetry slams where first recorded in ireland hundred some years ago, for calibre one of those people that were taking place then with a closer dialect to shakespeare were probally better cause they were more gutter with it an this is just my opinion but i like that style better I think most people do, shakespeare was the Pop Icon at the time , so he's your Eminem, compared to your Aesop Rock ,who's Underground , you understand ? Tupac is similar to Shakespeare
as Edgar Allen Poe is to Necro



Do you know why I practice Rhyming ? for its mnuemonic value
it helps people remember easier ,and I also understand the value of acoustics an how they effect emotion u put people in a happy state an give them information it goes in faster when there relaxd

I wanna help society use its power of retention to a higher degree an remold schools cause theres alot of lost teaching techniques and activities that should be apart of the curriculum


If you can find me a Shakespeare RHYME , where you believe he did something noone else could ever possibly beat .

I'll show you 5 better , and then I'll write you one that will change your rating scale of the 6

I can show you how to write a rhyme backwards and forwards so you can read it from first word to last and in reverse and it will have 2 different meanings

I can write code in my rhymes


Dogg I see the Matrix

Please never take an offense in what I share because it is not how I intend it.

Let me put it how I understand it, Not that I have it correct but this is how it was taught to me. Edison worked in a patten office, "look at as a recording studio 100+ years ago where rap was not well known.

Well anyways can you imagine if there were a bunch of good rappers that wanted to share there songs or should I say record them and make it known that it was their work but most people did not know about it because we did not have the internet or other means to let people know.

If you were to work at one of these patten office or in your case recording studio and had the privilege before anyone else to see the pattens or the recorded songs, this would have placed you at an advantage where you could take credibility for the work not to mention you would have had all the current knowledge or art at your disposal that would have put you at an advantage before everyone else.

the points irrelevant, Im saying dont get caught up in the propeganda

and you focus on the propeganda

Are you suggesting that it is only propaganda that Edison stole the work of people like yourself and no investigation should be considered so that the credit would have gone to people like you who invented it?

I like your thinking, simplicity in disguise.

I respect your mission.

Now I shall leave you to your wishes, and stop meddling on the rap stage.

im saying talking about edison is a conversation your perpetuating because u were caught up like a deer in headlights with the aversion tactic

my point was made to answer your question about edison would mean im caught up in the bullshit aswell

so in turn , to each there own study and references and cross reference the validity of ur arguements , In hopes u find the truth u seek in your adventures

in my mind , you can go and write , read, record , study , and learn first hand , or you can wait for someone else to tell it to you , and that information is only as good as the persons knowledge who gives it to you


Take it or leave it , when you wanna breathe it bleed it an be it ,come see me slick

Your style is generic.....

..... **** it, it's too cliche
I scratched the track and spun it so hard I bruised the DJ
and choked his neck
Then I broke his neck with my bare hands
Cut Atom's dick off and shoved it up his square ass
Took the DJ's LEFT leg and rammed it up Atom's ass
while he has his RIGHT leg down his mouth like a rabbit hatch
Kicked Atom's balls and made his eyes go red like cataracts
Uppercutted them both and sent them flying like Fantastic Max
Capped Atom and hacked him in half with a battle-axe
Packed a Mac, and stanked this man like a tranny's twat
Shot him in the face like I took a picture at Snappy Snaps*
Dumped him like a suitcase placed upon the baggage rack
Knick knack paddy whack, give this dog a bone
I spray him like Febreze or the eau de cologne
Then send him back home with both of his arms broke
And leave him wrinkled and more shabby than a tall oak

IF THERE EVER WAS A SECOND CHANCE
least of transgressions cease progression and advancement
never to receive a reprieve left with the devil to dance with
his fire and brimstone infiltrate thin tones of stone regret
my skin tone is in throes of neglect trying to hone respect
it seems no relief in sight for this perceived wretched man
but a humble and tepid man should receive a second chance
born on the wrong side of the tracks and negative happenstance
i am more or less in a vortex steadily sinking into raptured sand
in my past i used to attract mad fans while stacking grands
now i'm existing in purgatory verbal storys are my only glory
this is a lonely story of a soul needing to unfold redemption
grave mistakes led me down the unpaved road to peridition
but theres a glimmer of hope now im taking college courses
suicide aborted after the divorces and 4 distorted abortions
theres no morgue enforcement cuz i pray that i need another
second chance like that second hand man afforded a brother
cornerstone of success is bred from the survival of adversity
purging the worst in me the primary beast still lurks in me
repenting sins is so easy when pen is befriending sentences
open my mind let demons fly admist its wicked penmanship
my primary efforts were based on most decried tribulations
see trials were judged beforehand i defied lifes abominations
now if there ever was a second chance to enhance my spirits
i shall take advantage of it while entranced and never fear it
would south africa be sane if mandela was still imprisoned?
well they forgave tyson for dissing women and robin givens
see correctional facilities was killing me stalling my abilities
shattered memories to be rebuilt like new orleans facilities
cashed my check in a flash a ratchet is attached to my neck
but the gun jammed i ran so now i have a newfound respect
for life,its rarefied air i am so pleased to be able to breath
raise my seed do good deeds,heal those who spiritually bleed

anyone up for another turnament plus i got a new rap called now i know ill be laying out which i need some help with

yo, imma tell a new quick story, cause all these dudes now are a bit boring
so listen, while i think quick find a big bitch, who has big tits
make her see that i kick sick, rhymes, i gotta big dick, ya gotta big behind
so the **** we waiting for? that was the door
dont tell my boo, shut da **** up **** lets go back to the hotel room
we can get naked, ya can start namin, the places where ya want me to
start rapin, *AHHHHH*
oh cocks are new? nah i know you a prostitute
but this time ya handin me the cash
cause all i did was work off my ass
so you betta pass
that money so fast that when ya pull it outta purse it
should already be in my hand (pause)
this verse is legit kitten *MEOW*
so imma start burpin and shittin
*BURP, FART*
ya call me nasty, preverted and a discusting prick
but i know in the back of ya mind bitch ya sayin
"this guy is perfect, he must be it"
drowin and beatin ya ass in a, holloween mask oh
thats low, ya so shallow, when ya grow up ya asshole?
bitch dont gimme that lip, i never pulled down ya pants *hahah thats a good one*
huffin an puffin a 4 ounces of gas, cause theres stilll a lot to live
yolo! i dont want to stick my dick in your mouth bitch
i want ya mouth around my dick, and i wont drain it out till i hear
*choking noise* take it out!


recording this now. it should be up on boobtube in an hour. check it

I will have to keep that in mind.

I will be honest, What I did was share false information with you all but what I find interesting is that no one called me out on it. I wonder why.

You are coming along Bambino and with practice you have no choice than to become better, "no matter what it is that one becomes repetitive at.

why thanks reasoning. means a lot. appreciate it.

**** you Shawn white

**** YOU

howd i get that ame again?

Cuz on tiny I said u look like a retarded Shawn white

I've just installed iOS 6 on my iPad, and it's just updated four apps that have got a large amount of memory within the space of 5 seconds! Boy, Safari is ******* fast too!

check it out. just bangin out one verse topics.