Neverending Rap Battle

mind if i use that? ahhaahha. that was creative.

sure thang.

ur S-cuSeS SleepS , take away the S
ur Cue u leep , over ConCluSionS
take away the C break away from the Sene
ur Ue u leep over , on lu ion
ur iron , . take away the U , r lion iron, I,L, ions
n smoke zion

Yo I'm back everyone
Hey I want some constructive criticism. I'm just gonna pull this out my ass.



How is this the free world if nothing is free
We live in a place where pizza arrives before the police
I'm just minding my business trying to get mine
At home doing my thang on the incline
Do what I do simply cuz I love it
Take my level set the bar higher than that then rise above it
I ain't talkin bout weights no mo i hate doin a decline
My homie says im goin to Hollywood he's right
Shades on, hat low shoes tied tight
Find a chick pick a club and dance all night
Drinks in the air screaming "Olay!" 
Whole club watching me jam to some MJ
Can't dance except tonight tryna impress this shorty
The way she lookin at me she knows I'm benchin forty
Liftin up benches with people on it shorty
Get what I want when I want it shorty
Dumbass callin me dumb dumb for doin that dummy
Dumbshit son you ain't bright so you ain't sunny
I get recognized  for not bein dumb
I smartened up no battles I just wanna have fun
Matta fact I'm doin it right now
Keepin this **** runnin but I don't know how
Show me your written rhymes I'll laugh at it
Like a boxer stating he's a pacifist
Oxymoron for your asses want another I'll pass
Aww did I hurt your feelings  sorry I meant to laugh
Haha haha ha ha ha
Ghost ride like Casper goin to Six Flags


Let me know what areas to improve on

multies

so i, take the record, make that record into another record, then that other record i will make into a sample record
then i take that sample record, put it into the cd slot, break my neck, then do it all over again

first of i gotta say this, **** SCHOOL
i just had to, i have more stuff on my chest than Pamela
the gory type, sit the little kiddies down for story time
get um so high they be thinkin they flyin to Mars see
show um a dance but **** the soldiers boy im an army
we crash a wedding then shoot up the bridal party
we messy when we eat, throw on some semase street
we got the munchies
from trees we be swingin on
from the V we be sippin on
find myself peein in the lawn
with my weiner half gone its on
bunch of idiots hunched over
pukin out our brazilian lunch all over
these kiddies once again got me hung over
im tellin ya
these cookies werent just chocolate chips they offered its
ganja, im not an addict, im trapped laughin
start wiggin out and havin back spasms
"oh my god BRO, you woke up with an empty bottle of bug juice fuckin me in the butt dude"
i was just humping you, WHATS NEW?

these little fuckin brats, i tell ya what
imma fuckin kill um, imma **** out these cookies they gave us
and force feed it down there god damn throats till they choke
im not fuckin kiddin you, i was wondering why it cost 100 bucks for 10 fuckin god damn cookies
motherfuckin two ball titty suckin bitch *talking hook* Paul snap out of it

sooooo, back to my story, after a lack of sleep i was happy to see
my girlfriend, but it wasnt my beauty baby
i was just hallucinating, come to think
those were shrooms in the gravy, they fixed us
i was seein, twistas, tornadoes looked like there was volcanoes comin outta my potatoes
so then i chased those, little fuckers but i was in a lost state, couldnt walk straight butt naked started nauseatin and i was not fakin
my homies were laughin and havin fun, but i ate 6 cookies when i was only suppose to eat have of one
its half past one, in fact i swum, across an infested swamp, fell asleep in hemp still drunk
"where the **** am I?"
"you're on sesame street" *cookie monster*
"WHAT THE ****"

alright, i say **** a chorus just lemme say something
imma have these stupid little motherfuckers arrested
AFTER i beat the **** out of there little fuckin bodies
these god damn cookies though, they were so good
not when you've eaten six though, im think im goin schitzo *talking* *puking*

all these voices and noices, where are they comin from
whats done is done, i almost lost it
two nights of this bullshit, i was exhausted
finally sobered up a week after but i keep havin
these weird dreams about bruce lee scooby offerin me cookies, so be it
im so beat, my arms are weak, my legs are shakin
sometimes i just lay here naked thinkin bout them grusome two nights
ill just eat more ordervs
no more deserts, ill stay with pussy
walk in the door greeted by a plate of cookies, shoot me

im fuckin done, i cant escape
*sigh* ya know what *gun cock*
i fuckin hate myself for eating you
bye bye *gun shot*
**** cookies

Bambi I will take it one step further

Multi syllable rhyme structures

Yeah no problem I wouldn't have thought of it unless I read your line anyway lol

**** cookies

Thanks for the tip. I'll work on that and hit you up when I think ive improved

Lmao "your on seseame street" , WHAT THE ****

sounds good homie. multies impove ya rap skill and your flow so much. i think just about every rapper i've heard has multies except for Bizarre from D12. but hes just a fat nasty ass freak.

**** yo bitch in the ass with a tire iron

they found sadam but the wont find me, i be gettin **** in a back seat in the fanny.....

bizarre's best fucked up line

"**** my cousin in his ass hole, slit my mothers throat, haha, guess who slim shady just signed to interscope, my little neices birthday, she'll remember me, for havin 10 of my boys take her virginity"

yo i messed up this time (why)
weeeeel,
i met this bitch when i was entering the lobby
got the room around actin all un-godly
gets naked and lays on the bed and was like get on top of me
bitch you're too fat for me to (hold you down)
yo, so i gotta paper bag, but over her head put it over mine
soon as i got the boner it was slippin in her thighs
she started to dose of then
take all ya clothes off then (hold you down)
the hoes offerin, me some lotion a trojan and tryin to coach me
so i fall asleep when im balls deep
wake up to a pool of meds, incase ya dont remember
i grabbed you by the throat, threw ya on the bed tryna (hold you down)
**** IT was a drag, yeah ya heard me, a bro with phermones and hair of a hoe
what im tryna say is it wasnt no O and a cross, it was an O and arrow
no wonder why i couldnt (hold you down)

my remix of hold you down... lol. tell me if ya understand what im sayin.

yo bambs heres what i was thinking of putting on that track


Wipe my ass with raps and write on dollars cheque the johnny got his hand cocked
you have a crew I have a two bid adue did the dues lids unglued
have you seen my spine always backing my rhymes,
ya’ll ass in back a the line ,aint the first rapper ta rhyme
, the first master ta twine an earth graphic design ,
a verse after the mind , universe blaster devine ,
humans work matter of time ,
im of matter, search proving,
tuning thirst ,bladder on time ,
pissing on rappers watches yelling watch this,
laugh as this ass talk ****,
bout running the human race ,
clocked, hit um to the fourth dimension
take his ridalin
riddling now I have your attention
,im schooling the teacher for detention
,poetry books for rolling paper , flowing vapour
,throwing these books to the cook mmm munchies , pussies
on the way out of mommies tummy I graffiti’d im hungry
take money with out M, Y ,
have one, ON E ,mmm high
u cant do it on empty ,
refuel the drive
, be cool n ride
, girl loves clutch ,loves ta **** , lets keep it above the nuts
seamen deposits
wont be screaming her jaws ripped
gossip lip gloss sip tip profs dick
kill a killer sprays K
ill a iller spray
comedian come across the median seein um through mediums
crystal ball dancing disco balls chanting lick those balls
By the way minus B add a Y it'd B all a Yall

alright. whats the topic exactly?

**** the whores and dames
cause as soon as **** hits the fan
im left with corn on my face..

ahhahhahaah

You know why my hands are so numb, cuz my grandma sucked my dick and I didn't cum