Neverending Rap Battle

No problem homie just like Bambs said just keep it real use the past as a drive for the future you sound like you got an interesting story to tell, try telling it through rap

And i don't know where u live but my advice is to get out of there as soon as you have the chance and get somewhere where you can make a name for yourself and try getting a better job than a paper route make some of that guap and get to a good place

every single word... EVERY single word is true in my bars............

lol , please help me understand this whitey ...

Do I want to do the song that was my idea and I invited you onto it ?
and the style that your using in the beginning is the style I showed you in my song called lil money ?

like seriously nick wtf are you doin ?

I tell you an idea to a song an show you how i wrote it and you take that and go n think ur going to make a different song thats the same thing ?

I used cool edit pro

yes I mastered it

and yup my labtop !

hey mum... how are you...
aint you reamember me that who slap you..
you put me in to a trash can corner of the streets "wow"
and left me to die in a cold cold night you bitch... why....

ok let me take a second to take you 1997
it was a 187 for me in 24/7
you put me to ma grand ma place who got a face just like a monkey jesus crist
she never love ma dads face she's just like you bitch..
what kind of business yo all got with ma dad bitches
if he never knew that you will left his own lil kid just like this
someday he will come to you to be your muderer
coz he love me bitch
always you was ma mum but now you aint
i try to take this **** with me and **** to yo face
some day after i grow just like ma dad witch who loved to you more than you do to you
i will come to yo i will find yo but i'm so sorry for this bitch then i'm gonna killed yo...
coz i hate yo bitch god sake i hate you bitch

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so whitemofo i did what are you said... i try to tell ma story from a rap or somthing like that
ok that is all i wanna say from that... but the thing is "is there any rhythm in it?"
i cant dedicate those words just like you guys doing

yeah whitemofo you are right i love to come NY to learn those things but how sad i dont take any food yet
i just take lunch last day thats all
i drink water as much as i can and now im fit yo..
coz i dont have $$ with ma own

i try to take a job but i am not educate... ppl think im crazy coz i try to rap all the day
im not in USA im in SLA and its far away from to you bro its in ASIA
ok i will find a good job than this
if i can do something hard so i can earn lot yeah i know it
im white but ppl in my country all are black... not niggers but freaks
i also hate this place but what should i do my typing speed is great
so i thought to find a typing job in hear so i can earn more in the day time yeah i guess
i do anything to be a guy just like you
i dont have good clothes to go for an interview but i can find it from the Mr. Thompsens house
some times he give me some extra cash
he is an old man but he is so good man
he always tell me trust the god some day i will be a great man just like my dad god damn
but i never wanna be a soldier just like my dad
coz he dead as a hero but who is remember him
not even his own wife...
im the only one who remember his name except Mr. Thompsen god damn
i dont wanna die until i saw my mums dead body infont of my eyes
i wanna kill em both ma grand ma an' ma mum i hate em all
when those ppl go to the school i will hide in the trees coz if they saw me they laughing at me yo
yeah they are educated but they just know about books thats all
**** those pigs i dont want 'em all
i learn english from the radio by listen to the rap songs and english news thats all
that is why i cant write just like other guys in the school its not cool
but whats the big deal with it i will learn it before they do
some day they will come to me and asking me how did you do all these shits yo
then i will tell "i got a great school with ma own bros"
thanxa lot
hit me back with ma wrong...


your lil bro
RC
the white ass lil kid

I originally thought that the "money money" was going to be the theme for the song I didnt know that was for lil money i was assuming we were all supposed to do that for this song so I wrote to that theme

I wasn't referring to the idea of the song I meant is the beat good for you

U know I'm not a biter prof I see how that was misleading though my bad on the confusion

try more multis. examples.....

levitates
betta place..... LEVA and BETTA rhyme. TATES and PLACE rhyme

lone steps
know best...... LONE and KNOW rhyme. BEST and STEPS.


its simple once ya get the hang of it. it makes your whole preception better.

maaaaan i think i've been sickened with the flu, sippin on boose, trippin on shrooms, cause all i wanna do is puke when i listen to you

or a HATCHET in yo ASS, BUTT you're anything BUTT SHARP

ya need to take NEEDLES and MEASURE, it'll take a LONG SHOT for you to be any better

The first time we was talking about your fight with dre on tinychat u said "we should do a song just saying that money isn't the devil we have the power to **** wit dre" u also said that we would turn it into a diss to p500 by saying money every other word u started to freestyle something like "money money cash money money ass" and asked if I was down to be on the song too I said sure and assumed we were all writing in that "money money ___ money money ___" little did I know that the "money money ___ money money ___" format was actually for lil money not for the money is not evil song I'm sorry for the confusion but I mean I'm not that stupid to take an idea then ask the person who made it to collab on it lol it was an honest mistake and I'll earase that part of the verse ma bad homie I'm sorry

Is it just me or did u all of a sudden go from 10/10 to 11/10? dope

wait so you had a plan on dissing dre? dre from tinychat?

more than likely it did. been listening to Infinite lately. 313 and infinite are just pure metaphor tracks.

Dre And prof had a little beef a while ago they worked it out though in like a day or two

I've listened to infinite and 313 and looking at your lyrics u would never think you were modeling it

the money is the root of evil deal?

goood. its seems like one week im inspired by yelawolf, then slaughterhouse, then em, then blah blah blah blah, all these rappers. so i try to take all my influences and put it into one style.

Yeah it was a whole big thing dre was saying money is evil and prof was sayin its not evil It was your decision and it turned into a big ordeal and prof at the end was like "Your career is done" lmao a couple days later though **** was back to normal

i could stick the second letter of the alphabet up your ass, ya still wouldnt B the ****

yo buck joe ya flowz are so low,old lyk city opa locka yet ur rymz iz lyk a baby sayin tata u cant make meaning to ur flow cos they are bout to get sunk,nigga they suck i know ure up in d red smoke lyk a flock of blind studs ur flowz lack curds mine are hard and thurs in d ear ur smell lyk an ell missed wit cheeze damn ama sneeze, dnt try 2 mess wit d me cos ama tear u apart am gud in marshal arts .is tym 4 me to depart

U could switch it up a bit and say

I'll shove the second letter up your A you still won't B **** ya C?

It's still a great line eather way who said them wissy cheese heads can't rap?

we will talk about this on tinychat .... h0lla

n yo bambs , just inbox me on face book the songs you want done an what time of each beat you want me on , i'll send you some back today!!!

lets get it cracking