Neverending Rap Battle

i hears ya, i hears ya... tho maybe itid be a learnin' experience for my ol bro.

Are u rejudging me and Bambs? Or did your decision not change?

Y'all rejudginininini'n that battle?

Y?

Cuz I had the opportunity for rebuttals do Bambs rewrote a verse a threw in some rebuttals to make it even

Guess we will rejudge it as is....will do soon..got really read it

Ight
Look
let me go ahead and shove down a couple bars down ya throat/
Straight down your arse, in prison dude will call, pound ya hole/
Fkin murdock spittin shitty ass flow, ill fkin carve down ya flows/
Into piecies and fkin toss down ya jokes,/
Got flows colder than a hundred K ice chain homie/

when does round 2 of the tournament start

Soon as all round 1 battles have bin completed : )

ok cool...thanks

ok

Punches- Frost 8 KO 7 -both came with punches but it felt like KO wasnt as consistent with them
multi's- Frost 8 KO 6- Frost used more overall , but KO was really effective at the beginning .
personal's- Frost 9 KO7- pretty much every punchline of Frosts was a personal , But a few of KO's really stood out , I emphasize the first 4 bars great .
metaphors-Frost 6 KO 7- don't really know what to say , nothing really stood out to far.
wordplay-Frost 6 KO 6- but this one stuck out "SLICE you on top of your BED, cuz I'm a CUT above the REST"
structure/flow- Frost 7 KO 6 - the whole read flowed nicer , but KO ur first 4 were solid .


Both emcee's did great , an anyone who doesnt win , remember there is a wildcard slot on the next round for 2nd chance .

are you still gonna judge ???

yup we are whitey we have to judge samys an ills then we will get to yours an bambs

so what happened to apacalypse an dr dre ?

Naw.

Makin a love song... and putin this in it....

We were perfect together, like a black dick and a fat chick

Lol.

split the genesis pod emphasis god sentences
sense the scent a this,smell's of censorship
floating on dead sea scrolls, shouldn't believe everything we told
be BOLD
people ima rhyma loose leaf bruce lee leavin a skull steven segal'd
put um together everythings "Lee;Gul"
Id like to thank my fan ,when the cops yelled STOP ,he got up n ran
only put up his hands for the aersol can or to carry the air n all the fam
hell all the beavers going Damn
Hell all nonbelievers going Damn
leave ya pussies so damaged you can't have kids
never give birth to a thought, thats why ur always cumming for brains
never give earth to a God , turn you in to Prey ,summon the chains
some in the chains prometheus desire a fire in are souls heating us
eagle eyes, see people lie from a mile away
evil inside people, try's when they smile, say "hey"
its one kinda prison steel bars an concrete ta livin
or to speak n noone listens
its another to hold intuition ,
have the vision to look past it
but not the wisdom to look at it and realize it doesn't exist
to be told you cant an you believe it, what if its a myth ?
icarus scripture is flyin too close to the suns ions
a hot urge inside heating his taste for something to get high on
going from corner to coroner ,wondering whats killing um
taught to be feeling dumb, the ceilings uh the limit, filling um
with this feeling some one standing on the roof ,proof, we aint finished
wash rinses and repeats ,still have a taste for truth in the teeth
no matter how much flouride u or I have ta eat
the class is fast a sleep , slowly wake up and bring it back to the street
Wow , you want beef go get a Cow
now , you say you want it later cum get it meow
sounds today, like yesterday was a concert
last night a moshpit ,cops took someone hostage
a few lost kids now coverage is Monster there even the Sponsor
came into life with it , im leavin wit honor,
bang the judge with the gavil ,if i wanna win a battle
im hear to win the war,strong belief in the force
thief intercourse in the course of stealing hearts
find your Love of taking off the gloves an feeling scars
healing parts the favorite savour it cause im never saying quit
death maybe cumming unlike the goverment im not aiding it
humancentipede century of censory nobodies saying ****

The story your are telling is far from compelling. I can't strive to read another word, i'm so out of interest that Ima finish this. Maybe I can help you out by deleting whatever your post may be about. Replacing yours with a true story that will make you pout. Your just a stranger to me, someone I will never see. I'm very honest so be ready to listen to me. The rap you posted for the world to see may be useful to you, but in reality just a blank page, words only the weak will see. So let's not brag an call ourselves the baddest rapper, when all of us know your not the common factor. Your still under construction from all the damage you've received. So don't go out embarrassing yourself about being the baddest rapper, cause in my opinion your just a wanna be with no direction to follow me.

LOL I can tell its gonna be a tear jerker aha

multis,bam-8..white,,7...same thinking as my first rating
personals,bam-7,,white-9,,same thinking
structure,bam-7,,white-8,,same thinking
punches,,bam-8,,white-8,,i will even this up,,bam came harder with the second verse,tebow and fetal position,,cool,,,labium line was nice
wordplay..bam-8..whitey-9,,white still gets it off the encore,recovery,,football referemce
metaphors,,,bam-8..white--8,,will even this one up as i look again,,not many by both

appreciate bam doing his over,,would have a liked a new verse from whitey so i can match up the critique better,,hard trying to judge new lines against ones u have already read,,but this is what yall wanted,,,still going with WHITE by a **** hair,,altho i did even up 2 cats,,,great job guys

Now thats what I'm talkin' about.
Now thats a mutha fumin' verbal -judoin' jab-tuck if I ever did see one.
Now etcha lil' k-cope nameplate onta it and I might have some entertainment this weekend. Either way, nice.

Wholey shiiit... those first two bars are tongue tiers.