Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 04:10 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
You guys asking ME to judge?
KOFactor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 04:27 pm
@Illustraight,
It's a good idea.
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MURDOCK212
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 04:33 pm
@shutdownpow,
yhh im down for battleing ko or any1 that down wid it
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MURDOCK212
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 04:35 pm
@shutdownpow,
but i say we start a new battle forum for the actual rappers that are gonna battle darg
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theprofessor
 
  2  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 04:46 pm
Frost

you see K O wont be a Factor in my knock out route
ask what ima about being physical ,you get dropped in a bout
my fist got more pop no doubt , bars are beastly cant defeat me
lights out match is already over , im outta this world like E.T.
see this K O is easy my pen game picks u apart
not on the level of my membraine ,crazy brain insane heart
perfect combo quick tempered, ima survivor bumpin eye of the tiger
my determination alone K O's Factor ,best for ya ta retire
duckin n weaving , give a **** if im bleeding , fight to stay breathein
body tempature freezing ,you gettin bodied /A Winner im leavin
beginner give me a reason to make it uneven, freezing fingers n toes
give credit this verse leaves you exposed , no defense, broken nose
decomposed, watch as ur eyes open n close ,drawin back the haymaker
thought this was a step up from my last 2 battles , ur way-faker
bitch get a mike tyson uppercut that will straight ****-u-up
some ali swag just to ******* fast , "K O"ENOUGH you Suck
"cant box wit me" that name dont suit, throwin punches so weak
get me all rowled up "bitch" then its thunder to your cheek!!
"striking lightning when i speak" head for cover under a bridge
who ever stays out in the open gets ko'd for bein dumber then kids!!
"flow razor sharp" im slicing **** cleanly like a brand new axe blade
whipin your back slave' see frost kicks ass when rappers act brave
yah a fuckin blue jay is more beautiful then an american bald eagle
true story your fuckin army "gets trained from our people"!!
lyrically frost moves on" after this knockout in the first round
my punches are hard to swallow and your girl made the worst sound
lets go to hurt town bitch might as well give you ya own hurt locker
"then ima detonate the bomb" and give your body to a perv doctor!!!
you ******* bird watcher ' ill hit both lenses square in the center
drive both eye balls backwards so hard ya memory will seize to remember!!
"got this locked" 'yeah because my bars are hard like a jail house!!
let the rocord state frost ko'd factor "this blow shows you gotta frail mouth"!!!!

VS

KO Factor

Alright FROST time to stop JACKin off
Hope you ain't getting cold feet, just hack'em off
Go ahead and send all your friends at me too, I'll crack'em all
Packin bloodied knuckles, burnt black and raw
Hit you so hard, you'd think it was a bull dozer
My flows are colder than ice, frost is what's left over
I'll SCHOOL you if you put me to the TEST
My unborn child resides on your mom's breasts
I'm fresher than crest
SLICE you on top of your BED, cuz I'm a CUT above the REST
Vibin' and rhymin'
I'm a scorned virus stored near torn hymens
But if provoked to violence:
It's children of the corn how I'm slicin' and dicin'
Punch, kick, and stick the knife in
Stronger than a bison, on pcp
Eyes wide open, you don't see me sleep
I'm a rabid animal
God forsaken cannable
Watching you with a panoramic view
Kill you and your family too
Spit more fire than you can hold a candle to
Try, and I'll handle you
Cuz wack rappers are like my flows, bitch they're flammable
Den mok to your clavicle
And I still look affable
Bringin' this rap to it's maximal
Stoppin' you like Gandolf, cuz bitch, I'm impassable.
I ma stop now, so worship me as your savior
If we kinda look alike, ask your mother, and blame HER
This ain't a GAME, but the odds are in my FAVOR
Crown me now, there isn't time for a delay, uh.

Ive already ask Sin2Win to be another , judge an murdoch you can be a wild card judge on this battle if youd like ?

just use the rating system we have applied

and ya guys ,ubskures not here KO already agreed to face frost as you can tell rate this fire guys ....

Great job from both compeitors I can already tell it's gonna be close WOoooooo
theprofessor
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 04:56 pm
@Illustraight,
No competitors are able to judge till after they have bin eliminated !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:03 pm
Samy

You wouldn't be Ill if you were diagnosed wit it in da hospital
its a responsible job to take you down, very honorable
its impossible for you to win,its logical
your flesh was NASTY and you nothin but bionicle
break and fry ya circuits GHASTLY,usin my mind like the white guy in chronicle
its hysterical,you reachin for help when im in grabbable
i'm knowledgeable,i figured out how to freeze ya molecule into a icicle
grab my nerf gun and applesauce and a driveby with my tricycle
lookin for the like button on facebook but you aint likable
i'm unstoppable,the way i come at you is improbable
this plan is diabolical,don't need to school you yet you need to take the practical
the way you fallin is comical,tell me?..how you gonna overcome this obstacle??
i'm gonna melt your dignity and ruin ya maternity
you ain't gonna lose ya virginity for all eternity
you got a chasity belt and i got the remote and code
imagine how you felt when my lyrics hit the button EXPLODE
you besta not put ya hand near ya holster
cuz ya pouch is empty and this is western culture
leave you wit so much holes it looks like a vulture poked ya
the biggest mistake is when they told me ta verse ya
your a cat,you lick yourself a shower and moan
im the 15 year old kid whose settin traps,and this is home alone....
ill grab my lyrical staff and give you a lyrical bath
your lyrically gassed,your chances of winnin is lyrically vast
ILL be on here 24/7,hes gettin old,thats my hunch
like we playin, k said your raps are tamed,and you probabley have a beard like capt crunch
im gonna eat you for brunch dogg,spit out a blog
talkin bout how i hopped ya rank like leap frog

VS

Illustraight

Two dope boys having a really bad battle
**** a verbal war, I should back-hand slap you
I fought you less than a year ago
Started off in a modern way, then a Shakespearean flow
I bet you remember that, Sam – but just in case you don’t
I’ll take the notebook from you, and re-iterate the notes
And just for you to understand it better, I’ll say it slow
Here is my modernised version of a play I know:

Macbeth
Is this a rapper which I see before me?
The man in front of mine vision, gazing a being so gory
I have thee not, and yet I hear ye still
A cowboy rap artist, whose talent is less than real
Art thou not a rapper, but a bad actor
Who has skills which have adapted to a crap factor
Or art thou but a rapper of the mind, a false creation
Who has dug himself into a hard situation?
I hear ye yet, with a style non-existent
No man alive wants to stand up and listen
This samyboy, a person so witless in his prime
Wouldn’t kill me if he turned back the spin of time
Mine hands crush thee, this young wretched amateur
A consequence this be, for a reckless challenger
Go forth, go to! Stray from mine land
You just beheld the mightiest form of my hand

Battling Ill is like a mortal against God
I’ll spread his brain like Scrabble, or God spreading stars
Fold him up like Poker once I have dealt the cards
That’s my “ace” in the hole, I’m a vet at “heart”
I’m a vet apart
If hip-hop was a cocaine market, you can call me Pablo Escobar
Serve you like fish sold in a seashore restaurant
You couldn’t handle my weight, therefore you’ve found yourself against the odds


Loving these drops from all emcee's keep it up guys Smile and Judges holla

theprofessor
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:03 pm
Bambi an Whitey ? whats going on would u both please inbox me an tell me what the final decision is ?
KOFactor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:12 pm
@theprofessor,
Jack Frost. Simple. Coldfeethackemoff. Frostbite. Den mak is the death touch. 2nd to last is hungergames. You should all be able to figure the rest out.
theprofessor
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:14 pm
@KOFactor,
no need to inform me , already got it haha Smile u both did great , very well done

urs came really hard for the first half , i just found the second half a lil slower but again you bith did great

Not hate Much love
shutdownpow
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:14 pm
@theprofessor,
okay,,so we can get the next round going....will be judging as soon as bamb and white say this is it,,,the verses stand
theprofessor
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:15 pm
@shutdownpow,
i have all the verses i think whitey just needs to give me his extras an i'll add all the verses together an judge it all as one piece

theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:17 pm
@theprofessor,
just waiting on Apacalypse to finish his verse and for Dr Dre to send me his .
KOFactor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:19 pm
And nice job Frost. That was some I'll stuff
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KOFactor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:20 pm
@theprofessor,
Figured you would. More for the others.
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theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:29 pm
@theprofessor,
Bambs

the first round is usually the hearse round, the kurt round
yep, suicide on his part, tearin limbs apart, this is a great start
"miami canibal" i tear faces apart, so there's no point in saving it, "jason" to start, "myers" to end
that's what i call triple homocide friend, count it
you and a career? ha, doubt it
bitchin about money, and how ya have no job or stamps
well ya'd get money if we collabed and made an album, but there's no chance
get choked you'd be screamin "oh god damn" like the guy from drillbit taylor
im livin later, of course im sick, you that fat kid"say hello to my little friend" that's your dick
and you need to get off mine perferebly, sorry i dont roll like freddie mercury
get offline, you're new curfew is early, serve you verbally, you're rhymes come straight out of a nursery
book, you're more hooked into my bars than when Charlie Mason was behind um, look
i got the **** that makes your head spin and swirl, got ya lookin like the Exorcism girl
even better, i got the **** that makes ya sit in the tebow position, sneak up crack ya back, ya fall into the fetal position
and ill just ta tell ya, there's no way you're winnin this ****, i bribed the judges man with tips, dough and cash
dont ask BUT prof AND shutdownpaw said i could even kick yo ass

uhh, **** that, your name is NICK, you reppin the RUGRATS
me dick riding new rappers eh? i couldnt name ya any new school names
im into the Raekown, the Big L, Biggie, and 8 Ball kinda crap
you're into Soul Khan aka the faggot jew kinda rap, the King of the Dot kinda crap
and yes my name is SCOTT and i'll clean up that kinda crap, damn minor
i dated a fake bitch ONCE, it was the same girl you always cry about in your lyrics, ohp looks like that punchline backfired
ill puncture you're cranium, im the crazy one,and your LIPS always babble, im talkin bout your labia
labium, same difference, once you grab the mic i bet everyone laughs at this kid, oxymorons set my a ambience
gladiate at a fast pace, he's down to his last face, in a bad state, off with his head, decapitate his rap game and keep hittin him with low blows till his femer rips thru his pant leg, nah im just bragging
ill give my own rap a bad rating and still beat sad baby, i just milked this ****, i think your bars are just lactating

VS

Whitey

Haha This dude thinks he's tough prof come on laugh with me dude
Faggot "you can suck on my family jewels"
After this battle yo you'll cease to live
Your dad named you SCOTT cuz he believes your a piece of ****
I'll Decease your kids make an album? I don't need this dumb fucks help
If your the Miami cannibal just proves you can't get through a battle without biting someone else
Cuz your the biggest eminem biter I've ever seen
Just like him u say stuff you never mean
Me mentioning your name next to em's must hurt his name
Only reason u made that first line is cuz em raps about Kurt cobain
If your such a drug crazed maniac this is the road to RECOVERY
You can't even **** with me
Shut down pow was reading my last battle with popcorn
This loss will steer u off track so u RELAPSE and no one will ask for an ENCORE
You want more? No **** you and anyone who follows you
I wish your mother swallowed you
your last name is foster cuz when it comes to rap you don't have a home
That's why u keep dick riding new rappers cuz u can't find a style of your own
**** your flow This **** is Barbie and you can be ken
Since the only women you can get have a price tag on they head
sittin at home yellin at the doll screaming "yaaaa take it"
You bring a whole new meaning to dating a fake bitch
You make guys like fitty Tyson look ******* amazin
So quit pretending like your mic is the horn of Satan
When you were born and raised in, minnesota the home of well nothing
So when you say your going WILD in the streets I can tell your bluffing
Your state made John madden but I haven't seen you SPORTING good music lately
After this battle youll be RUNNING BACK for SAFETY
And how can you say I won't ever make a album with you
When you send me beats all the time saying oh wanna collab to this dude
Notice how I always write the verse but I never record it
Cuz making an album with you? I can find things ALOT more important
Stop with your stories of killing a bitch and sippin the blood
If you ain't dick riding eminem then your lickin his nuts
Start spillin your guts we know you lieing take it easy
This dude on the computer ain't a shooter he's brian scalebrene


Woo ,just keeps getting better an better alright judges thats 3 for us ... lets get to rating Wink
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 05:45 pm
Just found the whole Canibus vs dizaster battle....... Let's just say I thought you weren't allowed to put rape on YouTube

"had a fall of grace and fell a long way from the praise that he got to being straight misplaced and forgotten nowadays from place to place he be hoppin but he never feels safe cuz all the names he be droppin but he still drops names after all the pain that it cost him he stays takin loses LL cool J basically stomped him the same happened with slim shady even though u inishiated the problem so it's safe to say that today this will be the nail in his coffin"

"look at the treatment I'm giving this old ass senior citizen who wouldn't be seen in a region 300 feet from the streets of Michigan from all the nightmares and dreams of slim repeadidly rippin him"

OMFG RAPE 101
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shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 06:01 pm
@theprofessor,
wow,,,this was a very good battle,,didnt know what to expect but both brought it,,,salute
multis,,frost..9,,ko,,8,,,,,both came with it but frost maintained his in a flow,,,duckin and weaving,,and he rhymed the blue jay crazy,,,scorned virus line was sick ko
personals,,,frost ..9..ko,,7,,,frost dont know much about you,,but used ur name effectively,,even tho the first line cold thing was cool
structure,,frost,,8,,ko,,9,,no problem here,,frost was good,,some lines drawn out a bit,,ko was easy to read,,better column work
metaphors,,frost,,7,,,ko...6,,not too many here,,,the slice ax line was cool from frost,,2ko,,the flammable line was cool
punchlines,,frost,,8,,ko,,8..frost were overall better,, but ko made me chuckle a few times,,,the bed sheet thing was nice
wordplay,frost,,9..ko..8...frost had some funny lines,,and his set up were good,,he referenced some thing pretty cleverly,,ko was more shorter to the point..but the bed sheet thing was nice,,frost just had more back references

really really really good battle,,and the best thing was it was two guys im not that familiar with,,frost seems to have battled more,,more experienced,,ko wrote a good piece tho,the first 2 bar rhyme scheme was cool my man,frost was just more personal,,and his multis was hittin and flowin,,,close,,but frost
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k copelin
 
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Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 06:22 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
i told y'all vinnisane b proxy'n for dis 1.
shutdownpow
 
  1  
Reply Sun 10 Jun, 2012 06:44 pm
@k copelin,
well vinnisane got alot of work to do,lol,,,if ya still wanna judge k cope,yall lets move on and get it completed,,the final should be two very good emcees,,go ahead,,there is some good ones up,,im having fun judging,,and im a lil biased,,but bambs and white battle is what i wanted to acheive,,and prof too,,just bringing out the best in each other,,salute
 

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