Neverending Rap Battle

I'll go first in the next battle to even it out if u want

Whity if you both just send them to me when your done , i'll post them at the exact same time , so noone has an unfair advantage . were not doing back n forths we are doing round eliminations

1 verse per round - except maybe this case

wait for bambs an discuss it

u both did great - i just want this to be fair .

bambi:30/60
Punchlines- (5)
Multi's- (5)
Metaphors- (3) [ya'll gotta turn yer own heads to x-rcize yer own metafears. alotta yers, well; lets just say They Point elsewheres]
Structure/flow- (4)
Wordplay- (3)
Personal’s- (10)

Whitey: 33.5/60
Punchlines- (6.5)
Multi's- (4)
Metaphors- (4)
Structure/flow- (4.5)
Wordplay- (4.5)
Personal’s- (10)

Whitey wins.

I'll start off the next battle then the third we'll send it at the same time so it's fair

I lost

Yeah but it's best of 3

Ay prof.

What's my sttrongest point and my weakest point in rap?

NO IT IS NOT BEST OF 3

Read my ******* messages

1 round comp an winner moves on


MANG Read the **** ...........

your strongest is word play , and weakest punches/multis

None of the judges Should be giving a 10 on personals yet

if there punchlines are'nt a 8 or 9 then there is no way in hell that there personals are a 10

judge accordingly please .

They all represent great personal disses; if ya know what I mean...

A personal Is an attack as Punchline

if every category is less than an 8 then NO there is no way that the personal is a 10

a good personal consists of effective use of punches, multis, meta's an word play


if your other categories are low , then the personals are based on how effectively you use the combination of them

therefore you personals score would be lower aswell ...


Be Honest - **** BEING NICE

u wanna tell the retarded kid he's going to be a rocket scientist , your being retarded .

you can't learn less u know your mistakes

My recommendation BE AS BRUTAL AS POSSIBLE

we are employing the point system,,a judge saying who he thought won is his opinion

Got my ass kickd and a beatdown on first round/
But its ok, cuz ill be back with cannons deep now on curse sound/
Firin shots atcha, standin steep now, I'm worse now/
Like barbossa ill leave ya hangin on an island, pocketless/
Haha left ya ass stranded till the sky night, socklessness/
Lol, in other words, u ain't got no socks!/
Lookin like tom hanks, in cast away you ain't got no spot!/
Dfc makes me laugh cause he ain't got no cock!/

Just practicin lol

well i need to know if we are allowing bambi and white to go again before i vote on those 2 verses,,which were pretty hot by the way,,hard to top

what happened to callin it as we see fit? no un here ever gonna be no rapstar, tellinya what we already know.

"Shall i medicate or shall i teach"...dayng Pro'. gulpdown anotha' one of dem neuroleptic- placebos. chaynge dem scores if ya want... they all the same to me...whack emcees.

Oh my bad I was under the impression each match was 3 battles I read it all it said "24 hrs to respond" my interpretation of that was first person goes 2nd person gets 24 hours to respond to that one then 24 hours to respond to the response and so on and so forth

what the hell are you doing..... did you not read profs rules..... only one verse...... we dont continue.

Aren't personals pointing out a specific flaw in the person by stating something that is true about the other person?

Lmaoo
Foooo, read below I said just practicin,

I know what "the man" said

I'm just flowin, ain't battlein no one, I lost,
U just wait for ur next oppenoent while I'm chillin practicin