Neverending Rap Battle

Oooo I see,
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yeh

lets see what you got.... how about alittle one verse battle... this has nothing to do with the tournament

Bambi battle

Haha This dude thinks he's tough prof come on laugh with me dude 
Faggot "you can suck on my family jewels"
After this battle yo you'll cease to live 
Your dad named you SCOTT cuz he believes your a piece of **** 
I'll Decease your kids make an album? I don't need this dumb fucks help 
If your the Miami cannibal just proves you can't get through a battle without biting someone else 
Cuz your the biggest eminem biter I've ever seen 
Just like him u say stuff you never mean 
Me mentioning your name next to em's must hurt his name 
Only reason u made that first line is cuz em raps about Kurt cobain
 If your such a drug crazed maniac this is the road to RECOVERY 
You can't even **** with me 
Shut down pow was reading my last battle with popcorn
This loss will steer u off track so u RELAPSE and no one will ask for an ENCORE 
You want more? No **** you and anyone who follows you 
I wish your mother swallowed you 
your last name is foster cuz when it comes to rap you don't have a home
That's why u keep dick riding new rappers cuz u can't find a style of your own  
**** your flow This **** is Barbie and you can be ken 
Since the only women you can get have a price tag on they head 
sittin at home yellin at the doll screaming "yaaaa take it" 
You bring a whole new meaning to dating a fake bitch
You make guys like fitty Tyson look ******* amazin
So quit pretending like your mic is the horn of Satan 
When you were born and raised in, minnesota the home of well nothing
So when you say your going WILD in the streets I can tell your bluffing 
Your state made John madden but I haven't seen you SPORTING good music lately 
After this battle youll be RUNNING BACK for SAFETY 
And how can you say I won't ever make a album with you 
When you send me beats all the time saying oh wanna collab to this dude 
Notice how I always write the verse but I never record it 
Cuz making an album with you? I can find things ALOT more important 

The quotes in the first bar is another quote from drillbit Taylor 

Scott is a toilet paper brand 

WILD is a Minnesota sports team

John madden is a sportscaster for football 

Just to clear up any confusion 

Is the tourney judged by how many overall points your given or by getting a 2 out of 3 vote from the judges

this is a track
dfc100[ good time]

verse:
after my parents divorce.... damn how could this happen to me
my father walking out the door is what i happen to see
my mom with tears in her eyes said its the way it had to be
but i knew after this i can't live life happily
i'll rap about my life in till you all feel me
do i walk up to god and ask him to please heal me
you probably think i should rap about the good things that i've seen
but i rap about what i live and not what i dream

chorus:
i never complained about my life i just say it's fine
cause i'm sure people don't have a family like mine
everything works out... nothing could damage god's design
i'm proud to say that today.... dad i had a good time
whats life when your depressed
stop saying your life is a curse stand and say that your blessed

verse:
but i'm blessed with a caring family so i guess i won
when i'm older my father's name is the name of my son
me against the world in this race i'm the second to run
this demon decided to leave
now i can breath
but i won't appear to you in till you believe
i was always sad in till i saw my dads Cadillac
but after he left i always said i wanted my daddy back
but now he's here and i'm complete my life is done
cause i'm proud to say that today i had fun


chorus:
i never complained about life i just say its fine
cause i'm sure people don't have a family like mine
everything works out... nothing could damage gods design
i'm to say that today.... dad i really had a good time
what's life when your depressed
stop saying your life is a curse stand up and say that your blessed

trying this again

i ain't goin let my thoughts win
i'm never given in
i'm about to blow my thoughts....... up into oblivion
i can't let them control me
i can't let them hold me
back..... so i can't hold this rap game closely
but people say give up because i guess they think they know me
you would think rap is some kind of special ability
not when i have demons in my head that are slowly killing me
just letting you all know that the devil designed me
you better not say i'm good...... then laugh behind me
because i get nuts and just let my thoughts blind me
people won't help you when it's your last chance to blow
people just go
it's sickening for them to watch and they just leave your show
people always say i'm good.... tell me something i don't know
this world is rough
everyone who judges always has to be tough
when they say i'm good my mind says but not good enough
telling me that its worthless
sayin i can't rap to no one in till its perfect

also trying this one again tell me what you think

DFC100 :24/60
Punchlines- (5) had more punches an was consistent
Multi's- (5) had a considerable amount more multi's though basic
Metaphors- (3) not too many but still a few simile's
Structure/flow- (3) better multi's and consistent
Wordplay- (3) not to much at all just a flip
Personal’s- (5) pretty much every punch was a personal they just were'nt that strong

Sin2win: 21/60
Punchlines- (3) not many punches more braggadicio
Multi's- (3) not many at all
Metaphors- (5) on point but a lil basic
Structure/flow- (2) all over , nothing consistent
Wordplay- (5) a few flips and letter breakdowns u owned this section
Personal’s- (3) most of the verse was bragging about yourself not attacks , but there were a few notable ones ...

Take no hard feelings , I simply judged on what I saw , however I believe if this were a audio battle , Sin2 Win would have flowed it nice an taking crowd applause , but this is a written ...

Results of the 1st round

Winner Of the 1st Battle in the 1st round

DFC100- 82 VS Sin2Win 79.5

DFC100-Winner

it was aight

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Dr Dre Vs Apacalypse - Begin's 12:12 pm 9th End's 12:12 Pm 10th

Round 1

Bambi

the first round is usually the hearse round, the kurt round
yep, suicide on his part, tearin limbs apart, this is a great start
"miami canibal" i tear faces apart, so there's no point in saving it, "jason" to start, "myers" to end
that's what i call triple homocide friend, count it
you and a career? ha, doubt it
bitchin about money, and how ya have no job or stamps
well ya'd get money if we collabed and made an album, but there's no chance
get choked you'd be screamin "oh god damn" like the guy from drillbit taylor
im livin later, of course im sick, you that fat kid"say hello to my little friend" that's your dick
and you need to get off mine perferebly, sorry i dont roll like freddie mercury
get offline, you're new curfew is early, serve you verbally, you're rhymes come straight out of a nursery
book, you're more hooked into my bars than when Charlie Mason was behind um, look
i got the **** that makes your head spin and swirl, got ya lookin like the Exorcism girl
even better, i got the **** that makes ya sit in the tebow position, sneak up crack ya back, ya fall into the fetal position
and ill just ta tell ya, there's no way you're winnin this ****, i bribed the judges man with tips, dough and cash
dont ask BUT prof AND shutdownpaw said i could even kick yo ass

Vs

Whitey
Haha This dude thinks he's tough prof come on laugh with me dude
Faggot "you can suck on my family jewels"
After this battle yo you'll cease to live
Your dad named you SCOTT cuz he believes your a piece of ****
I'll Decease your kids make an album? I don't need this dumb fucks help
If your the Miami cannibal just proves you can't get through a battle without biting someone else
Cuz your the biggest eminem biter I've ever seen
Just like him u say stuff you never mean
Me mentioning your name next to em's must hurt his name
Only reason u made that first line is cuz em raps about Kurt cobain
If your such a drug crazed maniac this is the road to RECOVERY
You can't even **** with me
Shut down pow was reading my last battle with popcorn
This loss will steer u off track so u RELAPSE and no one will ask for an ENCORE
You want more? No **** you and anyone who follows you
I wish your mother swallowed you
your last name is foster cuz when it comes to rap you don't have a home
That's why u keep dick riding new rappers cuz u can't find a style of your own
**** your flow This **** is Barbie and you can be ken
Since the only women you can get have a price tag on they head
sittin at home yellin at the doll screaming "yaaaa take it"
You bring a whole new meaning to dating a fake bitch
You make guys like fitty Tyson look ******* amazin
So quit pretending like your mic is the horn of Satan
When you were born and raised in, minnesota the home of well nothing
So when you say your going WILD in the streets I can tell your bluffing
Your state made John madden but I haven't seen you SPORTING good music lately
After this battle youll be RUNNING BACK for SAFETY
And how can you say I won't ever make a album with you
When you send me beats all the time saying oh wanna collab to this dude
Notice how I always write the verse but I never record it
Cuz making an album with you? I can find things ALOT more important

noooo,,,,professor,and kopelin,,have to vote,the points are the thing,,we will add them all up once they vote

your battle with Apacalypse has begun please send me your verse when ready , thanks

I already did SHUT ????

82 to 79.5 For DFC100 WINNER[/b]

I think he just didn't read that far down yet lol

lmao...

Hey guys , I wanna discuss this last match - im not sure this is far to judge

whitey your verse is a flip of his , and thats not fair cause you saw his verse an then wrote your against it ...

I think you two should write another 16 each , and send them to me and i'll post them simultaneously ....

its up to you and Bambs ... let me know ?

He agreed to go first but if he wants a new 16 it's fine by me but in the next battle he would have a chance to rebuttal my stuff while im out of rebuttals on his last verse