@theprofessor,
okay,,im going to vote on this battle
punches,,,dfc-6...sin-5
structure/flow,,dfc-6,,sin-5
multies,,,dfc-5...sin-7
personals..dfc-6...sin-5
metaphors dfc-5,,sin-5
wordplay,,,dfc-6..sin-5
total,,,dfc-34,,,sin,,,32
okay,,,dfc came a lil harder at sin ur first line was an attention grabber,and ur tone and sgression followed,,u just have to be more creative with ur metaphors and punches,,u can only harm someone violently but so many ways before it gets stale,,stay away from lines like,,like an undulated fever,,it has no bite,,you are thre king,,the king of ******* ****,,thats not saying a whole lot,,you also could have been a bit more personal with him,,talk about his skills,,his battles,,some are ur lines are a bit longer than others,,so the flow gets choppy,,try writing to a beat if thats a issue,,
sin,,,u started off kinda agressive,,but toward the middle u got a little stagnant...you also have to get a lil more creative,,just think guys when u hear dope lines,,they catch ur attention,,when u write,,do the think that way,,i have to say **** to catch their attention!!!!,lol,u had some multies going on there,,the spelling thing was unnecessary,,,,ur flow was on time in some lines,,in others,,just couldnt follow it with any timing,,ur mispellings hurt in that area,,u really didnt say anything personal at dfc,,,i mean stealing his obligations aint the biggest threat,,,
good job by both,,but u have to remember,ur battling,,go for the kill,,ur trying to embarrass the other dude and catch our attention by being witty and funny...i would have to go with...DFC as my winner
