Neverending Rap Battle

Im new to this rap game so hand me the mic
Ill procede to bring to you all the raps that I write
I hope they aint cut short like the hair on a dyke
so say what you like, but this **** wont ever faze
spendin all my days rappin sittin in a cloud a haze
its a maze now a days all the people two faced
cant trust anybody cuz all these little bitches are fake
ill fight my way up to the top and the crow ill take.
ill be the illest rapper one day and all you bitches'll break
ill be killin all you one way and deciding your fate.
you just gotta wait. im clearin the slate, leavin you in a psychological state
im uppin my weight, im raisin the bar, you faggots can hate.
ill leave your mind in pieced in an emotional state.


well.... yep

rhymekilla and vinni sane

no hate at all. both are lyrically talented but...

ya both need to work on multis...

listen closely to rap lyrics and watch what they do with there words... they dont just rhyme simple words you have to collache words.

take it, faded
business, live this, rip ****

like live and rip rhyme and this and **** rhyme,...

wont even call you a man i prefer annoying mascot
your a QUEEN in the stands like they off at ROYAL ASCOT
awaken around five am the venomous pen hits em early
earlier than AIDAN O'BRIEN trains for the EPSOM DERBY
pop all the **** you want,just dont be sleeping on my gun
my FORMULA WON(ONE),cant run with me like the ARC DE TRIOMPHE
when i see your weak writtens speech bittens it elicits a boner
dont fight fair i kick balls like i'm on loan from FC BARCELONA
SPAIN,doubled over have the insides looking like lobster rolls
keep hitting up my POSTS,that means your missing all ya GOALS
breakfast at ROLAND GARROS i always win in straight sets
these depressive bitches are allergic to fire and straight sex
mental midjets kidding aint nowhere near being WICKET(WICKED)
no CRICKET,no battle,but for these kids out comes the PADDLE
LESTER PIGGOT in the saddle,i quicken with unlimited meters
this ****** backing up like his best friend is giving him the peter
now read this over and over and tell me you aint been influenced
if not,,i slaughter foreign fighters like that bitch LENNOX LEWIS
i'm brutus your personality is prudent,lucky if ya heard me
i'm the one event AMERICA pays attention to,,,KENTUCKY DERBY

i loved the hope they aint cut short like the hair on dyke line,,,salute

Thanks haha. im tryin to get better though.

Btw, I might rap about dumb stuff too, not just battle. so dont hate haha

no disrespect first off..

go ahead Queer, fight your dirty fights, come at me and say all the messed up **** ya like, because for every line ill counter strike until im ending this fight,
so gimme the mic and let the people hear the stuff that they like.
no **** from some punk, whose girlfriend bounces, up and down on my dick all night.think what ya like but your outta luck and your rhymes suck,
ill sever you head and toss your broken up body up in the back of my truck
while i tuck your body in a bag, hope it dont get stuck.
im runnin amuck. im in a psychotic emotional state, but im likin the taste
and it makes me smile knowing your dead body is cold in a case
my words are laced bashin your head like a mid evil mace, sprayin your brains all over the place. The whole time laughing with a smiling face. this is the case, my weapons are words and violence flyin over the place.
never been caught cuz i know to dispose. Thats how i spit all these murding flows and hide your cut up body pieces where nobody knows.
my hearts a cold place where it snows. what the **** did you think.
your comming up short. all your rhymes stink.
your dick is too short and your words lyrically sink.
just bend over and accept that you've lost.
nobody survies a rap battle with me, A-Kross.

haha hopefully that was better somewhat

rap about what u want my dude,,,it can be silly,,but we can make sense out of silly,,,lol,,,,good u trying to get better

men among men, here we go
hip hop cheerio, we fightas, yeah we jacked now
steps a foot in the octagon, looks up, steps back out
cause im an emsees worst dream, they fear me
you're no where near me, believe me
does this look like joke? choke ya out at the throat with a columbia coat "no!"
tongue and cheeck, teeth and teeth, spit so hard i bite my gums
twice at once, im only nice once, till the thirce punch
ill knock ya out, 2 days later ya get back up, and knocked back down
rolled up and smoked like a threaded coiling joint
might aswell put my motherfucking finger in a fryin pan, cause imma bout to hit a BOILING POINT
MC's get destroyed, ya try to avoid, but it's just too hard, too large for mighty, mc's get killed
take a look at my mighty kids meal compared to your little kids meal
nuggets and fries and large shake, ill make ya body crumple and shake you'd swear there was a motherfuckin earthquake, made your mistake
your mistake was bein fake, it's just too late, good luck gettin back on the right side, you die this time
im NOT kidding, your just in the kiddy pool swimming, just getting your feet wet
but get your feet set, when you're in the tebow position
hit your back till ya fall in the fetal position, but im just kiddin


^ no hate....

I can't figure out how to get my head straight
I got ten headaches and later other eight
Look haters, its not necessary to be so mad
About what? cuz somebody rhymes like a dad?
So what it takes a practice, unless you dead
You can make it better than if you got a fate
Yeah might be I got couple of screws loose
Struggle with language cannot wear my shoes
Cannot eat my lunch in the school
'cause if I got a rhyme you'll
Be so jealous off cuz I act like fowl
And no person who gonna attack me like an owl
Hey, is that you, I think you scowl
Old school kid who got express his howl
What you never seen vocabulary like that
Give me some vodka I'll show you my Russian accent
Smack, bam I pull your hair, snap your neck
Stretch you across the table like Czech
Hey man, put that gun down, I haven't done anything bad
I guess its just yet but anyway why you so sad?
Is that your girlfriend cheating with this Vlad
You should kill her, here hold this pad
Put it around her mouth but before put on it Sulfur acid
Don't forget she is slut, be placid
We got put here in this world with a talent to be a RAPPER
To kill little faggot who thinks they can kill scrapper
If you don't have a silver bullets and paper wrapper
Don't even try to fight, just relax man
Sit on your ass, and get out of this planet mentally out
No more games oops I just shot you accidentally again wow

dont worry about the respect kid,,its cool
mail ya remains to your crib i'm a kind a savage
been trying like a muphucker,still dont get ur rhyme patterns
this could go either way i'm copesthetic then callous
misery and then death?,,thats what i call a beautiful marriage,,,,gone

pretty good verse,,,but write it like u did ur first verse,,vertical,,straight up and down,,,like with ur first RHYME/BAR,,the word.."because",,,should have STARTED the second line,,its easier to read and tell where one rhyme ends and the other finishes,,,good **** tho,,

no hate taken man haha

i like ur attitude dude,,,well if ya trying to get better,,check out bambinos octagon line,,,the second line,,u see,,witty,,clever,,and he said alot without using a lot of words,,

the octagon line was funny as hell,,classic,,,salute

now even tho u got work to do,,to be fair,,that was alot better,,,make sure ur lines RHYME,,,ur english is limited,,thats y ur lines dont come off right,,u have to complete ur sentences as a whole,,not broken english,,,stop referring to family members,,all the time,,,i am not trying to come off high and mighty,,,but that was alot better

hahaha

all right its my turn to talk
go jack off in a super small sock
theres no doubt you aint prepared for what im about to say
for your sitting on the internet like you aint got game

im free stlyling this rap that im brewing for you
all these lines are fresh and god dan*brand new
thats right there all coming from the top
i know your trying but you might as well stop

i would say more but iv said enough
i am just here to show ya your not so tough
now if you battle me you should have learned
if you mess with me your gonna get burned

no disrespect of course

there's always **** we can learn... hell i didnt start pickin up on multi syllable rhymes until about 3months ago... we all have room for imrovement.

syndicate, shutdowpow, rhymekilla, whitemofo, ill, prof, we all do... well maybe not prof cause he's quite older and more experienced than all of us.

like the business we be gettin though... i like reading these lyrics... some of um are funny as hell...

loosin up like katy perrys ****
tight enuff to make mileys look fucked up
im fucked up, too much boose in my cup
i havent even filled it up, so my cup cant be runneth ova
pour some soda, you got ta, maybe even mix in some vodka
when ya see me up your block with a quatra
or a triple triplet blade with slit wrist that's no way to behave
back in third grade i had my dick sucked
well i didnt but i wished ta, i missed a, chance
i had a glance at my principles ass, even though he was a guy
i aint gonna lie, i was turned on
im not gay i just hate sluts, beat um up to a pulp, right
drink some orange juice well im sittin by there side
splash vodka in your eyes till your pulpils quadruples in size
and im pullin my dick outta yo ass HOLE, cause im done fuckin AROUND
look at what i wrote, ya think im right in my mind?
these rhymes, these lyrics? who's ta say i aint fearless
splash gasoline on your back till your spine can be seen
obseen thoughts eh? wisconsin mothafucka that's where i get my name....

thnx bro

I hear u bambino..u know I know....I took a lot from the first time I was here..and applied it...improved a lot I feel,...sometimes its better to shut up and observe....I am not a teacher...but if these dudes really wanna improve...iwe can sprinkle a lil something here and there...holla