Neverending Rap Battle

I appreciate the sentament but WE ALL have room for growth .... thanks though you know when I rip cats at battles and I put tracks down its cause of all of you having faith in me ... and being there to tell me whats good and whats not always appreciate the feedback thanks guys : )

thats 1 i switched i thought vocab an metaphors would go nice was'nt a battle verse



Grasp orion’s sword moving ions forth iron horse flying north norse gods discourse drop the hammer pick up thor drop the local lore kick up four corners of this dimension the heavens feen for that dope , think its time for devine intervention this fabric of space an time still on the cotton wheel , pickin problems stealing an robbin , victums feelin no options, super man don’t wanna take on any fly capers , smash in to some towers couple scratches n sky scrapers ,lets party like its cloud nineteen ninety nine , came back to the future ur ******* ambassador man master words , and ya ass’s heard I need a flux capacitor not a catheter , Have ta stir some liquid nitrogen before prof ignite the pen , marshall fighting murphy over the laws , one man on earth looking up to the gods , laughing asking u made us how can u say ur not flawed , fraud, dogg only difference between us solar system a venis , ur omniptitent ominous an omnisexual , I got a penis , not impotent ,fuckin inttelectual, start screwing a verse , doing a verse , all by myself universe, u n a church, trying to put these humans ta work doing ya work , science an arts , ur sick as **** , violent at heart , ur bloodcell’s above hell love the smell of death , I like ur options heaven , hell or death … well yes most people would pick you , but you a dick dude ******* with earth , but that’s how it is the Bitch always likes the jerk , to all my dogs in the dirt… I write a universe , moon n earth , for when ya feel doomed an search for a place to feel human an theres no room on earth , im renting spaceships an space stations ,we have vacancy’s all the moons haven’t bin takin ...


next one will be the flip or punches an structure .......

this is a full verse flip your able to read these both front to back an they will be the same words and different message


Existence ….. end the lies,die or live ,mission’s ahead missin a head ,souls don’t listen, n death open ya eyes ,smoke n mirrors , floating here,toking here,open ears,devoting years ,open minds, dope n rhyme ,feeling this, building it , building bricks,follow ya hearts , follow ya smarts ,ya’ll know...
Existence
...know ya’ll Hearts, ya follow smarts ,ya follow This feeling,Bricks building ,it building, Rhyme n dope,minds open,Years devoting,Ears open ,here toking , Here floating, Mirrors n smoke ,Eye’s ya open, death nlist'en ,don’t souls,Head a missin ahead mission’s,live or die,,Lies the end …..Existence


u'll see what i mean enjoy

That was simply Genius. Respect.

Thanks for the advice bro, but I feel it funny u advice me to work on a field I feel I've already mastered lyrically, though theres a lot of scope to improve. (Multis)
Didn't shutdownpow credit my "multis crazy" when I had just joined in here ? U should read my previous raps.

No disrespect at all Bamb, all I'm sayin is you've left me a bit confused right now...

Alright how's this for multis ?

A vagabond, feeling like Bond, speeding Accord/
I'm frozen with my dick in a pond, needing a broad/
ripping the chord, sticking a fork, in your mind's eye/
feast on your thoughts, leavin your corpse, a blind dyke/
believe in the Lord, nuns cry, when nines light/
clash of emcees, rash and cheesy, when rhymes fight/
weed makes me grind high, ram a GMC into a Hyundai/
see me see you, with Henessey, beatin enemies senselessly/
women need men n cheese, spend pennies get em bend their knees/ baby its a friendly tease, no offense intended please/
war on Star Wars defending geeks/
blowin cars apart with a windy breeze/
I got Cindy in a piece, impregnate a Crawford niece/
more green on my sleeves than my pockets need/
No love for these pussy Adams and cocky Eves/
Gauge your eyeballs out till your sockets bleed/
I was a naughty seed, growin up in hail and storm/
Hid the rap I was working on , was afraid of mom/
Till I came upon, an abandoned bomb/
Detonated the firearm and blew my sane self all over my neighbour's lawn/
Left his vehicles torn, spectacles broken/
His wife tried to get me stoppin, shotgun left her freckles poppin/
Wreckless slaughtering, I'm the menace from Boston/
Insane logic aint enough to keep my brain from throbbin/
Keepin this furnace burnin for all y'all motherfuckers to hop in/...

you aint got 1 shot
with a gun cocked
Concoct
concussive grenades percussives are played
when im busting a blade in ya fuckin ribcage
dumbstruck by bumluck
nunchucked n dumptrucked
dumb fucks think there dope overdoseing on the come up
give um raw un cut bloodsuckers wont see sun up
quick switch ya coffin with tanning beds
leave ya non believers damned n dead
all you bitches cant get a man in bed
all you dicklets had to use ya hand instead
im making fist sandwhiches , making sure ur famine fed
all you internet gossips,eating spam , instead of beef n ham
Chickens
leave ya colonel sander’d for the camera
My grammer show no ******* manners
Elbows on the table ,nutz in the ******* dictionary
Spittin , sick n coughing, choking emcee’s so often
they need to stop him, it’s a problem
Violate virgin ears for years with violence an the words I can fit inside um
Kingdom phylum by class
In Order for family genus claim sanity n mean it
Species boys a beastie
Couple thousand dc’s a pound a cc’s of adrenaline
Albert Hoffman peddling
Albert enstein meddling with his shoes
Look like you trying to string theories together
What r you Deaf ? don’t hear me , never .... down to last letteRRRrrrrrrr....

Drop the hammer pick up thor?.....whoa.....nice!!!

nice....good tool to study as well....salute

Lmaoooo@the cindy crawford line...salute

If I'm mentally dead, I give autism the blame
Either that, or I'm perplexed, 'cause you're just corny and insane
You seem to be making "homos" a repetitive theme
And you'll give me a "hummer" - you're a homosexual being
See, I'm an aspiring emcee with visions and dreams
You're a failing porn star ..... with the lesbian genes
You make yourself out to be a veteran emcee
Because what? You've sold about 10,000 bootlegged CD's?
I'm a gentleman lyricist with a high-level degree
You're a demented lyricist with an impediment speech
I bet you an arm and a leg my verses outmatch your discs
Mine are walking diamonds, yours are packed full of ****
And what the **** is a "molot"? Don't you mean "mallet"?
I think YOU should get a doctor, comrade; you're on the weed habit
That crack has got you wilding like a retarded fiend addict
This Vinni Sane has turned into a codeine savage
I've created a large influence, I was plainly born to do this
If able2know was Voltron, Vinni Sane would form the uterus
Your favourite period of the day is Asshole Time
A 60-year-old Soviet convict, you're past yo' prime
I'll bash your rhymes with a hammer one time
I've just had a Close Encounter ..... with the Yakov kind

This is gonna sound dumb but whats an octagon line?

Illlustraight, more like homosexual bend,
strokin ass with all your weight and havin em cum in your rear end
our shits pretend and im bringin it to a quick end
with my quick pen, **** your high level degree
my ill rhymes are draining your veins dry so you need an I.V.
You wanna get some real skills try an be listening to me.
my steel kills and your aim is bad shooting at a target you cant even see.
this rap is short like your dick when you pee.

im at school and have to go to class..... lol thats actually why

I can't get what's wrong with your brain
Man, you rhymes prewriten 90 percent
I never meant to make you look so dent
Over the head with baseball bet
This guy is ganster, look at his belt
But he is dressing like a faggot, look it celt
Yes I am busterd who you word faggot
So what shoot me burn me, I'll hit you like agate
Where is your vocabluray, maybe stuck in your maggot
So look now, I don't need to write a lot
You just pieced off a monster, your rhymes like a bot
Ok, sorry got to go. Look at the mirror you're not hot

Hahahaha that "your rhymes prewritten 90 percent" is the DUMBEST line ever used on a lyrical battle opponent. Atleast for me it is.

So what

So... Congratulations. Your gettin from bad to worse. DOPE !!!

ya lil nut monkey , go hang off another bannana tree
jesus christs , I nailed it , u can't hammer me
BITCH you dont stand to pee
6 feet deep finnally ur understanding me
ya lil blue oyster , quit running back to your police academy
an at least battle me , wanna cut of my razor blade anatomy
ur still FUCKED , vibrator without the battery
ur grill shut , you couldn't flow with a spill cup
ill ****, ya mom in the hospital with the nurse ,n i still nut
you think your ILL ,foreal?
well hell
Gauge ur eyes out , all he'll see is LL's

Love the last line proff. But u shouldn't have wasted it on a "10000cd selling Russian MC" who probably doesn't even know who Tupac was.

its never a waste nothing in here was name specific .... i can flip this on anyone just the same it's all practice ....

i know this was a while ago but i have to admit your verse did sound like a speech and barely rhymed rhymekilla is a lyrical genius show respect newbie