Neverending Rap Battle

Last bar was crazy..salute

Yea, I realize after readin it it did seem simple,
But ill work on it,

Oh Mary, Mary Where art thou?, Im so outta there.
As i spit this very, scary breath so foul, I bare alotta bread.
Ice so sick, like it carries alotta meds.
I got lames hatin, and they barley even hotter yet,
like nonthin can't be stoppin me, even if I let God and be,
and I ain't trynna talk all cocky, g.
Just know, ya hoe like to stalk, straight boppin me,
Then switch to be on top, play wobble dee.
Shiii, and I Don't even know wtf wobble dee IS,
cause I'm higher than tuition college fee, kids.
To the point where Maybe I'm prolly cease, dead
And still got ya ho ridin on top me still,
Then back to boppin my Dill


Lol wut u thank?

@sin2win
not eating?just asking bitch u can stop retreating
sin2win?then ur blasphemous when competing
no more facebook for sin he keeps getting deleted
if i see u? get ur face took for them bars you repeating
read this and weep it like eulogys and bereavements
nah i usually keep em alive squeezing faces in excretement
no secret i left him reeking a next mc left leaking
no matter black white puerto rican,,shut the **** up
im speaking,,i aint got nothing else to do this weekend!!!!,,lol,,holla

the concepts are there,,,the double rhyme ending rhyme pattern is there,,,im sure u got em,,u just need more lines like the college tuition fee jammy,,ice so sick like it carry alot of meds,,,sometimes when i write i have to remind myself im talking to people,,not just myself,,read some of the professors rhymes and check the presentation,,good stuff

Anyone up for a high level battle

YES!

Start it up

all in fun..

now i may say this is all in fun, but before i started this was already done
i already won, dont say this is over, this time dont blame it on your homework
cause that was last time, i remember last time we battles i laughed and grimiced
you couldnt take it last time, after the first rebuttals you were finished
i win this, i aint talkin no G ****, but you'd be split if i told you ****
you're just like a PORNSTAR whore, you just keep CUMMIN back fo more
settle the score, ill make this one short, so now the balls in your court
good luck in dribblin it, cause there's no air, you couldnt dunk it anyway, you always will come up short


made is short, just somethin to start with

@ Sin2Win
hey do u want some help against all them rappers

^lol

^lol times 2

all them rappers? real student of the game i tell ya... haaha

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CWzJCSOTI6U&feature=player_detailpage

first verse is open on this beat from 0:11-1:14 anyone that wants to be on it i got the title and topic from it..

Title: I'm Infected

infected with an infectious disease i've had about enuff, my penis is feelin rough and im startin to catch a cough
my nose starts runnin, i feel an ache in my stomach, i've gone too far, **** i've done it
im nothin without this bitch, but this bitch just got me infected, im bein detected for diseases
diseases on my penis, and everyone in the waiting room of clinic knows the reasons
i just pulled a braun on this bitch, this clinic is a nightmare and ****, it burns when i piss
so i start sweating then think to late last night after the wedding, she threw me on the bed i was ready
but i forgot one thing, i never knew it would sting, this bad, my mom and dad, oh **** they're gonna mad
im gonna die right on the spot afta i tell them what i have, and it's bad enuff i just broke up this bitch
now she's got me infected and **** so i might aswell get er back this bitch, just ta break her neck and her back
and slam er against the ground until it makes her snap, cracks the black and i aint mad
im just pissed cause the hoe just ditched me for a sissy ass bitch

TOPIC^^^^^

Look at this redneck inbred product of incest Thinkin I care what he says 
I'll let this vetrans neck spin to get wins
 I could flip your style to as you can see I can spit that crap 
Rhyme as much as possible so I can say its a rap 
Ur filled with hopelessness leavin with an open wrist 
*I'm only being foul with the words cuz I know you'll miss 
I know I'm a cocky ass but I'm takin it to new levels 
*Get knocked out first round like the blue devils 
U can't rape a girl u aren't capable so quit sayin your insane 
Nobodies heard of you so quit actin like your big in this game 
Just Shut up quit tryin to be tough to be honest I had enough 
*You only mentioned porn cuz in this battle your getting fucked up*

aight hold up hold up, im involed in porn and fame, go back to 96 and cock block your dads game
this inbred slash redneck is gon fishin and im lurein um in
im gonna REBOUND your ''foul'' words even though ya only used two of um
and you will get knocked out first round, ya fell, i think i mighta **** and pissed myself, cause you just DISSED yourself
to be honest i never raped a girl, i just **** um, beat um up and stuff um
make um suck my dick while they're tied up and shackled to the oven
so i guess that's not rape, and im not insane, im out sane, cause im out killin, shootin inosent children like the one right here that im drillin
you'll open wrist? hell ill open your fist, cause we all know that son of bitch has never been clinched
and im not usually a dick to women, i just usually put it in um, cause im fuckin ya up punk
no one has ever heard of me? or you? not to crude or rude but me myself have never heard of you
so take your half ass rhymes and hit the hills, and bitch you just got fucked and killed by an inbreded hillbilly redneck how does it feel?

Lol, I'm just a solo artist trynna make it, u know
Just like everyone in the game, that's all,
I've been told that my flow patter is good, and I'm rarley off beat, when I flow at kickbaks,
I'm good with that so I don't have to worry about it, I. Haven't expose myself yet because I wanna work on my flow lyric wise, u know, and after readin professors shyt, dam all I gotta say is I definally need work on on lyric wise nah mean, so yea I'm just here self teachin myself,

what artists' do you listen to? i can give you a lot of artists to listen to for good lyrics if ya need any..

I like eminems, promise nyc, biggie
You see, bein that I'm interested. In flowin mutiple rhymes but realize some lyrics are easy words,
Now wat I'm trynna do is master to a point where I can flow with eminem style but with immortal techniqe lyrics, u know what I mean? Like somethin like that, that's my goal

well are you a begginer? just started MCing? cause once you get in touch with a lyrical talent you'll start to develop your own flow. there are so many people out there who copy eminems style, i used to be guilty of it. most rappers are. but i just learned my own lyrical talent about 5 months ago and now i've picked up my own style. so what im sayin is develop your own flow or whatever comes natural, sure you can study eminems lyrics, biggies but they developed there own flow at some time in there life and now they go down as the greatest. im not demanding you to get your own style but it makes it more interesting when you do your own thing. but you ever heard of Big L? he has some dope lyrics. and maybe Royce Da 5'9 his **** is rare. that's what i have for a you as a begginer cause i go caught um in some **** as in tryin to reanact eminem. usually get's you no where cause he's already did the ****.