Illustraight , AKrap , Whitemofo and bambino...thanks btw.
ILLUSTRAIGHT - that was fuckin creative man. Respect.
BAMBINO - homie I don't do vocals and ****. Just lyricism for a hobby. Btw I'm an indian livin in india, so no real scope for rap here at all. The only rapper known here is Eminem...the underground is literally unknown.
Here's another one : CHECK IT YO
This a soldiers game, holdin aim,roll n play/
things been changed ever since the homies came/
on the scene/
with a beanie and a bandage on they chin/
bigmouths versin raps spat through collagen/
napkins ripped with a cocky pen/
spit blood just chokin on oxygen/
on the microphone, jokin like they high and stoned/
sly yet slow, my styles a reaction from an acidic flow/
raised up where these rapists roll/
tryin to earn pennies with sex tapes sold/
where men are cold and lil dames die broke/
instead of toys these kids toy with dope/
**** the cereals ,get wild with coke/
revolutions a joke, politicians all croak/
Live life spinnin smith & Wessons and smoke/
rebels fight with they souls/
bodies sliced in the throat/
guns smokin in barrels/
apparently, its christmas with no fuckin carols/
cause the voices all dead in they graves/
women forced to give head to the 'brave'/
Inhalin gunpowder at night, lead in the day/
Peacetalkers said they'd be back, and they then just sped away/
We don't expect to be saved, faggot greasetalkers are they/
Swords strapped to our backs, keepin backstabbers at bay/
Self protection's our play, know I'm ill with the bass/
Reppin my place, switchin topics with grace/
These comics a day, keeps my opponents away/
These punchlines all flared, metaphors just go crazed/
Makin my mind all heavy to bear, leavin my rhymin skills dazed/...
Honest rating anyone ?