Neverending Rap Battle

Well I assume your lying because if you had these amounts of money your rapping about you wouldnt be here Tyler the creator and most mainstream artists aren't the kind of artists you want to mimick

Don't rap as if you were another artist write for yourself don't pretend your another person

Change up the rhyming words u rhymed the same syllables the whole time

Yea, I dont have that kind of money but I will have , if it counts Lol
I aint mimickin him, I suit rap that way. I rhyme what is on my mind, mostly nuthin but ... I will try to improve
thx

That kind of music is crap anyway study things like old eminem and current underground music and styles similar to that that is true mcing

what wrong with Tyler, he sick
But I'll try to do that, I ain't sayin he the best but dope lyrics ... U can hate but cant deny skill
I'll put my picture so you can see what i look like

That means not, ha?

He's ok he doesn't really have metaphors from what I've heard of him

Not just the "old eminem"

The "new eminem" brings more metaphors to the table

All depends on your style of rap AK. Tyler the creator is trash though.

Metaphorically he's good the topics I feel are different and he sold out a bit still a great mc though

But once you've been around for 16 years in hip-hop like he has, you're gonna' be sold out sooner or later. And if anyone like us were ever in his shoes, we'd be lovin' life. Funny thing is though, he probably would like it better being Slim Shady 1999-2002

But he's still dope no matter what.

We aint sayin he's bad , he's dope and ea all know that but I like sick lyrics more than metaphors. All I'm sayin is that Hopsin and Tyler will rule in few years

If Tyga and Soulja can sell some **** ... ya know what i'm sayin?

We got better lyrics than soulja fo'sho man !

About the pic, is fucked up so ... lol

And I'm still not, aren't I?

The industry doesn't respect talent anymore eminem wouldn't be an artist if he wasn't already an established artist if he was just coming up nobody would give his style the time of day it's all about "swag" and "fuckin bitches" the game is now about the image not the music personally my favorite artist is a nerd lol soul khan
"I throw a penny in the well without wishin
In hopes that it floats with another's ambition"
You don't find that stuff in mainstream anymore
Rappers nowadays could have talent if they didn't sell out and make themselves look stupid by rappin bout retarded **** and brainstorming the youth into a dark age of stupidity and laziness
Lol don't worry bout a pic aha
I don't know what u mean by not in the last part?

Is my freestyle worth that penny, that was the last part
Agreed, I'm just fittin in

You don't need to just fit in though music is about expression and rap is like no other because you have more options with words don't waste your talent rapping about a bunch of crap make a difference rap bout things that are important!

*huming*
*dog bark*
*sound of body hitting the floor*

they say im crazy, when i walk around
from the break of day with a saw and a chain
till its cold and freezin rain
while im walkin a black and gray, great dane
with a blood stain on my white tank
when an old bag, walks my way, with glasses and a cain
do some crazy exorcist ****, go insane, hit him in the head and walk away

that may be stupid, but im more like a lunitic
and you can try and hold me with a crucifix
but that wont do the trick
and in order to be wicked like me
you're gonna' need to splash hot easter water on satans dick
and THAT'S when you can call someone sick


workin' in proportions on this one
just puttin' schemes and transisitions together

I dig that but I cant rap bout somethin I dont know
What to rap about when your white and from hood that looks like India -.-

Girl trouble, family trouble, personal demons, scketchy experiences, hardships of Croatia, etc

Tell the story of a young boy dreaming of being a hip hop star when he's stuck in an anti hip hop world

I'm new to this site...just started writin a year back. Crazily inspired by Em, Nas and Immortal Technique.

Ayo check it out

I'm adrenalin blazed/
venomously caged/
Emotionally raged and I leave haters disgraced/
craters of hate/ erupting at an alarmin rate/
I used to be a lunatic 'fore I was grazed/
By the Hip Hop bullet that struck me in the head/
Body fell like a pindrop, left my thoughts for dead/
caught red for stoppin a Fed, poppin a lead/
bust nuts in his daughters face/
Gotta give me cred, sole remainant of a slaughtered race/
Locked in this age, I grew up listenin to Shady deeds/
Rollin tough like these ladies be/
Throwin up till my vocals bleed/
nobody ever gave a ****, took me like any whack local seed/
Livin in a household stacked with coke and weed/
Went Tyson on bullies, like Apollo Creed/
A Rocko that left these sissies fallin on their broken knees/
Pissing fear in defeat/
they say bitches sow what they reap/
Or reap what you sow, cause we cheats takin dough/
Fact though, I got more ammo than a cheap east coast broad/
Gangland violence, gangs bang apartments/
Where the love at, homies hang in silence/
I'm like the monster that Frankenstein sent/
Grab a hind then, whip a nine ten/
Wannabees fight when/ their bitches despise them/
Rhymin through evil times has got me realer than a sliced gem/
Pop enough evil through a critics brain that'll leave his eyes bent/.../... SIMPLY RHYMING

Please give me a honest opinion on that ^ anyone.
And let's keep rhymin.

I'll try to do that but I'll kep a couple of sick lyrics in that ****
Now just wait till I come up with it

Hey, not bad at all. You're leaning towards a Nas style rather than an Eminem/Immortal Technique flow. Great verse overall.