Neverending Rap Battle

I'll go, either tonight or tomorrow.

The Warm Up
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They say I'm the Chi Town Rose
Got swagga with my clothes
The Tyga on the microphone
A sneaker head world known
To all the haters that think they can ball
Show you why my cross bout to make ya'll fall
Swift to the right and hard back left
Got you on yer heels and you bout to get wrecked
Go off yer heezy like some AND-1 play
Then burn you at the rim like a fried souffle
Try and get a block, you ain't meat me halfway
I'll meat you at the rim like a flight delay
I'll pack your **** hard into disarray
Give you 6 pumps, but you know I ain't Kobe
To keep up with me? dexamethasone
Better contract me on some **** like Nike
I control the court, I'm the next almighty
Your shot goes and of course its a miss
I heard you got a shot, pretty sure that's a myth
Now I get the ball, this is gana be sick
Dunked on you like D-Rose to Dragic!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eaLKgsIZ1Q4

I see u already forgot bout me lol

Why you think title is called "The Warm Up"... I'm still warmin up bro just give a day or two till I'm feelin it. =P

Lol Hurry up bro I got mad lines planned out to use on you lol

You two finish up your **** then. After that's over, GJay and I will go

See that's not fun. -.- you got your **** planned while I do everything off da dome... aight I got you tomorrow when I got nothin better to do.

Making them scared as he goes ahead and shout
Now i get why some things weren't allowed
It's too late now to try to take a step in good direction
Cuz people will just remember you as their detention
Yeah the world is a crazy thing for me just to be in
Tell me lord, why did you preach me this way of livin'?
Again, this is a masterpiece of unwritten and unknown history
Because there's nobody willing to tell you the whole story
In it's very own perfectly disguised matter
No matter what kind of ******* weather
It's the ******* same day, same clothes
But now these clothes are ready for some change though,
Ima buy a new pair of shoes just to get me running for good
To never end up in the place again I just pretty knew too damn good
It stays silently and cautious on the background
Waiting patiently for a day to come back around
And it did, and i was swallowing everything
To not give in, at least give me props for that thing
But it's too late I've started to change
And my insanity was going out of range
Yeah it's like being the only one that understands
That your leftbrain and rightbrain will never mend
Come on dude man up, why the **** so insecure
Well cuz you dont know half the troubles that have tried to lure
Me into the same pattern again i used to evade
But trying too hard makes it not go away and fade
Yeah i barely can wait until that blessed day
Makebelieve is something that i can't deny
But then again believing is too hard for me to try
Because everyone i cared about has let me down
Now they are watching me slowly and carefully drown
I tried to make a squeesy sound
LIke i was getting choked, then i get the frown
From those faces standing in the crowd
Lost inside in these feelings that i cannot hide
Makes me wanna go down on my own riptide
Yeah the arising pain is just too much for me to stay
Wish I could wish it all go away one day hopefully today..
All the things that i have heard from all of these people
And supposedly loved you right on the sequel
Damn **** those lies, yeah what a deception
Now i'm starting my own lonely redemption
But hopefully salvation is on it's way

Please Comment On This Freestyle

I mean I got a couple punchlines I thought up lol not whole verses

To everybody Claiming there raps are coming off the dome, research the definition of it, i doubt u type as fast as your brain thinks.

It's a rap forum, so in this case it would place its definition under a different criteria. If I was actually, u know rapping "live" then u could use its original definition.

Yeah man

Glad to see u back man

so define it under forum circumstances

I have tons of punchlines written on paper for either this kind of battling or battling in general. I don't really like to use the "good" ones a lot but I will sometimes. So I don't think anyone really does it off the dome to be honest.

I need some help. I cannot think of any metaphors! Nothing!

Current events is an easy one (politics, sports, artists, etc..)

Like so much for being the rap king
your like Lebron James good but can't win a ring

U know something most people know about

Bambino, we know
You must be on this page for another reason
You see-oh, Bambino,
This place is just for cussing not discussing, please son,
Admit you're called bambino
cos you have a baby's weeno
and your looking for a paedo
on this site all the time.
And monkey smuggla
I'ma cut your jugular,
you ******* gay cum guzzler
stop yapping and rhyme.

I've been through the struggle, I've been through the pain
life's trials and tribulations got me insane
all I'm left with is shouting your name
holding onto you because you're all that I got
surrounded by traitors like judas, so I'm shot
I'm losing focus, who am I? I forgot....
looking my self in the mirror disgusted in the reflection
I am nothing but lonely-ness and rejection
I'm feeling weaker after every ******* injection
but I can't stop this obsession
I feel as if its my resurrection
but it only leads to more rejection
I always way heading in the wrong direction....