Neverending Rap Battle

I'll take my time pretty bitch, I'll make you mine
I'll make sure all the doors are locked and everything is fine
This is Inception, **** I'm playin' with your mind
Tell me why you're frettin' bitch
You don't think I'm takin' you serious?
You don't think I'm a man of my word?
You don't think I got you in the palm of my hand?
I like you honey, I'm Winnie the Pooh
Bitch, a lamp is easier to turn on than you
Come to my place I'll show you what we'll do
Hancuffs are in the nightstand
That's right bitch, I'm chainin' you the bed
You don't understand?
Well that's okay cause this verse of mine is meant to be short
Hope I did't ruin your plans!

Rap dude.
Stop listening.
Make a freestyle or something.

i really dont know what to say
i passed this door and it was out of the way
by accident i found myself here
and im facing now that which i fear
i cant rap and i cant perform
the the worst of the worst has just been born.
pass along that mike
i'l just take a hike.
**** man, someone stole my bike.
please man, turn the page
i'm passe you guys are all the rage
i cant rap worth ****
i just want to quit
and go away.
my lyrics couldnt make a belemic puke
even if it was topped with a pile of poop
theyre not sick, not dope, not even clever
if i stopped here, it would make the world better.

Good job!

how was that?

You stole Eminem's "On Fire" line. Belemic puke, and poop.

On Fire by Eminem. "You couldn't make a belemic puke on a peice of fuckin' corn and peanut poop!"

It's okay though, still good rap! Don't diss yourself more than the other person in your own rap though, just a tip.

I thought I remembered that line from somewhere

Recognized it right away.

yeah. half way though, i called my brother over to show it to him. i didnt know at the time that he was stealing lines... he wrote the last bits...

yeah. it was a joke!
i suck at rapping. so far that's the best i can come up with!

Lmao. Sounded like a poem.
But you still good with your rhyming
Im just sayin', if you wanna be like proff, illustraight, and charlie,
u gotta start spittin
battle people
call them out
It'll make you better, AND can improve ur english too
Thats what Im doin. Listen to Bambino
He know what he talkin' bout
(And please, never say you suck at rapping, it makes you look bad)

And Charlie
Multisyllables are not needed to make a rap
Its just another form of rhyming that rappers like Eminem use

Well u gotta admit it sounds better then
hey hoe come over here
let's go grab a beer
and start ******* up in here

thanks for the shoutout in ur last comment, im only 16 btw i hope to really work hard starting soon with music by recording vids, getting good equipment. Gettin successful on youtube.

And technically no they are not needed to make a rap, but if u want to be recognized as a good rapper or a awful one they are the basics. and its not just eminem, anybody considered a good rapper by the majority of rap fans will use multis

16? Damn I figured early 20's What equipment do u still need I got a cousin who has a studio and knows alot about that

Hell yeah. No problem.
I'm only 14, and ****, hit me up if you ever got some vids on youtube
I'd love to listen to them
And I love how you doin things wit yo life
Keep it poppin lil Charles

i didnt say a word about being taken seriously ... Ill's said i was being dehumanizing an I told him not to hold double standards !!!!


bambino just cradled his balls

PS , im done with this site , ya'll can have it ....


charlie keep doing it homie much love

to the rest , maybe one day , you'll realize i was trying to help you ....

He meant saying all the **** u said bout bambino not what u rapped

Don't give up Professor because you will end up like stinky! Making love to your hand!




Yes I do think you were correct about some of the things you said [not all] but to call people out on it can be degrading to them and could be humiliating for us if they shared audio to back it up!

I think that it may be possible to share your ideas threw your rap in away that is not directed at a certain person but rather your views about how some people are acting.
I do think that we need to be called out in a indirect way on our fantasy thinking but to do it directly may be a job for our mothers and fathers.

Life sucks for most of us so we do exaggerate about some things to make ourselves feel better.

This is a rap battle forum so I do not know why we have so many thin skinned people. I guess it only shows that you all have feeling.