reasoning logic
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 07:33 pm
Why cant you all just get along? Old stinky could teach you all a thing or two!

Hamilton will have to wait this one out being he has no sound!

**** IT!


Bambino
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 07:35 pm
I'm a down right sick ass hole
Call me Elton
I think you really diserve this
I'm dirty call me David Furnish
Put me on the Titanic
I'll sink it, I'll move the world
Trust me, they'll feel it
All the haters will be kissin' my ass
Are my balls hangin' low enough to the ground for ya?
What you don't get it? Don't make me show ya
I ain't ever been a woopie
I don't got the cushon under my ass
I got nothin' prove, I already have
There's a monster behind my back
He's watchin' me, they're tellin' me to get off my ass
And show em
Proffesor
Just because Imma student doesn't me I can't kick the pedestal I put you on
Tell me are you havin' fun?
Do you like the way I'm kickin' you when you're down
You're a dead beat
Seriously, the way you rap on them flows, you put me to sleep
I got nothin' else for you so I'm movin' on
Hittin' you outta' the park, can you feel me?
I go by the name of Ryan Braun
The ball is up, up and now it's gone
Sayin' I'm fake I think you need a test before you leave
Right now it's between you and me
Jab's at the chest of your ego
One more cut before I blow
The fuckin' uppercut to your face
All right, fine I think's it's time for me to go


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Bambino
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 07:37 pm
@reasoning logic,
Haha! You swear, Father Damien? What's the benediction today?
reasoning logic
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 07:40 pm
@Bambino,
If you cant beat them you might as well join them?
reasoning logic
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 07:56 pm
Does anyone know who the rapper is in this video?

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Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 08:31 pm
@theprofessor,
A little verse for our buddy Theproffesor

Don't talk **** when the same **** applies to you
You send in mixtapes to all the labels but nobody replies to you 
Your all wrong this is not a subliminal song  
It's a straight up diss to those big dicks who think they run this ****   
When they don't even do ****!
Thinkin they a verbal masterpiece yet they shoved in the back seat 
Next stop for you is 6 feet under 
In a dumpster under my last three victims behind burger king while u get covered in old mustard
Even with all that mustard 
u can't muster up the courage to admit that you should probably stop talking **** 
Cuz I can flip that **** around and throw it right back at you
So watch what you type and I'm not the type to gossip 
But I hear this Dude went to a Shrink last week and this is how it went
Prof: "aight doc I got a confession, I have an obsession for talking ****"
Doc: "I'm sorry but there's nothing I can do about it"
Prof: "aight but can u cure my depression"
Doc: "I'll see let's start with a question, what happened? Did u get fired from your profession?"
Prof: "no what happened is during my last rap session I didn't leave an impression and the rest of my crew said I have no expression so to take out my aggression I started talking **** to this guy bambino I shouldn't have but I made a mistake then I started listening to all that **** you know songs by drake idk where my head is should I just quit? Or should I keep talking ****?
Doc: "no quit talking **** And learn to take a hit now I want u to go home grab some chrome and put a bullet straight through your dome" 
Peace proffesor  
           
charliesforce
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 08:57 pm
@theprofessor,
i do it for the love of the game but also wanting to be famous for music as thats all i want to do in life no matter what, hell, ill be depressed as **** if i was not doing what i love and known for it when im older, i think u could gimme some good advice as im kind of in a strange situation.

I love rap so much like i said its all i want to do, but in the past 5 months i have had no motivation to write anything as i get to distracted by everything and its killing me cuz i aint getting anywhere by sitting around but im tryna perfect my career, i want to do everything in the next year or 2 meaning recording my own music videos with high quality well thought about videos...but i need a good camera, i also want a sound worthy mic as ive compared the studios (its actually a studio) i work in sound quality with up and coming rappers and theirs is a million times better, i work in a booth and everything but its got a horrible noisy.loud sound to it.

have u got any advice on getting myself motivated again like i was last year? im motivated to succeed but not to take action if you understand? i think the main thing is because im a perfectionist and i have no access to unique instrumentals im constantly looking for the perfect beat already used by famous artists..also do u have any advice on getting good equipment?

id appreciate it a lot man u seem to know ur stuff, also share the passion i do. peace
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Wed 3 Aug, 2011 09:10 pm
@charliesforce,
Yo how'd it go with that uk artist u was talking about a while back? And if it helps I think you've just lost track cuz of lack of success if u truly love the game that should bring you enough inspiration to look back at some of the great stuff you've written and get back into that zone life experiences are also often the best inspiration cuz there's people who write about people who put him down and said they would never make it to family whether it's good or bad to girls who fucked them over and everything inbetween don't give up cuz of all the rappers I've seen come through this forum your one of the most talented
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 01:24 am
@reasoning logic,
look im going to make it simple as **** for you guys ... hey bambino , wheres your mixtapes ? are your tracks posted on youtube, myspace , or soundcloud ?
can you prove what your saying ??? or just speaking out your ass trying to present a false image ?? in order to bigg yourself up???

I think so

and if I remind this conversation is only about bambino saying he's beaten me an he was better at rapping initially and he call'd me a biter !!!!

so congratulations you group of dickriders , you've suceeded to fall for his ****


I rap on here , to do my share to give back to the hip hop community ,
I often give ya'll tips, you use an works
or give you advice askd for ...


remember bambino said he could beat me i put down a verse an he didnt respond instead told us he was to busy currently ,

but not busy enough , to later on write a verse calling me a biter and writing a whole bunch of this bullshit !!!!

I live in canada , do you guys know how my buddies record with snowgoons like I do with my boyt in toronto , i record my **** here and send them it via internet it's a common thing , cause real emcee's don't waste time an money ...

I deff's haven't made it ...

talent an experience do speak for themselves ....

ask yourselfs who's **** sounds doper ? bambino's , ill's , charlie , hamilton , mine ??????

if ya'll wanna make hip hop music an be rappers , maybe you should think b4 you speak !!!

simple questions hey bambino what kinda mic do you use ?
what kinda program do u record with ??

Peace im out , this all started cause i was trying to find someone good to battle ... even ills copped out on that one ....





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theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 02:06 am
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
u never send in mixtapes they go in the garbage
you go in ta market n pick a target ,
ur shits retarded
, you sound like u jsst started ,
am i meant ta mentor another placenta
man why I sense ya mensa quality
ya gonna need to censor my apology
im the inventor of these fallin tree's boy you shootin with newton
you cant grapple with the glass is half empty or half full
or even hastle , to get up an grab that apple
of eden
ya believein
you can wrastle , can't even holds ya pants up an run a castle
homie died pre natal , guess giving birth to a thought was fatal
lets turn the round tables
, enable ya brain , no able n cain ,
make ya own label
lupe,em, dre , weezy , yeezy , n jay
ya'll wanna masquerade
watch how the masses play
ya'll wanna blast a spray
masterbate , cause ya'll an fuckin wit it
i'll meet you in the ali you aint cassius clay
you aint got common sense
what make you think you buckin wit it
yall cats the same
ya ass's slaine
another dragon braggin
beggin not to drag him in front of a mirror
some scum n the fear
some summon a tear
listen to the ammunition you hear ,
throwing intuition,
flowing cognition in ya ears
ya'll ain't got a pot to pissen
I gots a pot in the kitchen
some fresh crop n pot ta crissen
ya'll aint got ta listen
ya'll rated me number one put me in the top posistion
an hell you really wanna be opposition



















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theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 02:10 am
@charliesforce,
yo charlie best thing you can do is relax an make your own beats an record yourself don't wait for anyone else you do it all 1st ppl will be coming to you .. cause the effort shows , an it takes time homie you goitta build connections , alot of times emcees start off in a group b4 they even get a chance to go solo or even noticed so just record your stuff an stand on all the hottest corners put your cd out , hand it to dj's there the ones that play it your all good homie just keep pressin ....
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Illustraight
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 05:57 am
@theprofessor,
I wasn't setting up double standards of any kind. Look at all the verses I've posted; where have I said that someone doesn't even deserve to live? Now THAT would be dehumanising. If I said that they needed to improve a bit more because their raps sounded a bit bland, that would be giving them criticism.
theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 07:19 am
@Illustraight,
Quote:
Make you suffer a horrendous wreck, cut you like a severed neck
Then gut you ‘til there isn’t a bit of your stomach or intestine left
thats what you wrote an that is dehumanizing ... so as much as i like you stfu ....
Illustraight
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 08:03 am
@theprofessor,
Doesn't mean I'm REALLY gonna do it.
In a way, it isn't dehumanising, if you think about it ...... if I meant it, then it would be something else.

That was a GREAT multi, by the way. LOL
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Bambino
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 09:00 am
@theprofessor,
While Mr. Prof is on a rant here.

Ill I thought that was an amazing dope line. Like you said, you aren't gonna' do it. I probably would've used the same thing.
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Illustraight
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 12:11 pm
My eyes are half-closed but I’m barely sleeping
I’m having a dream right now, nightmares are creeping
Having an acid trip
And I have to get my jacket then I have to split
I have a shift which starts at 10 o’clock and doesn’t wrap ‘til 6
I have fantastic kicks with pads and such a strapping grip
There’s no chance of collapse when packing things straight into plastic bins
Imagining a life, with treasure and a better wife
And active tykes tearing around the terrace in a pair of Nikes
The autism’s got you wondering what’s the problem with me
‘Cause I’m not as competent as someone good solving things logically
My way of thinking is not all it seems
I guess the probability is half the time I don’t ponder things properly
And the other half of the time I just master it right
The way I imagine it strikes you as the accurate type
My immaculate rhymes convey some messages to people
That I deserve to be named and respected as an equal
You can never change me even if you injected me with needles
Think you can figure me out? Technically, you’re feeble
Even if you tried to suss me using spectacles to see through
where my chest and pelvis is, you pathetic little weasel
You couldn’t lay me in chalk if you suspended me on easels
and drew lines all over my face with some pencilling techniques
I’m as good as I’ll get and as efficient as can be
And those who choose to doubt me are pitiful to me
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Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 12:44 pm
@theprofessor,
Since when has anybody ever taken anything seriously on here?
Polished
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 01:23 pm
Since no one got the guts to rap...battle me
SSSSS~ to the mic like a rattle snake, rattle me
no one on my level to shatter me
If you are then please grab a mic and flatter me
Money so tight I get payed like a actor
Cut ya, slice ya, and dice ya like a tractor
So fearless that people call me the fear Factor
I'm comin for all of you so you need a fast reactor
Flames blowin to the mic will make ya scatter
My level so high that you need a ladder
No one try to battle cause they know that I am the master
I keep it so clean it's almost unpredictable
Lyrics so fresh it is almost questionable
What I bring to the table is the most valuable thing
If anyone wanna see it then please step in my ring...
hamilton
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 01:25 pm
@Polished,
wow. that was really good!
i clap my hands for you.
charliesforce
 
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Reply Thu 4 Aug, 2011 02:50 pm
Just some advice for the newbees on here.

the first/immediant thing i look at when listening to any emcee on the internet is see how their rhyme scheme is and the biggest fail from every new emcee and a lot of you guys is your just rhyming one words at the end of your sentences at that requires 0.5 skill. all u have to do is find a word, rhyme it 4 times and fill a sentence behind it so it makes sense like this...

Cat
Hat
Bat
That

I was sitting there just jamming with my CAT
Then i noticed he was chewing on my HAT
So i went into the bedroom grabbed a BAT
Hit him on the head and shouted *take THAT*

See it requires NO SKILL WHATSOEVER.

Mix up your rhyme scheme, use multisyllables. let me try and re-write that slightly more advanced.....

I was SITTING and just CHILLING like a VILLAIN with my CAT
I gotta FEELING he was NIBBLING like a RAT upon HAT..........

Thats also awful but it was just an example of mixing up your rhyme scheme, dont just rhyme one word a sentence, its not impressive at all, a 3 year old can do it...



 

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