Neverending Rap Battle

It seems like you ain’t got anything better to say
lildaddy, I suggest that you pray
And while you’re at it, put your umbrella away
Or better yet, just keep holding it overhead
‘Cause this lyrical thundershower will leave you soaking wet
Looking like a sponge that’s unwrung
And absorbed all the water
I got a bunch of Marines lined up for the slaughter
So dig yourself a good trench, my guy
Because when the bullets hit you, you’ll be left with an empty mind

jeezum. whats it take for some attention...?

I think that your rap may be too traditional!
It reminds me of a traditional America!

wow. where do you find these things???

btw, most of that was from a book i was reading....
Ninja hand book, by the ask a ninja.

I have lots of down time here in Cali', so might aswell make the most of it now. I'll share the collab on here. Im doing a collab with The Tom Hardy

Peak

Song about a asshole producer, Danny who shut me down a couple years back. I'm not recording with Hardy but I'm sending this song on a cd and if he likes it we'll do it in the studio. Many other up and coming rappers are sending him there **** as well. This is my first task of many!

[Verse 1]
Im a marksman I shot it down
No use for you to come around
You keeped from pursuing
Now I'm sick and tired of losing
I can't take no more
All I did was favor you
I sugar coated things
I ain't takin' none, them accents ain't nothin' to me
You took shots at me
But I'll come back strong
I could probably five out to nine minute song
But I won't, I'll keep it simple
I've been suckin' this rap games nipple
Forever, forever and now its time
I got a urge and I'll let it out
**** you Danny, I'm good without
You now leave the business to me and Hardy as we to our ****
Get it Danny? Yeah, you get my drift?
Suck my dick!

Hot Kicks

Verse (1)

I'm killing the mic with hot new shoes
My swagg in difference colors, anyone I choose
There shaking the floor at any magnitude
There hot, not cold, and they flood monsoons
Decorated style protect my feet like cocoons
There like a hurricane to wind, mean to typhoons
They make your shoes turn to Popsicle's
Getin' kicks like these, its just another obstacle
I zoom by and fly by like I'm D-Rose
Next thing you know, my shots like Moses Malone's
Not a single slip up or mess up on defense
They got these kids locked like school, no recess
If you got ideas of what I'm gana do
Rock these nice kicks, I'll probably get em' in blue

Hook (x2)

Got these kicks with the swagg
Extra laces in the bag
Hit the floor after cruisin' in my Jag
Now let me show some nigga's how to brag

Verse (2)

Now I don't rock Adidas, not in this town
Got these flaming Nike's with the squeak to the ground
Lace em' loose if theres nothing else to do
Look at my feet, like this is a dream come true
All black front, Nice blue trim, lime green inner
Rockin' these kicks like my cars got them spinners
Now I don't mean to brag, but these kicks hot
I swear these kick are out this world like an astronaut
Now I don't wear em' on the street, not the concrete
Make your shoes like ice, its like that snow and sleet
I where em' to the court, lookin' fine on the wood
The wood caught fire with these kicks on my foot!

Hook (x4 fade out)

I swear to god... these are HEAT bro... just came out and they are FIRE!

http://www.eastbay.com/product/model:160951/sku:54136004/nike-zoom-hyperfuse-2011-mens/light-blue/black/?cm=57831#sku=54136004

Just came up with a great sexist joke to go into my new verse I'm throwin' together. It's gonna' be called "Heart Sore"

And while I'm sittin' on this chair just jokin'
You though I was a serious man, you keep askin' me
What if you was to start smoking?
I told you a hundred times bitch I'll put you threw punishment
I'll just add some lubricant

Just a chunk of a verse. Get it. If she was to start smoking like cigs or something. But in this case its me humping her too fast. So I'll just add lubricant. Simple smartass joke by me! Lol

bambino u can't think of a response ??? or somethin

PS. hamilton nice rap homie
like ur style

No I have no down time. I'm in Cali' tryin' to get my first CD produced. The only down time I have is in the morning from when I wake up till noon and sometimes late at night.

Oh and anyone on here good at writing chorus'? I need a chorus for a song, just email me and I'll let you know what kind of chorus. I'll give you credit if the song is put onto the CD. Thanks!

What kind of hook are you looking to write? I might be able to help you out.

yo man, illustraight seems to be good at writing hooks as he always does it but ill give it a try. lemme know what ur looking for coz no lie when im stoned i ******* think of hit songs lol no lie. so hit me up i know ill think of a beast hook

Ever heard a kiss by Bad meets evil? A hook like that. The songs gonna be like a kiss by Em and Royce.

you all ate the flowers
on your gay bridal shower
you think you niggas got power
yet you sing "baby" in the shower
white ass wannabe's
that's who you suppose to be
you ain't got soul
you guys ate a bowl
of vagina wart stew
im not your momma
but i will spank you
you bitches got nothin on me
your a more pathetic than planting a money tree
you bithes eat my penis
may fat guy rape your anus
eating cheeseburgers
shoving up they're fries
you think you so tough
bitch imma make you cry
you think your so tough
but bitch you my hoe
imma **** you up
and you would never know
i bet you still get horny
from wet dreams in the morning
****** i fucked yo sister
that's why she has those bllisters

Amen brother would you like to join my psychopathic church?

i will. i have some time to kill....

i will too
you got swine flew
i love you
i bought you shoes
i got a tattoo
of your glutes
on my face
and i play the flute

Cute!

wow, he already is following you.

I was just joking bro! I thought that was just nasty but I guess you are in the right place for that being this is the Neverending Rap Battle! You guys keep having fun!