Neverending Rap Battle

i am following
i will always follow
im fit for a leader
but i dont wanna bother
cause i got a great message
but can you read it?
ill give you a bandage
so you dont have to bleed it

which one...?

look, my good sir,
me, i can make every cat purr
I do it, by stroking their silky soft fur
where they like it
but be careful my new friend,
or your my raps will bring all yo pleasure to an awful end
and believe me,
i cant rap well,
but my raps can break a knee
in fact it broke mine
and i am thanking my hospital for its hospitality.

i know. that was a bit sappy.

i dont got the time
i got robbed of rhymes
my hearts on the line
cause your rhymes are all crimes
i dont make the rules
i may be quite cruel
i hope you dont drool
when yo mommas in the pool
giving hand job

ok. tomorrow, its on...

if i were you
i'd be gay
unlike you
i know what to say
you said good sir
you must not know me
im a fucken bad ass
you can't bethrone me
im the king
and if you rebel
ill crush you
to the size of a pebble
if your ever in jail
dont drop your soap
cause ill be there
and ill **** your hole

Did u really just say u would rape hamilton in the ass?

yes indeed
and he will bleed
like the pig's i slaughter
that's right i fucked your mother
you are missing the intelligence
you will lose if you run against's
you think you so gansta
you listen to rebecca black
you ain't got no answer
brain is what you lack
heed my warnings
don't waste my time
if you answer
im going to rhyme

Everything u say doesn't have to be a rhyme u know

that's what the noobs say
they want an easy way out
just like the news today
violence is what its all about
nigga you best be trolling
you ain't a rapper til you rap
nigga your point's are boiling
your just a kid full of crap

I chill bones it's like paranormal activity 
I scare rappers when I ain't even in the vicinity
This is my 3000th hit y'all could call me Derek Jeter
The rest of u be usin steroroids like Barry bonds ya cheaters 
Lyric repeaters I **** u up for a small thing like not payin the parkin meter
I don't fear nuthin cuz I'm fuckin fearless 
And these rhymes are like mike Tyson they leave ya earless
Words that leave u a limbless quadrapledic
And a rhymein strategy that's so stratigic and presice
You thought u were the best but ya better think twice
Cuz now I'm here
And u can't fuckin touch me 
Bitch think u can crush me 
Well bitch ur barkin up the wrong tree 
Cuz rappers like u can't contend with me  
   

i have to admit
that was pretty good
for a piece of ****
in my neighborhood
you try to sound
like your complicated
with two or three lines
you are disintegrated
push the red button
face my laser
you know nothin
feel my taser
so you have a boner
it's not surprising
with my every single line
your dick was rising
what i made you horny
imagine all my bitches
when you see me in the morning
you will need a few stitches
my rhymes explode your brain
my lines implode your pain
you think you be sane
bitch i think your insane
you ain't got game
you rhyme the same ****
any **** brain can spit
i got peotry running
through my veins
you can't pass through me
your lines are too plain
you nigga say the same thing
any nigga say
bitch does it sting?
when my rhymes cut through your veins

i'm in the system bitch
i know the truth
bitch are you listening
i'd quit if i were you
every time you answer me
is like receiving a blow job
it feels so good
like cuming inside your mom
suck on my man gerbil
why don't you go home
you should be embarassed
to suck on me hoe

U make no sense...

[Hook]
I want a score, a score, a score
(No, you don’t)
I want a score, a score, a score
(Is this a joke?)
I want a score, a score, a score
(Of this coke? Are you crazy?)
I want a score, a score, a score
(I’ll give you a line but that’s all you’re gonna get from me)

Great dude. I'll take a look at Charlie's too. If I have your's on the album what name you want it under? Illustraight?

A lot of hook I need please. I'll give you all credit on the album. I'm tryin' to get some of you guys known as in your names. I got a list of hooks I need:

1. I'm tryin' to remake the "Drug Ballad" beat by Eminem. Could someone make a hook about partying. Put something about having "Hennesey" and "Bicardi". It might sound non-original but maybe something about chicks aswell.

2. Over a beat SIMILAR to "Benz or Bentley". Just a freestyle about anything and everything. A hook about just rapping. You know what I mean? If you don't just ask

3. This is gonna' be the last song on the album. I need a hook about how hard it is to get noticed. How hard it is for people to figure you out. 'Cause coming up in the music idustry it is HARD to get noticed. You try so hard and then you just get shut down, its happened to me before.

**Remember I WILL include your name on the album. I doubt one of these songs are gonna' be popular because it's my first actual album.**

Put it under this alias: Autistik.

I'll separate your queries into posts respectively.

[1 – “Drug Ballad” hook]

Every time I see somebody drink
(Whoa-ho-oh)
Drinking all but the kitchen sink
(Whoa-ho-oh)
I’m a clubber, all I gotta say
(Whoa-ho-oh)
Going partying is my middle name
(Whoa-ho-oh)
I got this slender freak next to me
(Whoa-ho-oh)
She’s all Bacardi and Hennessey
(Whoa-ho-oh)
Making a name is my claim to fame
(Whoa-ho-oh)
My drunkness puts the other guys to shame
(Whoa-ho-oh)

Autistik sounds good. Thanks for the hook. If you want I can keep having you write hooks for me if you'd like. I can probably get your name out there somehow.