Neverending Rap Battle

Runs Deep

[Verse 1]
I feel like the devil
Sqaure dancin with my heart in my hand
Lookin around but knowin seems to understand
Me myself, a man full of pride
It was always you and I
Me and you there
Until I took a look around
Saw the only thing was me
Me, I need a comfort to sorround
Me, yes me and myself
A little solitude to isolate me
I may be a little crazy
But its me
Take a look around
The lucifer is here
You're IT the clown
So...

[Hook Jessica Banks]
People mistake for what I do
People think I have no clue
But if it was just me and you
We could do what no other could do
Just me and you
So, sure you could read and weep
But this passion I have it runs deep
It runs deep

[Verse 2]
And now listen as I tell a story
I know I'll regret this in the morning
I love you though, I love you
You don't seem to get me
I get you, bitch, get me
Love me, deep, I loved you
My passion god I know it runs deep
But for you to take that from me
You gotta be kiddin' I don't get you no more
Leave get the hell out there's the door
It's there
**Right in the palm of my hand
** I had you fallin for me
** I had to droolin' over me
** You were likin' your chops for the rights
But this passion I have, I have it, its good
I need it to come out, god damn why not? It should
I got a thought, rollin' off the tip of my fingers
I wanna' strangle your ass
You run away
I chase your ass
You stumble and fall
Crumble and tear
Lying to my face while I'm standin' there
You don't care? **** you
I grab you by your hair
Throw you to the ground
Now I don't care
Put the gun to your head
I'm still standin' there
Tear rollin' down my face
I pull the trigger
**BOOM**

[Run on Hook]
You thought you had me in your hands
I escaped came back and fucked you once again
So...

[Hook Jessica Banks]

Jessica Banks is a studio recorder who is my brothers female singer aswell. She's just a local female singer.

Who wants to battle? Get some action going here. My suggestions are:
Bambino vs. GJayPro
Whitemofo vs. Kiladelphia

Any other suggestions, put down, lets get something goin' here!

That's some passionite **** the ending of the second verse reminds me of space bound

Been tryin' to write a verse like space bound for a while now, thanks.

I need to quit 

(hook) 
This feeling It feels so good at first but then it eats me alive
I've always come back but one day I might not be lucky enough to survive
I need to get my act together I need to cut the **** 
I just... I just... Need to quit

(Verse 1)
I need to quit I need to stop this horrible habit 
Before I end up 6 feet under in a casket
I know I'm hurtin those I care about most
I've tried to stop but my old self haunts me like a ghost
I need help cuz I can't resist the temptation
I'm comin to a relization
That I can't do this alone it's to much for one man to handle 
I'm ready to do it but I need y'all to light the candle
I'm ready to go I just need that extra push 
To drop that blunt and throw away the kush
And If you are a druggie who needs to stop too 
Just remember there's always someone out there who wants to help you

(hook)

I'm not actually into drugs I stay away from that stuff I just thought it would be a good subject but I need help startin this second verse


 

 



 

We had our battle already. I never got to finish with whitemofo cuz Illustraight waz being a big dick. Bambino vs. Someone who can rap
GJayPro vs. Whitemofo

My fault bruh for hitting you up this late

Half your battle was weak
Half of it didnt rhyme
Half of it involved ****
that reading it would just be a waste of time
Iight look, here is the thang
Use real grammer 'cause I cant read your poor ass slang
Get yo crew, have a gang bang
Cause it's me vs the world
Never give up is the motto
Ill **** on you and yo crew like was Eminem did to Lotto
But **** Eminem, he aint the one at the mic
Ill **** on anybody in here
Cause me and them are not alike
I can say this **** cause I have the confidence
You've done messed with the Tic so here is your consequence
I'm gonna **** on you like I did Prashant Shady,
it's a Dominance
But Ill hit you up quicker, with a real good flicker
Remember the Tic Tac Ticker, cause my rhymes are thicker
and if you try and use that slang again you are going to hear me bicker
Your poor ass rhyming is nothing because mine is richer

AB4L

God damn Illu
I don't see how you come up with these songs
**** all the battling
You should just make a forum on Freestyling and Rapping
LOL

My added verse to WTP

Reach for the Tylenol PM
Mix it with some Hennesey and Frostop
'Cause I can stay up until the ball drop
I thought about quittin' but what for?
I got some chains and blades in my garage and more!
Take the stick out of the truck
Pull it around, whip a shitty
Pull out, not a one, five, or twenty
Pull out a hundred dollar bill with couple pennies
Add some Bicardi to the Monty
Flip the ************ upside down
Turn it around, called my mom but know one would respond
Drove a 90 missed the stop sign, hit a pole and a guard rail
Ended up in the pond
Man I think I need to quit
But I got a nasty whip
Take a dip with me
We'll find our way home, trust me
I ain't that crazy
Just follow me I'll show you where to go
Now let's dance...

Im drug free. Tryin' to keep writing before another case of brain fart hits me.

...... Thanks. That's putting it a bit mildly. O_O

Who's the best rapper alive at the moment

Eminem?
Duh

Immortal technique man he's so fuckin raw I really like eminem though new and old version

Yelawolf. Little poppy but "Pop the Trunk" and "Daddys Lambo" are awesome. Plus he's signed by Shady Records

I like em and yela and all those guys but Im more entertained by the independent underground rappers like diabolic and immortal technique "dance with the devil" and "you never know" nearly put me in tears

[Diabolic]
Go ahead and grip glocks
I'll snap your trigger finger in six spots
You'll have to lip lock with hypodermic needles to lick shots
I'll watch you topple flat
Put away your rings and holla back
Can't freestyle, you're screwed off the top like bottle caps
Beneath the surface, I'm over heating your receiving circuits
By unleashing deeper verses than priests speak in churches
What you preach is worthless
Your worship defeat the purpose
Like President Bush taking bullets for the Secret Service
Beyond what ya'll fathom
I **** on cats and jaw tap ‘em
Show no compassion like having a straight faced orgasm
Tour jack ‘em, have his half a ten bitch suck my friend's dick
In the mean time, you can French kiss this clenched fist
Diabolic, a one man brigade spreading cancer plague
This ******* a pussy's face, holding a hand grenade
So if I catch you bluffin'
Faggot, you're less than nothing
I just had to get that stress off my chest like breast reduction

[Immortal Technique]
You motherfuckers are nothing
You cannot harm me
I'll resurrect every aborted baby and start an army
Storm the planet hunting you down
Cause I'm on a mission
To split your body into a billion one-celled organisms
Immortal Technique'll destroy your religion you stupid bitch
You're faker than blue-eyed crackers nailed to a crucifix
I'm about to blow up like NASA Challenger computer chips
Arsenic language transmitted revolutionarily
I'm like time itself, I'm gonna kill you inevitably
Chemically bomb you, **** using a chrome piece
I'm Illmatic, you won't make it home like Jerome's niece
I'll sever diagonally for thinking of dissing me
And then use your dead body to write my name in calligraphy
This puppet democracy brainwashed your psychology
So you're nothing like diversity without equality
And your crew is full of more faggots than Greek mythology
Using numerology to count the people I sent to heaven
Produces more digits than 22 divided by 7
You like Kevin Spacey, his style is usually suspect
You never killed a cop? You' not a motherfuckin' thug yet!
Your mind is empty and spacious
Like the part of the brain that appreciates culture in the racist
Face it, you're too basic
You're never gonna make it
Like children walking through Antarctica, butt naked

No offense, but Eminem ain't that good to me... no its not a "duh" I have J. Cole getting songs out there, Tyga's stepping his game up, Wiz is starting to rap about something besides weed for once, Wayne still got some sick metaphors even though he kinda fake, Jay-z has started to go down but you can count his older days, Kid Cudi's getting fresh too, Lupe Fiasco has some amazing lyrics that a lot of people don't pay attention to, and Fabolous has some great **** out there to. Eminem... comes and go's, not consistent enough for me. Luda hit the toilets (R.I.P old Luda). My fav is Tyga, but I have to give toooooo.... Lupe because hes just killing it lyrically and no one seems to see that. If you don't think Lupe then it's probably Fabolous.

Eminem does not come and go. 1998-2004, Brilliant. 2010 and 2011 he is sick. I don't know how he comes up with his ****. I couldn't think of half the **** he comes up with, it's hands down. Tyga, Wiz, and Kid Cudi aren't good to me. Kid Cudi and Wayne suck so much it's not even funny. Eminem is not my favorite because of his Recovery songs but he's my favorite Emsee because of the sick metaphors and sumbliminal messages. No one ever pays attention to subliminal messages, I do. Tyga isn't that bad, I just don't feel him. Royce and Em are great together, the rap game just doesn't impress anymore. Eminem is as good as he was. Ever heard, "25 to Life" you'd think its about him ranting about Kim again but its a subliminal message about the Hip Hop industry.

Killuminatti

I do agree Eminem was "one" of the best in 1998-2004 (Jay-z and Nas could argue), but the question was who is the best rapper "at this moment". Eminem, to me has only made few a good songs between 2010-2011 and has still failed to prove whys hes the best rapper "at this moment". You say Eminem talks about messages when "mostly" he rapped about how bad his life was (that's all I have ever heard him rap about besides a few songs). Lupe also raps about subliminal messages that people don't pay attention to, and at the same time Lupe never had much of gap in his career because hes still on his way up with the Lazers album he put out. Where was Eminem 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008????? I think J. Cole is better then Em if people just tried to listen to him instead of be like "Oh he don't even have an album out, **** him. End of point Eminem is not the best "at this moment".

mac miller.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-rqu-hjobc&feature=player_detailpage