Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
  1  
Reply Sun 17 Jul, 2011 03:58 pm
@UK2DAY,
Black Jack I smack dat cuz I'm the ace of spades
Ur bow and arrow rhymes don't come close to my grenades
Try to hit me and I choke u out 
Oh look I think ur tappin out
U bout as hard as a dude wit erectile disfunction
U rap like a computer having a malfunction
U think u a hard ass sendin me threats 
When u bout as real as Pamela Andersons breasts
I kill u and show no regrets  
Racially confused? I know what I am
but u don't u think u a rapper when u ain't even a man
 
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
  1  
Reply Sun 17 Jul, 2011 09:52 pm
Bad life

(Hook)
I've had a bad life filled with hard times 
But I know it's all gonna be good in the end
Even if I have a bad life that life will never end  

You have no idea what ive been through 
So quit sayin that you do
Cuz you don't know, not at all 
My life has slowed to a crawl
I'm not even in a crawl I'm in reverse
People in my life starting to disperse
Both my parents nearly died before my eyes 
Love was almost my dads dimise 
Things looked so gray 
almost ended it that day
Thank god he's still here today 
Idk where I'd be if things went his way 
But that isn't the end of the story 
The family had no money we lost our glory 
So my dad started poppin pills figuring he could end it here
I remeber he took some zoloft with a beer
He said it he said he wanted to die 
But I said dad no it's a lie 
That's the moment I started to cry
The doctors saved him we got him back he told us his life was on a new track
Things were goin good for a while 
I think I acctually saw my dad smile 
Then he lost his job went back to that bad place and it put me in tears
My dad being back in the hospital was one of my greatest fears
But it happened and I had to deal with it no matter how much it hurt
I felt alone stranded in a desert
He finally came home and I could tell he was better 
But life is still hard when every morning there's fear of a suicide letter
Then somethin else happened and things got worse 
Bad things always happen to me what is this a curse 
mom got sick had a heart attack
She flatlined then came back 
I may not show it but it hurts deep inside
If I told u I'm fine then I probably lied
But even with all these bad times I never even thought of pickin up that knife
Cuz I know I can make somethin of myself even with such a bad life

(hook x2)

(Outro spoken)
I've had a bad life... But I've gotten through it... And if I can do it... You can too 


My life piled into 1 song... What do y'all think
 
 
 
GJayPro
 
  1  
Reply Sun 17 Jul, 2011 10:35 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
daaaaaaaaaaaaammmn bra, nice.
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GJayPro
 
  0  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 10:33 am
@UK2DAY,
Ha, you said it's UK territory, we better step down?
Look my slave I'm the king with the crown
Sense when does copper rust, you sure you can rap?
You have people confused more then the thunderclap
I'll step up, but only one step, and that's all I need
Cause in this battle I will succeed, guaranteed
I'm not small, tall, black, or white
But I'm destined to rule, I'm the UK's kryptonite
Fight of my life? With you I shine bright in the spotlight
I hang rappers from the ceilings, your another stalagmite
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UK2DAY
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 11:08 am
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
You can have your grenades bitch, I gotta 20 Nukes,
And I'm as real as Katy Perry's Californian Daisy Dukes.
And yeah you are a spade, Im the friking King,
I had this battle won right from the beggining.
Stepping up against me, What were you thinking?
Trying to win, What the hell where you drinking?
Yo Monkey Slut, Your just my warm up,
Erictile Disfunction, I can get mine up,
Wanna know how, Because I got a Knob
You got a fanny, Mayonise chewed up by a bulldog
So don't diss my dick cuz yours can't spew,
The only Dick in your whole family, Bitch is ******* you!
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GJayPro
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 04:32 pm
1. Why the hell are these verses so frekin short?
2. Why is UK still even rapping?
3. Why isn't anybody else rapping each other?
Bambino
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 04:57 pm
@GJayPro,
1. Not enough punchlines, puns to fit in one rap
2. He sucks
3. I'm not 'cause I am doing some studio work. I check this sight everyday though and every rap I see you type down is smooth as silk! Im taking rapping as a career path and you should too, you're a killer. I started it off as a hobby and just battling people for fun and then realized I could put my work to the test and try to make money. Take this as a compliment!
Peace, GJay!
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Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 06:08 pm
@GJayPro,
1. He thinks he's good enough to keep goin cuz obviously this isn't our best
2. I'm not even takin it seriously
3. I'm more focused on makin songs then battlein people like that too bad I ain't got access to a studio
p.s bambino how's the career comin along?
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 06:33 pm
@GJayPro,
Also until somebody good actually comes you might as well just post songs you've written like bambino illustraight and myself
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Killadelphia
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 06:44 pm
@UK2DAY,
Lmfaooo, You suck at rapping, for real #ma dude, write yur OWN ****., cause if yu wanna be good at else find a good rap to copy and paste on this page. Your only lines yu made were, "Your a bit full of ya'self Killadelhia,
I'm a spread you like I spread Philladelphia"

1. You spelt my damn name wrote.
2. Spread Philladelphia ?
3. Just stop I don't wanna destroy you.
Killadelphia
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 06:53 pm
@GJayPro,
Lamas are guns. J.s. but I give yu tht yu goood/
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Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 06:54 pm
@Killadelphia,
Ur talking bout confusin rhymes? Haha comin from the dude who said "y'all niqqas can't handle my lamas" lol
Bambino
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 08:29 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
Comin along well, trying to put out a mixtape. You don't have access to a studio? Just work your ass off and get money. Im lucky enough to have a brother in the industry
GJayPro
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 08:38 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
Lmfao, I guess your right. Seriously Killadelphia, why are you still here? Cuz I can't handle your rhymes that you spit worse then lamas?
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 08:45 pm
@Bambino,
I got a cousin with his own studio he's mad busy though and I have a friend that could prob make some beats for me if I pull a few favors I might be able to get in I'll work it out a few tips though bout the mixtape
1. Promote the **** outta that thing like put it on as many websites as possible
2. Make as many CDs as possible and put stacks in random places you nay not get money but it gets ur name out there
3. Put up some YouTube videos i mean even though I hate justin bieber it worked for him look at him now
4. Send that **** to as many radio stations as possible the more people hear it the better chance somebody important hears it
5. Have fun cuz if u ain't havin fun what's the point?
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 08:46 pm
@GJayPro,
I think this kid has been playin to much black ops lol
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Bambino
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 08:59 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
Oh yeah have fun is right. I take the image of new Em no drugs!
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 09:07 pm
@Bambino,
Here's a website that can get you on iTunes if ur interested http://www.tunecore.com/
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Killadelphia
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 09:37 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
Ma guy, lamas mean guns..
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
  1  
Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2011 09:38 pm
@Killadelphia,
In what language I've looked it up at least 50 times and can't find **** bout it being guns
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