charliesforce
 
  1  
Reply Thu 11 Nov, 2010 11:45 am
@Illustraight,
if ill can rap ****, that so can i
ill explode all over your load with rhymes
on time with the bassline that keeps falling behind
i more than a guy who gets high to fly
im more a kinda guy who gets high to die
and if tails heads up, ill toke my mind
till my eyes swell up and im choking
on paranoia you better call a lawyer
coz i got the munchies and im looking for ya
wanna store ya in my intestines tonight
**** you down the toilet estimated at 9......32
on the loo, after downing beef stew
you got heat? me too..
we should party at noon
thats soon, should we travel by broom?
halloween that was two weeks ago-assumed
clean your room, we can have a gun fight- click boom
tutenkhamans in a tomb but still shoots his boom
pocahontases pyjamas are equiped for noon
we gonna have a slumber party and groom.
turn from a little grab hand and stand
to a huge gang bang that she cant stand
coz she cant grab my meaty penis in her hand
door slams, and she may have forgotten to pick up her bag
ham sandwitch, and a rubber band rapped around a stamp
with a 20 dollar bill sitting under grams
and grams of more ganj
we might aswell get even higher thatn we understand....

lol im really high!!!!
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charliesforce
 
  2  
Reply Thu 11 Nov, 2010 01:11 pm
i spit with relavence
the dead remembrance
9 11 we respect the evidence
people protest against what they witnessed
the silly bitches musta forgot their medicine
they wanna inspect the genuine skeletons
and question the deads evidence and the
presidents intelligence
people say revenge is eminent
but the devils lyrical decendent
mentions..........................

pure fire.......
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theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 01:26 am
I CHALLENGE EVERYONE TO A BATTLE ROYALE

WHO EVER WANTS TO BATTLE REPLY -

I WILL PUT EVERYONE AGAINST SOMEONE ,

WIN THE FIRST ROUND MOVE ON AND

GO TILL THE LAST 2 BATTLERS

I'LL RECORD IT AN POST BACK THE RESULTS

WE WILL PICK JUDGES OUT OF 3 MC'S THAT ARE'NT BATTLING

NO HATE VOTE VOTING OR BUDDY VOTING

BASED ON PUNCHLINES -
WORDPLAY-
MULTI'S-
ORIGINALITY-
FLOW-
A SCALE OF 1 TO 10

10 BEING HIGHEST

** IF YOUR INTERESTED RESPOND **
**WE CAN SET UP A WICKED BATTLE CIRCUIT**



PEACE PROF

Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 04:07 am
@theprofessor,
Can I write my rhymes as I can't freestyle fully?
charliesforce
 
  1  
Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 12:08 pm
@theprofessor,
im in
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mic-holder
 
  1  
Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2010 06:31 am
Hip hop lyrics, highly intelligent~or~dumbed~down
we dime a doze or rhyme eloquent~for~one~pound
some of us got numb mouths, words are muttered
some of us are jus clowns, others learnin somethin
if you never heard of nothin you get spun around
some of us cats are everythin but young~and~proud
some of us are old folks, locked away with the key~chucked
we won't ever see what the light of day does to reach~us
some of us vocals speed up like we~was~chipmunks
some of us blow auto-tune cause otherwise~it~sucks
our enterprise is luck, right place right time and such
but we all love our hip hop lyrics, when shits drops hear it
get near it, we layin our foundation through our spirits
it's hip hop, it's hip hop, it's hip hop and here's our lyrics
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rapper4life
 
  1  
Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2010 08:50 am
@-SugarNSpice-,
im 13 to insept im a guy
rapper4life
 
  1  
Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2010 09:01 am
@rapper4life,
yo yall suck at rappin so stop it your making it look bad its so sad stop rappin over the internet its irrelevant learn how to rap before u to talk **** im a true rapper i rap better than eminem as a matter of fact i make him look like a garbage man so **** this yall rappin online like u good but i bet yall copy and paste like a mother fuckin douche
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mic-holder
 
  1  
Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2010 11:45 am
Lil man you lost? you need help?...
It's okay, we'll find a way to kill yourself
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TNTABC123
 
  1  
Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2010 03:41 pm
yeh, i'm up for the battle, here's an attempt right here:

Oh, so you want me to start dissing?
I’ll be so harsh I’ll send you to perdition.
When I’m done with you, you’ll need a walking stick,
I’ll be so cold, that you’ll think you’re in the arctic,
Before now, I never knew you didn’t have a dick,
But luckily for your mum, I still got one for her to lick.

ok kid, don't make no mistake,
you obviously fake,
why else wud you try to partake,
in this fight,
when my lyrics are so tight,
you better learn to be polite,
or else you'll wind up dead,
yeah damn right,
your fucked in the head,
got a dick through the brain,
you ain't got nothing to gain,
when you spitting people like "what is this ****",
sound less like you rappin and more like a bad acid trip,
in a race like this there's no question, you gonna come last,
if i have to i will walk all up and down your ass,
i think u need a filter installed between ur brain and ur mouth,
so u don't keep chattin' 'bout something that u know nuthin' about,
you keep ranting and raving,
thinking you misbehaving,
thinking u can give me a smack,
**** u, i'll sock u back,
hey is this guy on crack,
he tries to speak but all i'm hearing is "quack quack"

so now i've finished,
your chance of winning has been greatly diminished,
I end my spit,
With my rhyme and wit,
An instant hit,
So that’s it,
All I gotta do to destroy you is to click submit.
rapper4life
 
  1  
Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2010 05:12 pm
yo yo This b**** is sick he was f***ing micheal Jackson and his chick damn man how many people have you raped 1.2.3.4 and lots of more.. Damn yo how can I put this u suck a*s!! At rappin u cant rhyme or go wit the beat so take a seat don’t ever rap again and don’t ask for help because you gonna get a slap in the f***in mouth
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rapbattler432
 
  1  
Reply Sat 13 Nov, 2010 10:24 pm
@Steadster,
yo look at this fuckin amateur postin **** on a rap thread
i scare you with a line **** the boogey man im the one you check for under your bed
im so ill not even penacillan can cure me
your a fuckin phony you hide when i release this fuckin fury
i got you on my radar your a fuckin locked target
i hit you dead on and make you plummet like the stockmarket
your depressed here take a couple perkastet
your a lame as mc not even worthy of getting played on an old cassette
bitch ill fuckin slaughter you so bad it will make the slaughterhouse look like a playpin
go ahead and respond id love all thiss lame ass hatein
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Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2010 05:47 am
@TNTABC123,
TNT’s gonna blow up, dynamites and bombs - I like this guy’s song
Talkin’ about filters, acid trips, guys and socks
Oh, and windin’ up dead
The most underrated verse on this forum that I’ve ever read
With a verse like that, he’ll get killed nine times out of ten
Either that or I’ll blast this guy in the head
Is it crack, or is it too much pies he’s been fed?
Your writing tool must be a strap-on, mine is a pen
Listen, If we don’t put this phony out soon
He’ll blow up like a Wile E. Coyote cartoon
and explode in our faces like semen on a slut’s face
This ************ has been breathin’ in too much paste
Time for one of us to get even with this ****-face
Leave him duct-taped and pour some cement where his bum lays
So when he sits down, the concrete sets and goes hard fast
From then on, we’ll have to call him a “hard-ass”
That’ll teach TNT for even startin’ to be a smart-ass
He couldn’t be harsh if his mother gave him a palm smack
Right across the jaw, ‘til he looks like a smorgasbord
Scribble over the paper-mache, now the writing’s on the wall
rapper4life
 
  0  
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2010 08:03 am
damn man u still raping after you got dissed why dont you go over a guys house and suck a dick you are such a gay ass mother ******* slut who talkes to much **** for someone who has a small dick
charliesforce
 
  1  
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2010 08:52 am
@rapper4life,
your the worst rapper ive herd in my life
its obserd when you write
you put the nerd in being white!
nah nah dont spit when you type
your a girl who swallows thats right....
so go and wollow in your self sorrow
coz charliesforce is emerging tonight

bitch...lol
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charliesforce
 
  1  
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2010 09:28 am
Gangster?

coz you vote obama?
kid you a gangstar?
so show me wheres your armour?
oh you do it harder?
prada is your armour?
you sit and shreek in laughter
you little geek
sit in iraq and feel the raft of chargers
starjumps and marches straight through terrorist branches
then say you a gangster
right now you just heartless
robbing kids for dollar bills so you can fill one cartridge
you ******* bastard
dont tell me your a gangster
your always dwell on raps
and ill always be the champ sir........
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TNTABC123
 
  1  
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2010 01:00 pm
@Illustraight,
To be honest, I don’t even know what you saying,
You trying to battle me, or is it just your mind straying
Cos listen up you might catch the flack of the rhymes I’m laying,
Gats flaring up as my bullets spraying,
Leave this cowardly bitch on the floor praying.

Now hear what I’m spitting,
Best fear when I start my hitting,
I flash back,
Crash attack,
I’m so dope, you so wack.
Don’t matter who you are I explode like tnt,
just cos for me, this shits so easy
Blowing up, all the way across the land,
Blowing up, my raps so hot in demand,
I travel right across this country from sea to sea,
Destroying my enemy puts me in ecstasy,
Getting caught, but when the judge learns it’s me,
I’m getting set out free,
Can’t get no better than to see enemies beat down,
Just screw this ****, set me with the rap crown,
Because I’m a hustler, you ain’t gunna hold me back,
Don’t make a fuss yeh? Or I’ll tear you a new ass crack.
You try to ‘bring it back’ like you lil wayne,
But your ‘new’ **** just ends up sounding the same.
I’ll **** you up so bad you’ll never eat solid food again,
You’ll be in so much pain,
Although I guess a diet would do you good,
Probably better try it, you know you should.
You don’t stop eating you’re just getting fat,
Trying to stand up, but falling on your back
Don’t believe the words you hear, like you’re the dumb kid, I’m the headmaster,
Even better than last year, rhymes even stronger and faster.
I’ll lock, block and knock you down like I’m in wwa,
You’re trying to tap out but you stu-tut-ter too much, I can’t hear what you say,
But anyway, this is just my freestyle,
But waiting for your reply I could be here a while,
Your rhymes are more prepared than something outta 8 mile,
You see I got flow,
But you’re just too slow, ya know?
I think you better go,
Before this TNT starts to blow,
Like your mum, sucked, licked and fucked and all for free,
Like she drank like the skank she is and all for me,
Although, that was only when the fun began,
We played pearl harbour, I was America she was japan,
I lay down, and she blew the hell outta me,
When we finished, you wouldn’t find it so pretty,
She had her face covered in something white and sticky.

yeh the writings on the wall, and you know what it said,
"best shut up before i put my foot through your head."
Now, you can say you got all your bros backing you up,
Now it’d be better if you knew when to shut up,
cos even with those hos I be smacking you up,
You ain’t got no one, you best get protection,
When you rolling about as deep as your reflection,
just got so killed, you need resurrection,
when i spit you gotta listen to every inflection,
every word has a meaning in my verse,
but your raps so full of **** they absurd,
but don't worry, it won't hurt,
they're just collections of letters and verbs.
so that's how i end my rap,
spit back,
don't choke,
on the smoke,
from the TNT,
just try your best, to be, as good as me.
Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2010 02:44 pm
@TNTABC123,
If I “stu-tut-ter”, I’m breakin’ it down a bit
This is my big break, I’m breakin’ this clown to bits
I’m about to spit some rhymes to make his teeth ache
And whip this ******* cheapskate all across each state
That’s 69 lines you’ve written
I fucked your mom 69 times, she’s smitten
At 6 to 9, I 69’d her, if I rotated both of her legs
I’d still be fuckin’ the bitch the same way
Except one of us would be upside down
She’d suck my dick while I’d be eatin’ her vagina out
Or I’d put my foot in her mouth
Stroke the cooch on the couch
If she gets hot, then I got the ice-grill to put the bitch out
Put my foot on the ground
Treat her like an Egyptian slave and push her about
Make her work on my pyramid ‘til her cooties give out
Look at her now! She’s caught a lot of juice in her mouth
and a bit on her nose, ‘cause she’s such a frivolous hoe
She screams when I step on her toes
Flatten them so hard the bitch will have some **** in her soles
And she’ll have to walk webbed like a cygnet on swole
Wow! That’s a whole paragraph on your mother!
Like James Brown, I’m a bad ************
I’ve just broken you down and had you snapped like a rubber
Bitch, you need to get a slap from your brother
And have him tell you what a big disgrace you are
You’re a pain to the game, so much shame you’ve brought
You’re insane that you came, tried to play a part
In this ongoing pantomine play of art
Now you’re a primary target, finna aim my darts
At your forehead, so your brain gets taken apart
Either that or your head gets nailed to the board
While the rest of your body gets brazed in chalk
So come on with the lamey talk
Turn your ass right around, go away, just walk
‘Cause you’ve done so much talkin’, you’ve blown a fuse
The fire’s gone out, the kids are makin’ jokes at you
Gettin’ one over us is what you hope to do
But respectin’ the game is what you’re supposed to do
But it seems that you’re dwindlin’ and floppin’ like a slipper
While I’m climbin’ to the top of the spot, I’m gonna get it
TNT, you amount to nothin’, ock and don’t forget it
Oops – I’m not black - thanks a lot, little bredren!
You just made me use a bad word and it’s repugnant
A racial slur which inverts my better judgement of people
Everybody wants to be equal
But you’re not equal, you’re just obnoxious and pitiful
If it’s the last thing I do, I’m gonna get rid of you
I’m flippin’ the bird, I’m throwin’ the finger too
I’m not just insultin’ you – homie, I’m dissin’ you!
That’s it, man, it’s over. It’s finished, dude.
TNTABC123
 
  1  
Reply Sun 14 Nov, 2010 03:46 pm
@Illustraight,
yeah, what your in is just a pantomime,
i don't have the time for your **** that can't rhyme,
man, you think you chatting but you just sound wasted,
only way you get with a girl is if she fainted,
gave her a drink but guess what, you'd laced it,
with so much rohypnol that she could taste it,

you say i wrote 69 lines, i coulda sworn i didn't,
you must be getting confused thinking some are hidden,
i space out my verses, a blank line between each one,
that must be the line that's got nothing written on,
but don't worry, it keeps me amused,
to see the dumb-ass kid, getting confused,
when you were young you must have been abused,

cos keep talking bout my mum, I think you got issues,
you sit thinking of yours, using up all your tissues
I mean, I don’t mean to diss you,
But you keep talking about ‘us’ and ‘we’
Like you got a homie,
Or two,
Don’t matter to me, Imma still beat you.
So I got the dopest freestyle,
Spitting more freely than the kid from 8 mile,
you know the guy that did win,
b-rabbit I think that called him,
well the streets teach me the same things they taught him,
you spend so long writing every line,
**** that, I spit out an entire rap in half the time,
cause I don’t think, just flow,
let the rhymes twist and wind and just grow,
you diss my mum, I won’t diss yours, I would never stoop so low,
incidentally, neither can she, she’s got a bad back,
must be from years of stooping down to get fucked up the ass crack,
or suck dick like it’s running out,
but she won’t stop when there’s so much a-bout

you keep talking about some egyptian ****,
just running your mouth, i'll need a translation for it.
cos i'm the TNT that gunna explode all over your ass,
just like my cum on your mums, the night before last,
owning like i'm the teacher sending you to the bottom of the class,
while your there you might learn your A, B, C,
but you won't ever understand me,
even if you learn to count to 3,
you still won't know which ones your daddy,
cos your mum fucked 1 man, 2 man, 3 man, 4
turns out that you're just the son of a whore,
she only stopped at that because her pussy, it just couldn't take anymore,
it's so stretched now you just strolled out like through an open door.
so if you can do better than this,
don't moan and piss,
just hit me back with a better diss,


Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Mon 15 Nov, 2010 09:55 am
@TNTABC123,
Looks like someone has me tagged all along
All you ever do is brag on a song
You damn right I get confused over spaces between verses
Can't even tell whether they're hooks, one-liners or stanzas
You rhyme some bad ****
And I know the third line of this verse didn't rhyme - well, that's too bad
You wrote your first one just to call out - man , be glad
Now we're having a slangin' match; fancy that!
I only responded to you because you seemed lonely
This response is what you're seein', homie
Listen, I don't usually talk about other people's mothers and fathers
Brothers or daughters, cousins, uncles or chihuahuas
Aunties or stepmothers or grandmas
Best friends, wives, husbands or grandpas
So I'll talk about my own - let's start with my momma
She got hit by my poppa when my brother was small
But as my brother got tall, my momma gave birth
To another baby boy thanks to the nurse
He has autism
Learning problems that he can't get over or he can't dissolve
And that nerd has problems with makin' friends
Got bullied for just bein' a crazy man
Things were a little bit shady then
'Cause I was forced to keep my autism from ladies and
They kept labellin' me freak, jerk, insane and bad
And ever since I've been gullible lately, man
When I was a little kid, my Dad walked out the house
Left my Mum to pout about
There was no hearin' from him again, he ain't gonna come around now
He's gone to marry someone else out of town
I just found out my brother and cousin sister were together
They held a secret wedding, got married and left us forever
But I never drunk alcohol to drown my sorrows
Or never smoked ten cigarettes or a pound of Marlboro's
Just to **** myself up
And what's even more messed up
IIs that people take their perceptions and dress them up
To sugar the pill, instead of coming out with it
But I look at them still, their views sound real without gimmicks
But they've never discovered my real image
Instead they hit me with jokes and feeble disses
Which brings me to my abuse by the stepmother
Who beat me with a wooden spoon or anything made of rubber
No, not a condom! I mean kitchen utensils
Stickers or pencils, scissors or stencils
A carving knife, a teaspoon that's plunged into liquid
Battered me with a bat or lunged me with a big stick
Even took the Megadrive and smashed it on the floor
I was never scared by this kind of anger before
I guess experience is a worthwhile thing
When I'm buildin' a story into these words I sing
I'm not trying to be a Don or a birdseye king
Then again, there's no such thing as that, is there ...... ?
All those things I said about you are all false, don't take it personally
I'm just trying to look in the face at adversity
And addressin' them pre-emptively as I am doin' now
I hope I've gotten through to you now
Everything I've spit is true down to to the last line
So no hard feelings, homie, I just write to pass time
This is not a diss or a joke at your expense
I'm just fuckin' with you, homie, I just hope we can be friends




 

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