dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Sun 6 Nov, 2005 10:35 pm
Slipperz wrote:

"L.G.. Lifes Good".. i got a fridge n dryer and i aint ever paid cash,
I'll "drive-by" ya house some time n give it sum free "stained glass"..
I see U attmped nameplay here, was okay. Could of hit alot harder..
gay ass.. i heard you always tryin' on puttin ya tongue to your nob
lol.. ya avatar, i think ya confused what its like to put a gun to a "dawg"
lol, Okay? not the best personal. lol
God.. Lythic's in denial that slips ill spits is comin from the south
Lythic's in da "Nile", he got so much "**** running from the mouth" (river)
lol, nice..
Bitch is gettin cursed as if he was prayin in a hallway with a dozen ghosts
Meant to go first but like a mailman on a holiday he just doesn't "post".
lol, nice closer.


Lythic wrote:

Yo slipperz I don't consider u competition, ur lines lack comprehension
Guess that's why u use notes on the side for description
lol, okay punch
Come to my hood and I'll leave u in the fetal position, bloody and twich'n
Nigga stop bit*h'n, u got my attention
lol. not feelin' this bar at all.
When u read this post, remember u begged to get abused
Talkin' to me all wrong, got me confused....
lmao, weak man, filler.
Wit another, ur the down low brother!
I rep the "dirty south" like pubic hairs on ur mother
lol, nice.Read the signature "I clap clowns",use hollow tip rounds after I hunt them down with hell's hounds
lol.. what's this man? wasn't a good punch.
Piss ur pants, u dont stand a chance, save ur rants
Renovate ur style and revamp, build up skill then come see the champ!
okay flow, but not good. for a closer.

Flow: lythic
Structure: Both
Wordplay: Slippz
Metaphors: Slippz
Punches: both- some punches were borderin' on the line of "wackness" some.
Multies: Slippz
Enjoyment: both.
Vote: Slippz
Enplanation: slippz just had it with his punches, wasn't hittin' all that hard but they were hittin' and it was enough to take this battle. lythic I've seen U do alot better than taht man, why didn't u come hard in this battle? seemed like U felt Urself too much and didn't try. and dont go bitchin over this vote either, it's how I see it.
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Sun 6 Nov, 2005 11:24 pm
iz anybody online??
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Sun 6 Nov, 2005 11:30 pm
yup.. yo, what's up.
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Sun 6 Nov, 2005 11:38 pm
ey man, it's borin most of da times ppl talk too much here but all g0od
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mintsportman holymagic
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 06:36 am
yo
your ain't no reggy artist\
and I ain't hittin on u\
stop playing me\
its clear you have more Jamaican in you\
I'm nice when i'm freein\
who u think you bein\
his pants r new\
his shirts new\
man dun get mad that a chinese kid dresses betta then you\
man i'm freestylin now\
its a rap\
matter of fact\
you should ack clif on how to tie ur shoews tighter\
better yet, you should pay him to be a ghostwrita\
you ain't beatin me\
i'll be in yo face, and your not eatin me\
take ur sry ass home.\

hows dis ?
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tha probem
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 07:50 am
yall dont got nuttin
i thought u kats was gud but yall getting beat up
so chill dont act up u will get smacked up
i had alot of niggaz chokin on sum hot licka
i was busy doin ma thing like a cold striper
do **** wit me coz u messing wit da wrong niggaz
mention ma name in ur linez
then try to battle me then i will press on ma own triggz
understand

tha probem
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mc slipperz
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 09:01 am
"L.G.. Lifes Good".. i got a fridge n dryer and i aint ever paid cash,
I'll "drive-by" ya house some time n give it sum free "stained glass"..
gay ass.. i heard you always tryin' on puttin ya tongue to your nob
lol.. ya avatar, i think ya confused what its like to put a gun to a "dawg"
God.. Lythic's in denial that slips ill spits is comin from the south
Lythic's in da "Nile", he got so much "**** running from the mouth" (river)
Bitch is gettin cursed as if he was prayin in a hallway with a dozen ghosts
Meant to go first but like a mailman on a holiday he just doesn't "post


Yo slipperz I don't consider u competition, ur lines lack comprehension
Guess that's why u use notes on the side for description
Come to my hood and I'll leave u in the fetal position, bloody and twich'n
Nigga stop bit*h'n, u got my attention
When u read this post, remember u begged to get abused
Talkin' to me all wrong, got me confused....
Wit another, ur the down low brother!
I rep the "dirty south" like pubic hairs on ur mother
Read the signature "I clap clowns",use hollow tip rounds after I hunt them down with hell's hounds
Piss ur pants, u dont stand a chance, save ur rants
Renovate ur style and revamp, build up skill then come see the champ!

votes
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ARTILLERY
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 09:04 am
the saloution
cold stripa meet jack the ripa a stoned cold killa. looks like u just steped in to path of my rath u are now entring the unkownzone so it be wise to leave ur hot licka alone stand real close to a phone cause im prone to act up but first watch as i steadaley stack ryme after ryme they come to me 3 at a time time after time that s##t u spit was a crime u simp littel nit wit i already dug ur pit so go ahead and just sit down in ur little hole as i take whats left of ur rapin soul now leave the battling to the pro artillery is for real u see.
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 10:21 am
mintsportman_holymagic wrote:
yo
your ain't no reggy artist\
and I ain't hittin on u\
stop playing me\
its clear you have more Jamaican in you\
I'm nice when i'm freein\
who u think you bein\
his pants r new\
his shirts new\
man dun get mad that a chinese kid dresses betta then you\
man i'm freestylin now\
its a rap\
matter of fact\
you should ack clif on how to tie ur shoews tighter\
better yet, you should pay him to be a ghostwrita\
you ain't beatin me\
i'll be in yo face, and your not eatin me\
take ur sry ass home.\

hows dis ?


Okay, this would of been good if U ddn't bite the verse.
Jin said that verse in his 106th and park freestyle battles....

Jin the Emcee wrote:

U aint a reggae Artist and I aint hatin' on U
Stop lyin' Miss Cleo was more jamacain than U
I'm nice when I'm freein', Who U think Ur bein?
My pants are new, My sweater is new!
Don't be mad at a chinese kid, dressed better than U
I'm freestylin' now, it's rap, matter of fact.
U should ask Clef how to make Ur flow tighter
Better yet pay him 20 Gs to be Ur ghostwriter
cause U aint beatin' be, I could be a buffet and U ain't eatin' me.
Don't make me start rappin' in chinese on the microphone
{speaks Chinese} that means take Ur sorry butt home


lmao, so it U come up with Ur own ****, than maybe U'd do better!
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Lythicgod
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 12:57 pm
for realz, i aint mad at ya
I know I can do better, I have yet to post my best on this board since there a lot of biters
If yall say slipperz won that's cool i just didn't feel like I had to come that hard do to the fact his post didn't flow or make much sense to me ...whatever

I aint takin' it personal, my hat's off to u slipperz
They say u won , I wont argue hit me up if u wanna go at it again
peace
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mintsportman holymagic
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 02:29 pm
dude i didn't say it was mine i just asked how it was ?
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Lythicgod
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 06:17 pm
Fuc dat sh*t Slipperz I'm calln' u out!

The last battle was a fluke, so dont think ur ahead of the class, u barely passed
Ur just a slipper, I'll put my foot in ur ass
Lythic is still ur God, so I better see u at mass
Ur **** dont make much cents, cuz ur a bumb
Ur city dont respect u, that's why u dont say where ur from
My poetry is potent marijuana, causin' blunt force trauma
I spin heads, when I spin webs wit my lyrical antics
So I'm not surprised mc's that think they fly get stuck on my semantics
Ur feelin' frantic, not to mention my flow is coherent, on a mission
I got u sweat'n like Bill O'Reilly at a rap convention
The flow is scary, "big words" grab a dictionary
Treasonous malfeasance put niggaz in the mortuary
I'm fire, ur fired!
U dont have the skillz required
Like the 25th second on the shot clock, ur time expired
Michael Jackson aint got sh*t on this son, I fondle microphones while lyrics penetrate my victim
Drop barz more intimidate'n then prison, better listen
Before i shank u on the yard, get mangled, marred and scarred
For infinity by the ryhme'n divinity
I'll lacerate u, then assasinate u like a Kennedy

wait'n on u to respond
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 07:56 pm
now, that was a nice drop.
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 11:01 pm
nice lythic man...how many rounds is your battle wit slippz?
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Lythicgod
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 11:36 pm
he never replied but I'm callin him out
they said he won the first one, but I wasn't feeln what he wrote the first time so i posted and I'm waiting
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 11:41 pm
k0ol..pretty sik though
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Lythicgod
 
  1  
Reply Tue 8 Nov, 2005 12:08 am
thanx, i was cocky before that's why i didnt try the first time
and im still cocky that nigga cant rock me
im a real mc i battle niggaz on the mic face 2 face

still waiting slipperz
what u want one, two, three rounds what's up?
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Tue 8 Nov, 2005 12:46 am
ill judge fo da battle aswell..am just waitin fo slipzz to drop his verse
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Tue 8 Nov, 2005 12:54 am
lol yeah, Spittin' face to face is fun. it's funny as **** when U diss the opponent and he gets embarrased, but Net rappin' is harder i think cause U actually Have to think about what You're goin' to say and not sound stupid or gay, putin' more thought into you're raps. with wordplay and ****.
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Tue 8 Nov, 2005 01:15 am
lol s0o true DOC s0o true
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