lmao **** up you're creativity sports man.
watch I'll spit a little freestyle, here... not gonna be good, but it well give U a look at good structure and ****.
yo man i'm just tryign to get some **** happening got da practice u no
its risky, but i'm frisky, liek i drink whisky
lol nvm then, I wont' spit a freestyle.. Ur just practisin'. lmao.
no cmon man can u show me how to do it good ?
Slippz Said:
"L.G.. Lifes Good".. i got a fridge n dryer and i aint ever paid cash,
I'll "drive-by" ya house some time n give it sum free "stained glass"..
Okay.. Weak bar
gay ass.. i heard you always tryin' on puttin ya tongue to your nob
lol.. ya avatar, i think ya confused what its like to put a gun to a "dawg"
Okay.. Not really hitting hard
God.. Lythic's in denial that slips ill spits is comin from the south
Lythic's in da "Nile", he got so much "**** running from the mouth" (river)
Okay bar.. Not feelin that much
Bitch is gettin cursed as if he was prayin in a hallway with a dozen ghosts
Meant to go first but like a mailman on a holiday he just doesn't "post".
Best bar yet.. GOOD
Lythic Said:
Yo slipperz I don't consider u competition, ur lines lack comprehension
Guess that's why u use notes on the side for description
Okay... okay personal
Come to my hood and I'll leave u in the fetal position, bloody and twich'n
Nigga stop bit*h'n, u got my attention
Weak bar
When u read this post, remember u begged to get abused
Talkin' to me all wrong, got me confused....
Weak bar
Wit another, ur the down low brother!
I rep the "dirty south" like pubic hairs on ur mother
LMAO!! ahaha funny bar
Read the signature "I clap clowns",use hollow tip rounds after I hunt them down with hell's hounds
Nah..
Piss ur pants, u dont stand a chance, save ur rants
Renovate ur style and revamp, build up skill then come see the champ!
Weaker closer
Flow: Slippz
Structure: Both, Easy to read
Wordplay: Slippz
Metaphors: Slippz
Punches: --
Multies: Slippz
Enjoyment: Both.. Each had really one good bar that I liked
Vote: Slippz
Enplanation: Slippz came with more..More elements.. Lythic didn't have any hard punches.. they were just statements basically.
yo man i can't wait for 23 day dawgs b day yo
lol... naw, don't wanna waste lyrics to show U how to rap. lol....
Jut keep practicin'
Iight.. Who wanna go?!? 2 on 2 battle.. It will be :
Fo-Realz & Dr_ Eryk VS.
So if you wanna go just holla back
yeah, I'm down. Say the word and well get it started.
yo ill do it with sum1 fo realz and doc..jus giv me sum1 and ill spit
for real u gotta be kidding me what punches did he have his **** didnt even make since someone else judge ur fuckin crazy metaphors my ass
his **** doesnt even flow
Lythic.. that spit u posted was weaker.. you can do betta then that.. You only had one really good bar.. and one good bar doesn't make your rap better.. You are a good spitter.. it's just that this battle wasn't gud fo u.. and I ain't gonna judge ya battles from what I know you can do..
Hey if you still disagree.. Don't ask for ya spits to be judged if you don't wanna hear the truth.. You ain't always gonna win every battle.. Man you can do so much better but that spit was f*cking weak.. It basically sounded like all you did was rhyme bigger words together..
yo
your ain't no reggy artist\
and I ain't hittin on u\
stop playing me\
its clear you have more Jamaican in you\
I'm nice when i'm freein\
who u think you bein\
his pants r new\
his shirts new\
man dun get mad that a chinese kid dresses betta then you\
man i'm freestylin now\
its a rap\
matter of fact\
you should ack clif on how to tie ur shoews tighter\
better yet, you should pay him to be a ghostwrita\
you ain't beatin me\
i'll be in yo face, and your not eatin me\
take ur sry ass home.\
hows dis ?
