Shotty
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 08:28 pm
They call me beretta,
aka snatch your damn chedda,
i've been know to shyne even through the darkest weatha,
come thicker then the spary of a shotgun skatter,
I influence people, some call it brain wash, in rap we it the gift of gab,
you call a mcee yellow on stage watch'em call for a cab,
I've seen kids bang with their colored rags,
I spent hours droping science on paper w/ my pen and office max pad,
and yet haters hate me because of the way that I rap,
they only jealous cuz I had a label before the industry turned into rats,

simple, you know what i'm saying, I can get into codes but then people don't take the time to decode them so whats the point. 1
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SNIPE
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 08:40 pm
Contagous
Yo! Yo Contagous! whats you waiting for? Did you run and hide? Or did you jerk off and die.
If you didn't, you gonna wish you did. When I get through with you your gonna look like sh$t.
Aw, you little baby wineing like a b$tch. If you keep it up I'll slap you silly , and throw you in a ditch.
What you take me for? A mutha fu@king joke.
I don't need to be here on A2K, talking junk without my glock.
I got a back up to with hollow point forty fives. They ain't no joke.You'll look like swiss cheese in 1-2-3HeHe HAHA HE HE HA ha
It will be so sweet once I defet ya punk a$$
I'm not playing this game with you nomore fool.
You are all coolaide, and gots no juice.
When you get some real game you can come back around my way.
Until then, my rymes are tight and you gots no game.
PEACE

Im going to bed. Tired as hell. Check off where I left off tomorrow. Very Happy
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 08:46 pm
ImsdaL wrote:
TriksteR... wanna battle?
i'm not like these wannabegangsta kids around here.. I deliver wordplays, multies and not just the gangsta-single-rhyme-sh!t thats around here.. (except eryk and you.. and perhaps also professor)

I'll take that as a compliment man! lmao.... **** was gone for like 5 hours and we have a bunch of newbies ****! lmao...
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ImsdaL
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 08:52 pm
many newbies, allthough VERY little skill has joined.. hehe..

btw, shotty.. you a signed rapper? if not, don't say you are... that goes out to all... if you're not a "gangsta" don't pretend to be.. if you don't own a beretta, don't say you do.. makes you look childish..This is not directed to anyone in spesific.. Smile
hehe Wink

common text i see in here :

i live in the hood
i eat food
i shoot you with my glock
you suck cock.
50 cents wanted to sign me
you can't find me.

there should be a moderator or something to delete posts with verses like this.. hehe Wink
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TheTruth 2
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:05 pm
fifty's a punk bitch...
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:07 pm
If all you rappers is all punchlines I bury your frontline
I'm hot like the sun you can't look at me ONE-TIME
Even now, while I chill in the crib, heal my exit wounds
Caught 2 in the arm, but I be creepin the streets soon
My niggaz is 730 ridin dirty, the REAL SIN CITY
If you don't feel me aint wit me get clapped with mack millys
Ain't gotta raise arms, my cuttie keep a 9 in his palm
A Nina in his pocket, that bitch always come along
Think you strong, you hyped up by 50 and DMX
You livin in the suburbs, What color's a wic check?
How many a banana clip hold? How many keys you sold?
How many boosters you know? Pressures on, you gon fold?
Whoa! thats real life this internet **** give you time to think
In real life the wolves eat you way before you can blink
These Niggaz move in silence, huntin down your position
You not G, You not a thug Who the fuk is you kiddin?
But I ain't with atleast not on this site, not here
I use words so that they clear easier on your ears
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TheTruth 2
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:26 pm
shut the **** up you wack mothafucka, guns don't make you good at rappin...
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Comptonbound3
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:36 pm
dr_eryk wrote:
Comptonbound3 wrote:
theprofessor wrote:
yo lythic im serious i already have a six min song i did yesterday

compton bound this is for you

i tend to offend
children women an men
pull out my tech lines
they blow you away like tech nines
your a wannabe pac
battle me if you wannabe convulsing in shock
cock back my glock
if you owe me money for rock
you wont be able to talk let alone walk
i dont like your tone
i'll be breaking your bones
with lyrics hearter than stone
bricks i use to crack pricks
am i sick cause i worship six sick six
this motha **** licks dicks
a crack feen in need of a fix
i crack your spleen like a twix
you negate the facts
i commit negative acts
comet reacts against your skin when put on your tampax
sinkin in like sin
inside rotten flesh in the trashbin
battle me you get your faced smashed in
your out like 8d's fashion
i have a passion to give you a verbal smashing
your to mondaine
you expect to entertain
i'll disect your brain like cocaine
hopefully the pain will explain why you complain
comptonbound
you wanted to go a round
well your goin down against the devils hounds
in the river of styx your drowned




lets hear your come back compton
doc and lythic you be the judge


Just curious, pls. judge this rap battle from a way back:

I shoulda told u in advance
that you aint got no chance,
jus facin me made u piss in ur pants,
but other than that, they aint never been wet,
you haven't even hit puberty yet,
and now uve fallen deep into debt, u got no job,
cos u too busy getting blowjobs, round the clock,
lickin doctor's cock,
im a wannabe pac?
u tend to offend children and men,
ur a wannabe Michael Jackson.
so while u be singin thriller,
ill be ur lyrical killer,
puttin u down with a, lyrical tirade,
makin u speechless and tryin to play charades,
**** im a devil, my sins never sink in,
I do whatever the **** I want, I
can beat u without even thinkin,
imma waste u like u been drinkin,
six bottles of Bacardi dark,
ur facin me, surrounded by sharks,
a small fish in a big sea,
imma teach u to never **** around with me,
go ahead and try to smash my face in,
its ur own time ur wastin,
u couldn't even splash a stone into a basin,
I was plannin on erasin,
any skill that u had,
but **** u rap even worse than my dad,
I aint complainin, im just bein real,
if I had a dollar for every dick that u feel,
Id be a rich man,
get urself a bitch man,
quit living off masturbation.
u sound a little washed up, u need to take a vacation,
as a matter of fact, take one for life,
u about to die cos u just got stabbed with the lyrical knife.


I'll judge this...

Structure : Both, Both were wack..
Flow : Both, Both had a good flow through-out
Meta's : proff..
Multies : Proff
Punches : Compton
Personals : Compton
Wordplay : None, if there was then it wasn't good. lol.. therefor I ignored it..
Enjoyment : Compton, He flipped proffs verse good, Sayin' my name in his rap wasn't a good thing though..
Vote : Compton
Explaination : yo, This was a close battle! Both came with the same ammount of skill, but Compton just edged it by a little bit. If proff just came a little harder then it would of been his battle, but Compton has my vote.. Good battle.....

Compton we should battle, lol.. if you want a lose, just hit me up. lol...



i dont know, this battle didnt finish votin, let me know how we did, doc thx for ratin it

3-0 KO
first to 5 wins?
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:36 pm
Aww look somebody is gettin mad. You're so sensitive. Need a tissue...BITCH!!
I ain't never said they made me good at rappin...
See besides for maybe like QUIKKID, all of you are garbage. What r u even sayin when y'all spit. Few puchline thrown together and you think its good. See it gotta flow together. Stop gettin so emotional. SPIT A COMEBACK OR SHUT UP!!!
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:41 pm
Aww look somebody is gettin mad. You're so sensitive. Need a tissue...BITCH!!
I ain't never said they made me good at rappin...
See besides for maybe like QUIKKID, all of you are garbage. What r u even sayin when y'all spit. Few puchline thrown together and you think its good. See it gotta flow together. Stop gettin so emotional. SPIT A COMEBACK OR SHUT UP!!!
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:41 pm
Aww look somebody is gettin mad. You're so sensitive. Need a tissue...BITCH!!
I ain't never said they made me good at rappin...
See besides for maybe like QUIKKID, all of you are garbage. What r u even sayin when y'all spit. Few puchline thrown together and you think its good. See it gotta flow together. Stop gettin so emotional. SPIT A COMEBACK OR SHUT UP!!!
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:41 pm
Aww look somebody is gettin mad. You're so sensitive. Need a tissue...BITCH!!
I ain't never said they made me good at rappin...
See besides for maybe like QUIKKID, all of you are garbage. What r u even sayin when y'all spit. Few puchline thrown together and you think its good. See it gotta flow together. Stop gettin so emotional. SPIT A COMEBACK OR SHUT UP!!!
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 09:46 pm
my bad didnt mean to put it up 4 times. computer screwed up
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kickycan
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 10:39 pm
and f*ck you, I'm through, can't screw, cuz my crew
leaves you to do, and me to be blue
balls on a half stick, you better eat dick
cuz I'm the bad click click click
shave you p*ssy when I say die
cuz fruity boyz dont' cry
Whore, whore, more....
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 10:54 pm
Icewater wrote:
Aww look somebody is gettin mad. You're so sensitive. Need a tissue...BITCH!!
I ain't never said they made me good at rappin...
See besides for maybe like QUIKKID, all of you are garbage. What r u even sayin when y'all spit. Few puchline thrown together and you think its good. See it gotta flow together. Stop gettin so emotional. SPIT A COMEBACK OR SHUT UP!!!


we're all garbage? wtf you on? no way you can tell me you're shits good!
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 11:04 pm
My profile say "just hatched" but I feel like a Veteran
I be on this site for a month, then leave it for dead again
Better yet, a week, so listen to me when I speak
I'm bout ruin what y'all consider so called MCs
THETRUTH is a lie, a hoax, a big fukin joke
Say he gon get me back, did he? Umm... NO!
Who are you? tell me what good rap is and what it aint
You lettin it get to your brain, THETRUTH is-just-your-name
CONTAGOUS, he the same way that nigga wasted away
Retaliated with eight bars dawg he dug his own grave
Try to be the big fish in the pond, till he got filletd
Talkin he gon bring that heat he got burned in place
He learned in shame, the rest of yall should learn the name
I'm here to take heads off, I ain't here to entertain
Next up THEPROFESSOR, you don't walk on ****
I'm sick, I outwit, I have you shittin out bricks
Say your rhymes gon kill, YEAH! And Monica aint **** Bill
Take a step out dreamland, dawg I'm just keepin it real
Matter fact IMSDAL won't you go and rate these lines
These niggaz wastin time, time to embrace my kind
As I erase your shine, A new breed the new boss
Yea I hear you spit but we ain't cut from the same cloth
Aight Whats good SNIPE? nigga your **** aint ripe
Not even close, don't let nobody gas you up off hype
Everyone of your posts you said you aint no joke
I'm still laughin, from the start that boat wasn't gon float
DRERYK you need work, junior pull down you skirt
Jus cause you been here a while don't mean this your turf
And I see that you got a lil clique, but you need to understand
They only think you hot off the strength of your man
AND IF I DIDN'T METION YOUR NAME DON'T MEAN I'M SCARED
YOU WANNA BATTLE HOLLA THE TIME AND I'LL BE THERE

"Don't get mad boys and girls I'm jus pushin your buttons. HAHA!! See Me 1"
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Fri 14 Oct, 2005 12:27 am
eyo imsdal bruh, ur a pretty sik judge man keep it up :wink:
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Icewater
 
  1  
Reply Fri 14 Oct, 2005 12:31 am
Yo IMSDAL what you think of my ****. You got a good judgin style. Whats really good?
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tImE bAnDiT
 
  1  
Reply Fri 14 Oct, 2005 12:34 am
ey icewater how do u get that thangg under yo reply..

"A man is measured not by what he does for himself but what he does for someone else..."
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Fri 14 Oct, 2005 12:35 am
damn, dissed me hold up i'll spit one back.. i'll sp;it it right now...
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