Neverending Rap Battle

WaterProof wrote:

Time bandit, what you counting down fore? Your own death?
You linked that fukking C-4 to your own chest
You working for Usama now blowing your self to bits?
Well go on and do that while ima suck on your bitchs tits
Rubbing her clittoris, getting her flowers from the florist
Shes happy with me now, didnt see that one comming
Fukk it im from Sweden and I write better rhymes than you
You just stealing words, cocking it up to a big spit stew

i got a rap artillary blast ur head off tonight
diss other rapperz and it gives me the right
say any m*thaf*kin thing that i like
u cant see with no light, ill stab u in the f*kin dark
my rhymes are lyrically painful and blissfully smart
b*tch nigga u just rappin my flow hurts u right back
i show no mercy when i bust u with this gat
u pussy ass, am sik of wanna-be MC's
ull neva get a record deal, incenerate u a thousand degrees
swedish? please..heard u got a f*kin disease
rappin like chinese, get som rap advice from proffessor PLZ
frm now on u should keep ur words and rhymes low
show up on this site and im gonna blow
rappins my profession now lets see whos the pro
smashin rappers with boulders, im too hot for show
swedish rapper damn ur dreamin
take oxygen then ull stop breathin
swedish fag, u got a mouthfull of semen
worship me b*tch , im hells newest demon
control your soul, f*ck you like eamon
flippin words, 2-thirds, im down with the h0od
ur soft, and just started, im too bizzare and too good
flows explicit too hard to explain
im the rap master, u cant handle this pain

Somebody call the ambulance the doc bout to get hit
Taste of his own medicine and he gettin real sick......
Simple, allthough a punch.. (not a good one though.)



The more you speak the more you losin my respect
"you murder days of the week?" YEEEAA you really not a threat
Wack punch.

Disoriented from playin hours of the first-person shooter
Somebody tell him I ain't on the MIC I'm at the computer
First you try to diss him for playing hours of shoot'em'up games, then you're at the computer and whatnot? weird punch. who's the bigger nerd?
learn to write punches that doesn't backfire man..

Come on Doc how you gon operate if you fukin goin crazy
Thought you was hot, do you just suck or are you gettin lazy?
LAME punch.. seriously... LAME

Tellin me I'ma newbie, you figured that out by yourself
You ain't see my profile? Come on dawg here let me help
"Icewater-Newbie-joined Oct-11-2005"
Still don't make you no better, think you gon **** up my high
Blablablablabla... theres not even a Punch-attempt in here... just 4 lines of cr*p.

Makin your diss official like its really a big issue
Its still trash to be put out, for you its beneficial
WEAK punch.. big issue - beneficial, do they rhyme?

Now you can start from scratch change you name and come back
First brush up on the skills that you ass clearly lacks
what an original punch! WRONG! lame again.

Heres a warning shot, walk away if you still wanna shine
For your dumass, lemme end it with a new nursery rhyme
Your whole VERSE has been a nursery rhyme man... no wait, it's not THAT good..

"there once was a man named doctor ERYK
to get some skills he was willin to lose his shirt
but nobody saw potential, then DR_ERYK relly hurt
when a newbie cam and demoted him to nurse"
The last line was the only decent punch in this verse.. BRAVO!

He says were wastin' time, when he does exactly the same with a wack spit
must literally out ya mind, comin' at us with them weak ass generic hits
Too simple, but a decent personal punch...

Ice quit makin' up ****! since when did I say this turf was mine?
but let me tell U if it was U'd be finished before U started Ur 1st line
mine-line-dine-sign, try to make more complex rhymes.. still there's a punch in there somewhere

fu*k it, I'll do everyone a favor and put ur wack ass to rest
what are you gonna do when you get beat by everyone dissed? what's next?
naaaaah...

Just to show U spit ****. I'll print Ur spits and throw 'em in the tolet bowl
the deeper we go into this battle, the deeper Ur diggin' Urself a hole
still nooo.... know what a 'filler' is ? thats the line with so significant meaning that comes before a punch.. all your lines so far have been a 'filler'.. weak punches.. allthough i see you try.

I know Ur flow isn't hot with a name like 'icewater', dr.suess is more of a threat
sayin' you feel like a vet? sayin' my name is the 1st thought i'll make U regret
dr.suess? i'm not even gonna get started on that one.. hehe.. Be more creative with your punches though.. i hate these "i'm the best so watch out you'll regret", kinda punches.. they are weak.

I murder the days of the week, and dissin' U wasn't in my agenda
but since U said my name, I have to do more than just offend ya
WOOOW a multie!!! agenda-offend ya!! first sign of complexity is here! .. nice man.

I rip the fu*kin' mic from Ur hands? what were U doin' holdin' one?
you aint takin' 'first' place, Icewater I have this beef won (one)
i think you're trying to do some wordplay here but doesn't work.. why does people keep talking about mic's`?? this is the internet, and you use a keyboard..

U wouldn't be considered an MC if that really was Ur initials
Ur diss was a wack attempt, I'm makin' my diss official
first line was kinda cool, but the second line sucked.. rhymes are too simple

makin' it hit hard in everyway, so my name doesn't slip from ya head
U ain't at my level, U just another able2know 'newbie'..enough said
nope, that was a WACK ending.. the ending is supposed to hit hard, but this one missed...it was WAaaaay off..