Neverending Rap Battle

Man this one right here's just for fun, I do it with a smile
CONTAGOUS took his "Poopie Doopie" line straight from 8-Mile
Tweaked and turned it but ****, it still sound the same
You too naive little boy, end all them gimmicks and chrades
Before you Fade not from death, on its border in a coma
Turn every bitch in your life and your wife to a transporter
I'm beyond this rap ****, I'm beyond movin plastic
I'm on a level you wont be, you can't do enough practice
Count your blessins, y'all are stressin, you fake, it ain't no question
Act like a criminal, I send no less than 10 in your direction
Believe it turn you to a parapalegic, have your mam heavin
On the edge of bed screamin, "MY BABY JUS STOPPED BREATHIN!!!"
Fuckin it with Satan, its blatant, This a WELCOME ALL invitation
No hesitation, come step in the ring and Mutha Fuka get wasted

you catch my drift prof?

i mean, i like your style and your content... just not your simple rhymes
no hating, just pure old feedback

yea i have flow that we know but what i have to show is im not basic
a gun to your skull leaves your face lit
i think i misplaced it
contageous battleing me was bold
but your nothing more than a cold
but im an epidemic
fuk it im just plain sick
i cause pain to stick"
where the sun dont shine
live a yeast infection cleaned out with turpintine
every line is more deadly than stricnine
im sick in the mind
like a sckitzoprhanic
causeing your heart beat to escalate from panic
you flatline and sink like the titanic
this rhymes almost complete
i have to go eat
so admit defeat
i walk on water your beneath my feet

i got what you mean so rate my battle against contageous is it getting better

Yo Contagous, your game is lame.
You should be put to shame.
If you don't want to feel my wraft, clear my path, or you just might fell a cap.
What are you some kind of joke, Sh$i let me clear my throut

yo anyone wanna battle?

o so u say i took a line otta 8 mile/come on now people look at this boy wack style/im here to bring bombs not to make friends/im here to bring all these freestlyer's career to an end/ma rymes r wordz of poets/i spit fire at anyone who wants me to show it/u people should already kno it/im the new nigga here to bring heat/i kno when u c ma true flame here all u could do iz flee/

hit me bac up wit killa **** cuz that **** waz wack

spelling error

yo imsdal wanna battle

PROF:
feedback..

yea i have flow that we know but what i have to show is im not basic
a gun to your skull leaves your face lit
i think i misplaced it
Multiiiies! Hehe.. nice man.

contageous battleing me was bold
but your nothing more than a cold
A bit simple. Bold-cold.

but im an epidemic
fuk it im just plain sick
i cause pain to stick"
Almost a multie, if you'd say "I make pain stick. (plain sick-pain stick)..

where the sun dont shine
live a yeast infection cleaned out with turpintine
every line is more deadly than stricnine
im sick in the mind
Also on the easy side, but you could have made it abit more complex if you had written :
"Every line is more deadly than stricnine,
I've got a sick mind" <- - see you've got a multie.. stricnine-sick mind.

like a sckitzoprhanic
causeing your heart beat to escalate from panic
you flatline and sink like the titanic
A bit easy man. But still a decent punch. "sink like the titanic" is one of the most played lines ever though.. hehe


this rhymes almost complete
i have to go eat
so admit defeat
i walk on water your beneath my feet
Also a bit simple..


Sorry if I sound brutal.. hehe. I'm just trying to give harsh feedback so people learn.. you know? If people said , awww **** professor you are amazing… you'd never go any "higher", know what I mean?
This piece was better, it had some multies and stuff. Content was "so 'n' so"..

A 4 word multie I wrote :
Like your Mom's legs, you'll be
Like tourists going to Bali, you are heading for disaster.
*Bali was the place with all the bombs going off a few weeks ago..

this is for professor



ok c this is y no one want to battle me
cuz everyone i battle turned out to become deceased
yo the heat from ma gun is injust
as a matter of fact u'll probaly just combust
theres nuthin for u to do but just
sit back and fuss
but ma rhymes can also b a medical treatment for the needy
but i batter and take for the selfish and the greedy
mayb i need to just muder u slow and not let stray
but u'll b luckey if i end it fast by jus breakin ur vertabre
but i might tell while ur ahead just stop it
cuz ur bought to feel the wrath of an important prophet


jus 6 bars until u come bac for more

yo this one at imsdal

you rappin wit a dictionary so change your name to bookworm/im the antibody for the rap game you just a shook germ/kid can't save himself even if he had help from the green berrets/cuz my ak bursts out more than someone wit terrets/when it comes to rappin you know my skills demonic/this kid is gonna be takin more shots than an alcoholic/worship theprofessor so stop ridin his nuts/you aint hot your ice cold and i'm choppin you up so u can be cold cuts/does your mom like planters cuz she likes suckin on these gold nuts/me winnin is as inevitable is when dawn drop/this kids raps aint even fit to sell to a pawn shop/i'm just here to make sure the number of bad rappers decrease/you aint gonna amount to anything like a sterile guys release/who are you to break peoples ryhmes down/you couldn't end up on top even if you came back a few times around/what's wit ur name are you from the middle east rockin a turban/well here that **** won't fly cuz where i live is suburban/this kid killin himself like someone flyin a plane for osama/i've seen your **** and it's obvious you don't want no drama/u must look stupid when you come to a battle and don't pack a llama/at least a nine,the steel,an uzi or a mack/nothin then u gonna get smoked quicker than someone addicted to nicotene that jus found a cigarette pack/keep your **** to yourself or you gonna die like a fool/this dude handles more balls than someone who plays pool/i'll repeat my message until i get it through/don't even bother wit a bullet proof vest cuz it will let the bullets through/this my return and now you know it's glorious/call me big cuz soon i'm gonna be notorious/don't play wit the mic cuz it aint a toy/i just cut this bitch up like he brad pitt in troy

nothin against u just needed an opponent

Just to spit . . .
I've been known to spit rhymes harder than pavement,
I sit back and chill as if I was Gary Payton,
stack bills, and roll dutches so good you can taste'em,
swing a blade at me and Im quick to be evasive,
I know kids that'll rip fools here in the 5-5-9,
to the 9-1-6 and back again to have a chance to spit a rhyme,
I've roasted Mcee's who thought they were Ill,
I've toasted BG's who pushed rocks and slanged pills,
I've coasted along the Bay, and flowed to improve my skills,
I've mastered most of these kids style, before they became real,
They call me beretta cuz thats how hard I spit,
They call me beretta cuz thats what I equip,
They call me beretta cuz of its 20 round clip,
Shh. . . don't say a word, but I can put freestyle kings in bag-a-zip

yo snipe i got u next wait yo little ass in line while i battle the professor

you rappin wit a dictionary so change your name to bookworm/im the antibody for the rap game you just a shook germ/
What kind of lame a*s punch is that??? shook germ? come on man..

kid can't save himself even if he had help from the green berrets/cuz my ak bursts out more than someone wit terrets/
You mean people with tourette syndrome? cool wordplay, weak punch.

worship theprofessor so stop ridin his nuts/
Do i worship him? i've given him **** about his text... that the opposite of worshipping... BAAAAAAd punch..

this kids raps aint even fit to sell to a pawn shop
Ever seen/heard my raps? Prewritten **** man... Weak..

who are you to break peoples ryhmes down/you couldn't end up on top even if you came back a few times around/what's wit ur name are you from the middle east rockin a turban/well here that **** won't fly cuz where i live is suburban/
An attempt at some personal punches, still weak as hell man.. And i don't care where you live, this is the internet.. you could live at the northpole for all i care..

i've seen your **** and it's obvious you don't want no drama/
No you haven't... lame ****..

u must look stupid when you come to a battle and don't pack a llama/
Weakest punch ever..

The rest was WEAK sh!t....



I'll reply some other time, a bit busy... and i'm not sure if i wanna even reply to that piece of junk..
DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL MAN...

Peep game, I'm in this **** gettin rid of dum ones quick
Say **** like "get rid of your self" not what you should come with
Elementary rhymes get you treated like kids in detention
Won't leave till you've suffered when you step in my dimensions
I come fast fury, direct hit, we don't skim jack
Everybody knows that hollowtips shatter on impact
And Tha gauge-is, pointed at CONTAG-OUS, so save-it
Start beha-vin, lyrics ain't nothin to play-wit
You a-chin, talkin like you made-it, you fad-in
I was wait-in, But your **** was GARBAGE
What you mean yo rhymes r like poets? Not every poet's great
You brought a lighter to a flame bitch pump your brakes
Still aint see YOUR "flame", you "spit fire", and "bring heat"?
Thats four bars of the same ****, take a week n get back at me
Write it, review it, recite it, these rap lessons are just a blessin
Call it my good deed for the needy, to him keep out of depression
Right I jus got a smile, readin the words of this dreamer
Go ahead drop your bombs, turn this **** to Hiroshima
So slow down, show respect, my every word is sublime
I want start more battles, WON'T YOU BITCHES STEP IN LINE?

yo imsdal did you catch the last part your sinking like the titanic

then at the end i said your beneath me i walk on water with me feet

ah!
noticed it now...
nice sick twist

Words to say,

I see a lot of people using these big words, complex and what not, but I've seen very little slang, using big words is great if your a doctor or a scientist, but I much rather see stuff like Dohja, Soulja, A.P 9,Chatown even some police codes 187, 211, 404, 95k, 5150, you guys can't call yourself lyricaly the best if you don't know slang thats what rap is known for, spit'n in codes Yah-did-I-mean, and this ImsdaL person is right in judging your ryhmes, most the people on here is weak, I only typed stuff just mess with people.(Real Talk)

YO SHOTTY YOU RIGHT
Without slang it aint rap its more like an online book club
Oh and yea a lot of this shits weak.
Spit a few lemme see what you workin with