Neverending Rap Battle

Professor, Your rymes are tight

yo didnt offend me but if you feel its to basic tell me what half the words i said mean tell me about the ppl i mentioned

As i said, you've got too big of an ego to accept constructive criticism. Just practice man, and you'll be great.

You're metaphors were quite nice though..

relax man i took the constructive critism an i appreciate it i just asked a question well 2 to be specific

want me to tell you what half the words mean?

SNIPE WROTE



I go by the name of Muther Fu$king Snipe, and just like a freak I come out at night.
You better not, take me for no joke.
I'll chock you Bi$ch, and slash your throut.

Yo Contagous! What you got a diease. All man, you just made me sneeze.
You sleeze.
Go eat some cheese.
I got the machine to crack your chest plate open.
You bi$ch A$$ nigga.
You smell like sh$t
Poopie, Doopie, Shoobadie poopie scooper. stop being a prankster you fake a$$ gangster.
Now go dry your eyes, cause this was a joke.
(I didn't mean no harn just like your name.)

I'm just having fun. No Offence


I WORTE


yo snipe/the words u spit sound like words comein from the mouth of a dike/oo i made u snezze and me go eat sum chesse?/thos sound like the nursury rymes i told ur mom when she waz on her knees/Poopie, Doopie, Shoobadie poopie scooper????yo name is snipe so u should b makin no nosie/ u sound like a little kid on steriods/ u probaly r a little kid so as a matter of fact/im gunna stop givin u ma lyrical attack!


(none taken yo name is coo too)
lets battle!

homocide = its called homicide btw, and It means "killing of another human being".
battered = beaten repeatedly with heavy blows
contradict = deny the truth of
equilibrium = a stable situation in which forces cancel one another
continuum = a continuous nonspatial whole or extent or succession in which no part or portion is distinct of distinguishable from adjacent parts
Callosum = The great band commissural fibers which unites the two cerebral hemispheres
Copulation = the act of sexual procreation between a man and a woman; the man's penis is inserted into the woman's vagina and excited until orgasm and ejaculation occur
copernicus = Polish astronomer who produced a workable model of the solar system with the sun in the center
combust = start to burn or burst into flames
steroids = drug. any of several fat-soluble organic compounds having as a basis 17 carbon atoms in four rings; many have important physiological effects
digress = wander from a direct or straight course
riccohette = its spelled RICOCHET, and it means to spring back; spring away from an impact.
vertabre = spelled vertabra, and means one of the bony segments of the spinal column
deceased = dead.
comatose = in a state of deep and usually prolonged unconsciousness; unable to respond to external stimuli… AKA Coma..
furnace = an enclosed chamber in which heat is produced to heat buildings, destroy refuse, smelt or refine ores, etc.
melanoma = any of several malignant neoplasms (usually of the skin) consisting of melanocytes


hehe..

tell me what coplualtion means ,continuum, corpus collosum, and tell me a lil bit about sigmund frued an mrcus areilius


you dont have to i just wanna give you a history lesseon

yo..i'll make sometin of those words pro. give me a chance i need to get ma rep up on the from!

man let me battle anybody to get ma rep up!!!!!

Look at the post above you...

all i mean is, just because you use big complex words, doesn't make the rhymes complex....

without a fuking dictionary

but thanks now ppl will understand what i was saying

here read this i put two of my old stuff together


i'll drop you like the two towers
my words are the next world power
they give insight into the depths of humanity
with every rhyme i write,the profanity
expresses the insanity
of what is goin on
god vs cons devils spawns
humans used as pawns whats right whats wrong
is george bush right or is suddam
nuclear bombs
add up to more deaths then both world wars and viet nam
now dont get me wrong im down for gore
im down with the four four
but there wont be anymore
when earth becomes a biological weapon whore
massacre at the front lines
nana technology nuclear land mines
human biology is now without vital signs
my rhymes kill more of the population
than aids in copulation
from malignant melanoma
you'll receive a death diploma
when you graduate out your coma
my hypothese crosses the seven sea's
like the knowledge of socrates
my rhymes crack your head open like a bottle
like the thoughts of aristotle
i cuss
with a force equal to the army of marcus aurelius
i use the heavens like copernicus
watching stars spontaneous combust
i pump my lyrics with intellectual steroids
leaving your mind a sick void
like the thoughts of sigmund freud
i combine rhymes
with space and time
define them with thoughts of einstein

Still cocky.. hehe..

Marcus Aurelius was a Roman general i think.. I know he was portrayed in the Gladiator atleast . hehe.

Sigmund Freud was a guy who studied the human mind, did psychoanalyzes... of some sort.

i like you bro you want you rep up battle me

man...professor help me get da rep up!

lets battle contageous and imsdal

iight u spti first

spit**

i'll drop you like the two towers
my words are the next world power
Okay man, I hear you.. but the rhyming is too simple.. towers-power..
they give insight into the depths of humanity
with every rhyme i write,the profanity
expresses the insanity
Still okay, I hear the message, but the rhyming is still too simple.
of what is goin on
god vs cons devils spawns
humans used as pawns whats right whats wrong
Here you go with some multies, (not THAT good, but it's a start).
is george bush right or is suddam
nuclear bombs
add up to more deaths then both world wars and viet nam
Too simple...
now dont get me wrong im down for gore
im down with the four four
but there wont be anymore
when earth becomes a biological weapon whore
TOoo Basic! Simple rhymes… gore-four-more-whore…. In the last line, you could have expressed the same thing in a better way.. the line could have been better..massacre at the front lines
nana technology nuclear land mines
human biology is now without vital signs
Too easy..
my rhymes kill more of the population
than aids in copulation
from malignant melanoma
you'll receive a death diploma
when you graduate out your coma
my hypothese crosses the seven sea's
like the knowledge of socrates
my rhymes crack your head open like a bottle
like the thoughts of aristotle
i cuss
with a force equal to the army of marcus aurelius
i use the heavens like copernicus
watching stars spontaneous combust
i pump my lyrics with intellectual steroids
leaving your mind a sick void
like the thoughts of sigmund freud
i combine rhymes
with space and time
define them with thoughts of Einstein
The last part here is also tooooo damn basic… sea's - Socrates, bottle-aristotle, etc..
The message is nice, the content is nice, but the rhymes are toooo simple and basic.