Neverending Rap Battle

contageous wrote

damn look at these weak ass rapers thinkin they hard on da mic/
but when i come throu im knockin yo face in wit a lyrical blow like on fight night/
and when u c me u run n hide/cuz i tie u up leavein u confused wit a lyrical bind/
these niggaz is wack mcs claimin to b da ****/but like 50 cent"these niggaz can only rap jus a lil bit"/
i have nuthin more to say to wack ass mc's/ but will the niggaz who think they can rap come battle me!!!!!

i wrote

ur ****

Like a virgin's first time, i got you's all hot for the "opening"/
"poke in" my limpest "bar" and "still" ya's drop n "start smoking"/
Who's joking? wanna clown round then come to the "tight rope"/
N when u "slipp-u p" your "necks" thing will be "more than a light grope"/
I write dope and hit harder with everything i execute/
no hope for you "penthouse gardners" who still can't "pull a root"/
Im "bullet proof" and still im gettin "everything off my chest"/
U r more "sweet" than "oranges",so im eatin flesh n leavin u with a "zest"/
Of slipperz work and what he does best/
Being a jerk to "homeless" girls and "taking away" there "ah..dress"//

Fu.ck, I thought i better drop in and play around with words a bit with ya's.
Not aimed at anyone.

Anyone judge, no DR, no Hate..

Two ways to judge this;
1. Make you're own structure, don't be stupid
2. bar by bar break down

lets get the votes in....

3-0 KO
5-1 TKO
5-? Win.

Or do you want to go a second round?!?! don't matter... if so you spit agian...

Dj quik kid is comin back to this site ya'll.. He pretty damn good for spittin' raps and ****.. if you want to see what he can do, just look back at the pages, way back..

aight i'm out....
keep the votes in or spit you're rap compton if you wanna go round two?

I think a round two is necessary.

yo i dont think its necessary for me doing a voting structure but r.Eryk beat you on all aspects of rap compton! and lyrical content lads...eryk's was more 'lyrical' you could say like i mean ur line sup doc you wanna carrot....parrot..? i duno eryk's just sounded a whole lot better no ofense good battle...ish :S.... but i think you can see eryk won but if ya want me to put up a structure then just tell me yall if not eryk gets my vote

yeah i'd say eryk gets my vote, the way he types his makes it harder to hear someone actually rapping it, but his content seemed a lot better only because the other content sounded like a 6th grader had made it.

3 for the KO....eryk...all

aight that's 3-0, KO... Nice battle comptonbound3..... should do it agian.. lol

Anyone on here right now

yo truth.....you wanna battle me i hear? well ill add another 1 on to your loss's then man!

lol just pissing man but if you wanna battle im totally up for it but you spit 1st bro i gotta sort **** with proff 1st so you can hit me up 1st and ill hit back at chu A.S.A.P

PeACe 0vt

yeah doc, ur pretty good, i would definitely vote for urs too... i dont know, somethin bout settin it up is harder than followin it up cuz i got nothin to build off of, but yeah, u won, im not gonna be one of them pussies who cant take a loss.

nice thanks, next time we battle I'll go 1st and give you the benifit of goin' second alright..

yo was good u already know this be ya boy quikkid back 2 spit it open 4 any new challenges so holla at ya boy

MC TOLMIE KEEP MA NAME OUT YO MUTHAFUKIN MOUTH OR IMA DISS YOU

man i aint had a battle in a quiet minute....any takers???wat about u doc?

TriksteR... wanna battle?
i'm not like these wannabegangsta kids around here.. I deliver wordplays, multies and not just the gangsta-single-rhyme-sh!t thats around here.. (except eryk and you.. and perhaps also professor)

to:Trikstr



yo trikstr yea i owe you this but bring your dictionary's im dropping some new vocab i was watchin the news again yo trikstr its all good i know you mean no disrepect neither do i but our styles are so different i have a huge vocab an multies an my metaphors mixed with my flow you have some good wordplay an punches and flow


yo trikstr we both have respect
but this is about who has sicker intellect
i have a firm belief you talk ****
exlax is the only way you find relief to unclog yourexit
you better run and hide
my threats of homocide
are bonafide
the way i rap is smart
i treat lyrics like a conceptual art
you have to speak with your heart
every elements an equal part
a bat to your head
splatters red
i leave you beaten and battered congrats your dead
all your rhymes contradict
your a pussy who acts like she's gotta dick
you take it in the bum
instead of drinking coke an rum
you guzzle cum
battling me you must be dumb
i maintain my equilibrium
my raps have more structure than continuum
from the way i use my corpus callosum
my rhymes kill more of the population
than aids in copulation
from malignant melanoma
you'll receive a death diploma
when you graduate out your coma
you be soaked when you kiss my shank
you'll be more wet than a bullseye in a dunktank
i turn your epidermus inwards
an rip out your inerds
with the way i use my words
like a volcano i blow
burning hotter than a inferno
with punches an flow
there's only one thing i know
your just another john doe
untill now i was just showing off my vocabulary
im a vocal library


take a breather then read this

my hypothese crosses the seven sea's
like the knowledge of socrates
my rhymes crack your head open like a bottle
like the thoughts of aristotle
i cuss
with a force equal to the army of marcus aurelius
i use the heavens like copernicus
watching stars spontaneous combust
i pump my lyrics with intellectual steroids
leaving your mind a sick void
like the thoughts of sigmund freud
i combine rhymes
with space and time
define them with thoughts of einstein
every line moves with light speed
i do these evil deeds
which cause you to bleed
like the devil i conviced the world i didn't exist
the came back an ruled with iron fists
im gonna list the antichrists like this
napoleon the first hitler second mabus the third
i unleash these demons with every word
every script i flow
cantains a deadly blow
lights out K.O
why do you rap
i do it to give humanity a slap
give its shoulder a tap
trikstr your pussy flaps
louder than thunder claps
shut the fuk up and close your trap
acting like your the best
i leave your rib cage empty with no heart to support your chest
but i digress
as my lungs depress
with my verbal spray
my word play
riccohette's
off your vertabre
and shatters every word you say
every line of mine
is einsteins mind
soaked in stricnine
when i write my inner strengths unleashed
i takes off the leash
and release the beast
my lyrics reach from west to east
i leave even the best deceased
from east to west coast
i leave your minds comatose
with one dose
two and your a ghost
let me be earnest
i was created inside of hells furnace
the mold broke
when i spoke
i left it smolded and bloodsoaked





unlike trikstr im not gonna add anything to this i have no need to as much as this was a battle this was to see who was the better rapper

I go by the name of Muther Fu$king Snipe, and just like a freak I come out at night.
You better not, take me for no joke.
I'll chock you Bi$ch, and slash your throut.

Yo Contagous! What you got a diease. All man, you just made me sneeze.
You sleeze.
Go eat some cheese.
I got the machine to crack your chest plate open.
You bi$ch A$$ nigga.
You smell like sh$t
Poopie, Doopie, Shoobadie poopie scooper. stop being a prankster you fake a$$ gangster.
Now go dry your eyes, cause this was a joke.
(I didn't mean no harn just like your name.)

I'm just having fun. No Offence

Professor :

You've got a nice flow to your texts, and you also have some nice "mental pictures". You've got a lot of nice **** in your text.. But man... you're rhymes are too simple.. You use alot of big words, but "hey" i can also use a diary bro.. Not much of a skill..

combined-entwined-aligned, know what i mean?
Okay, i understand you want to bring forth a message, but it's just too simple man. hehe.
I'm not saying this to be a sh!thead, i know you think you're the forums best at this... so sorry if i offended you in any way.