i wrote a rap song, but its not free stlye but im gonna post it cuz im kewl
rolling into the club,
feeling the love,
mutha fuckas dropping **** from heaven above,
now wat they be sayin aint makin much sense,
maybe rolling them lines makin me more dense,
well **** it i told u time and time again,
and reminded you that dat **** be a sin,
well never listen dats wat yo good at,
making lines, rolling joints, sniffin dat crack,
keepin tellin yoself yo number one,
bitch i got more **** in this loaded gun,
you hate me cuz im white u think its funny,
well my **** be tight and u be running,
so listen to the rhymes come out of my mouth,
and never underestimate a boy from the south,
cuz look at wat im doing beatin ya at yo own game,
you think your so kewl but nobody know yo name,
and the funny thing is i barely listen to rap,
the funny thing is most of its crap,
but listen im making rhymes better than you guys,
does anyone else think dats fucked up or is it just in my eyes?
so as this rap comes to a close and everything ends,
just remember that in the long run i always win,
and never underestimate a white boy again,
cuz bitch im better than you and all of yo freinds.
ok i wrote that for a rap battle on my bus it took like 10 mins to write
yo im here,
and im the one to fear,
only been rapping for alot less than a year,
but im out smooth,
get in the groove,
dropping bombs up high makin u pay da dues,
and i dont mind getting knocked down,
get back up stand on solid ground,
and my **** maybe be whack right about now,
but in the future ill be the one to be crowned
check me!!!
heres tha word of a real masta
hearin fags sayin that they are all gangsta
but they see my nine and I see they fear
see you wanna know who I B
I'm tha cracka thats gone extremly crazy
blazin bout 20pounds of this weed
poppin all this speed, cant be healthy but man I made it a need
**** mayn I got lots-a-greed
nah man not for money, to make bitches bleed
the devils seed
but what you expect, my family put me aside
half tha nigga's I rolled wit was never down ta ride
nobody ever took my side
when I was born my father ran and cried
**** how much I wished he died
after all these years
after all these tears
you'd wonder why I've got shears
in my back pocket
ready to slash tha throut of any fagget
plus I've always got 2 nines on me, Cautious
they hang on both sides of my penis
mayn still wanna **** wit this?
what
this ain't even half I gots
show my face in public and give semaritans spots
have em all lookin like they have "chicken pox"
last person to doupt me lost as badly as tha "Red Socks", did
**** man you should see the last nigga to call me kid
ripped his heart out wit just my bare hands
made him make more noise then highschool bands
**** man my **** has hit tha fan
got more skeletons in my closet than a graveyard
murder your ass too for frontin retard
more bodies on my conscionce then yards in football
only 15 fit in my closet soI buried tha rest in the gravel!!!
Don't **** Wit Me!
Holla out fam
tell me what ya think
here we go again i have to drop something to get rid of these fakes well ok ''
dramma setter
my styles better
when i smile you become a bed wetter
send you anthrax in a letter
i wrote you fukin suck
your still alive out of luck
stab your abs with my knives an leave em stuck
like you white boy and the koon klucks
i'll beat you to death with nunchucks
quit looking dumb struck you dumb fuk
dispose of your flesh in a dumptruck
read a book
shove your head up your ass and make you look
all youll see is ****
yo took it and reused it to spit
i hate illitirite's
that litter my scripts your just waste
its ok youve been misplaced
the landfills were to full so we had to make space
hear listen to what i have to say
your rhymes are jus gay
im mean your the type that looks the other way
straying from females
man you dont even like males
you like shemales
chains and straps
canes an ass chaps
i mean those pussy flaps dont even smack they clap
biches comeback when you can rap
rate this if you want i dont care it was just to get rid of these fagots
DAMN! im with proff these fakes are pissing me off!!!
some 1 rate my **** and ill edit em up thnx
RATE PEOPLE'S |_______|HATE IT RATE DEBATE IT!
[quote="MC TrikstR"]OK IVE HADDA NUFF OF THESE WEAK CATS
BANDIT:
This wack bandit bouta get back~slapped, Scriptin mine will sicken~ya~mind, bury ya rap~stash and shovel it back up but I still aint diggin~ya~rhyme //
Thiz guy'd pry like ta try n' deepthroat~da~mic, ya plain ass Rapz~is~insane, Ya wack style iz like tha homeless~guy cuz yo shitz Askin~fo~change //
Thiz kid lost n' im sayin ****~off ya bust~soft, my Rap~slang came smashin~ya~brainz, ****~law, I bust~jawz wit neckz gettin 'cut off' like passin'~in~lanes //
I KO thiz pest~in~Round~one beatin him worse than Lonely~errections, If he Pressed~an~album it'd sit on the shelf n' cake dust Like Trophy~collections //
Bake~fakez, spit the Blaze~to~they~face, Ya fear~dez~verbz when you hear~dez~wordz... I hate~fakez, Im Like tha Great~Lakez cuz my flowz~superior //
I drop~ya~killed, cuz im rippin and dissin~thiz~kid, Itz a locked~deal wit my written~scriptz, steppin to thiz is more suicide than poppin~pillz n' slittin'~wrists //
TOLMIE:
Theres no hidin where my tek~reaches imma test~u~chump and then 'get~you~jumped' like 'chess~peices'!
Taught these other noobs? I wreck~teachers n blaze~these~idiots ya fuccin 'face~is~hideous' im lookin for the 'next~features'...!
Leave u wit tore~wrists 'hurt~ya~head' like 'noogey~fans' this bitch is like the 'boogey~man' but he 'eats more~kids'!!
You suck dick now u got sore~lips blow the shotty~in~a~motion to leave ya 'body~in~tha~ocean' did i kill bandit? i 'shore~did'!
Punches leave ya face hurlin~back imma leave a dead~cu*t bitch head~up theres no place for girls~in~rap!!
Snatch ya necklace wit the fake pearls~intact not ready to fite~a~guy tolmie is 'like~a~fly' cuz his 'whole world~is~crap'...!!
Bout to go on a chokin~spree you wish u were as dope~as~me as fists~fly i see u 'dick~ryde' he'll prolly 'vote~for~me'!!
Make your throat~just~bleed im tite~at~worst this cu*t would 'bite~my~verse' but i left him wit 'broken~teeth'
FII:
I live in a graveyard of lashed~tires clashed~wires rash~fires that smash~liers as i smoke crack~red
Popped like black~heads wen the tracks~dead peeple like why didnt triks rap~end
Ill~flows smothered in pillows i kill~those i be~vet and if u aint seen~yet i promise u will~know
I skill~pros who think they hot~as~me guns cocked~and~freed dont turn ya back or youll get shot~by~me
I shock~you throw a rock~thru ya window if u think u one of the top~two i stop~crews n fite~back
**** ya gt ill steal the bike~rack and if u think u got tite~raps i like~that cuz ill make u drop the mic~jack
I been thru more~**** steal ya car and floor~it into a telephone pole the day u bought~it
In front of a camera to make sure u caught~it run and lift~the~floor bite ya pet to sick~ya~dog coundnt spit poison if u licked~frogs
COMPTON:
My tech~rubs~til~ya~missin kid dont mess~up we all see ya text~sucks~who~u~dissin...?
I wreck~thugs~wit~ambition imma maim~this~guy hes 'claimin~high' but he couldnt 'get~drugs~wit~perscriptions'...!!
If u 'don wanna die' u 'shouldnt~tempt~me' i rip~bars n like 'stripped~cars' imma make sure 'everythin in ya hood~is~empty'...!!
No 'test' this kid wishin he 'could~exempt~me' im sick~wit~this~man~see cuz like lic~o~rice~candy my punches come 'good~n~plenty'...!
Take ya **** n sun~that I run~rap imma tape this herbs~mouth hit 'him in the ribs' how u gonna get a word~out wit ya 'lungs~trapped'...
This kid wouldnt 'get applause' if my 'guns~clapped' need 'no help' so i 'scare~maids' n like 'air~raids' imma leave his 'tounge~strapped'...!
Im like 'telephone poles' jus i got more 'lines~in~the~street' ill 'spit over this kids verse' and start 'rhymin~his~beats'...!
'Four battles' i guess its just that 'time~of~the~weak', smack~mouths n imma make u 'back~out' when u find ya 'spine~at~ya~feet'...!!
To 'steal the beat' imma 'eat~ya~heart~bitch' im dumb~wit~flows when it 'comes~to~clothes' i got 'more tags' then 'graffiti~artists'..!
You 'come weak' but i can 'defeat~ya~hardest' imma start beatin~ya~knees this kid talks bout 'eatin~emcees' but this 'cheat~is~starvin'...!!!
EVERY1 ON A2K:
Whipe my ass with a preasent n' still couldnt Give~a~****, Take a spatula to a needle wit aidz but you still aint flippin~sick //
I hate~nerdz wit fake ~verbz~.. Ya gettin served like i waz ya ~waiter~, couldnt be phat if ya belt waz the ~equator~ //
Your text is like kinda joe cuz itz ~sloppy~ here ya get torn~apart Only way you makin a hot~beat is if I Torched~ya~heart //
~Unacceptable~.. Spray the chrome lead~in~ya~face... you outta place like the ~devil~ runnin for the heaven~gatez //
Treatin you like nailz see, i pound~ya~werdz.. Slouching~verdz You show more ~weak~ than self advertizing ~calenderz~ //
Im makin~you~look stupid like you waz naked~in~public. bringin you to tha end like the lazt page~of~a~book~bitch //
Get ripped to **** wit quickness, Gotta Blaze~fakez, erie flow like the Great~lakez Only ~BITCHES~ im hearin iz from tha A2K //
Spit 'liquid~heat' but you aint 'pissin~it~back~son', im dumb~tite like 'bad shots in a gun~fite' ill leave you 'missin~in~action'...!
Best be 'enlisting~in~track~dun' cuz you dont 'run~****' you dumb~bitch i dont 'get ya punches' you should keep a 'dissing~in~captions'...!
Like 'phantom of the opera' i mite 'clock~ya~skull' think of somethin~new ill have more 'niggas jumpin~you' than an 'ob~sta~cle'..
Ya 'flows weak' not hard to 'stop~the~pull' beat you open~ly ya 'texts a joke to me' like the 'writin on a pop~sicle'...!!
Im not 'hearin u' kid you should 'shout~to~me' your gonna see~rounds and when u get beat~down youll know im 'TrikstR without~the~T'...!
On 'A2K' but not 'in ya site' you need to 'scout~to~see' shake~ya~flows then 'break~ya~nose' so you gotta open ya 'mouth~to~breath'...!
Like 'rabid dogs' when it comes to tolmie you know 'he~bites' ya name~bores and like 'changed~laws' we know he 'pre~rights'...!!
Imma 'rip U kids' like 'cheap~linen' faagots keep~grinnin cuz like 'spreewell rims' my automatix will make you 'keep~spinnin'...!!
'spray mist' with ya 'weak~spittin' get ya lungs~clapped i 'swallow young~cats' like 'eat~kittens'...!
I got alot of **** to 'walk over' like i 'collect~mats' my flows~bear n ya 'writing isnt goin no~where' like you 'speced~chats'...
Like 'train crashes' i 'wreck~tracks' i 'carry the beef' like 'purse~leather' wanna make ya 'verse~better' ya shoulda made ya 'text~black'...!!![/quote]
some 1 rate this **** please
~peace~
Oh ****, you dissed everyone on a2k? so You dissed me?!
HEY YA'LL LISTEN UP
i think we should do like british VS canadians VS americans we gotta fair share of all 3 countries
lol
like Britain av got me, cuttz and unfortunatly tolmie
canda got proff and eryk the 2 best
and america av got pretty much ery 1 else
lol that'd be phat out
The American team got fo-reals, and theTruth if I get thetruth to drop one here... and quik kid.....
It would be a real good battle, but personals would be hittin' the fan like crazy.
damnt i dont know who to rap against... and i suck so im outta luck
to comptonbound3
u say im **** lmfao
Takes one to know one,
Avoiding tha fact
that you was ridin dr eryks dick a little more than his sack
I aint cuttin no slack. You questionin if im a Shogun?
Your simply Sho'Nuff, IM THA LAST DRAGON... back off tha scrodum
Like Bruce Leroy I run through you weak B-boys
Throwin sonic booms like streetfighter 2 wit elite street toys
U talkin bout decoys while all u do is speak noise Be poised
cuz tha lyrocks I drop meld minds like leonard Nemoy!!
LOL ONLY JKIN
BUT I WOULDNT OF DISSED U
IF U DINT OF DISSED ME,INNIT
to time bandit
oh and time bandit
soz i meant bumb-bandit
u said i was a faggort
ur the 1 wid the little maggort
u might be askin how i know
i was the one that operated wen u turned into a hoe
this is mc tolmie keepin it gangster
time bandit is a wannabe gangster
no that too big, he a wanna be hamster
he's gay,if he aint rappin bout me he rappin bout cum
i think i'll finish coz my rappin is done
to mc trikstar
Your a ponce like Frank skinner
Your tellin people to stop "holyin on your nut sack"
If you had something to rap about i'd give it u back.
i'm on my way back.
your lyrics are stupid,
you need to be special to make ya rhmes cupid
**** it your boring me now play boy, your easy to beat
don't bother replyin because ur aimin for defeat
I WROTE THIS YESTERDAY SUM1 RATE IT PLZ
yo wassup people i ant bin on dis site 4 so long but now im back
and proffesor i know we used 2 have our differences but now i respect you
n i heard bout this big rap battle well im british
OI ERYK IN SOZ I MENTIONED UR NAME IN DAT RAP
IT COZ I JUST WENT BACK AND COPIED AND PASTED IT FROM THE FIRST RAP I DID AGAINST COMPOUND
SOZ
sum1 rate my last rap
be honest
yeh but eryk mang that would be fuking the best bit...personals flying like mad it'd be 1 tough battle and its gon be good
