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wat between me and eryk ?

he wld cain me

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sum1 rate this

to comptonbound3

u say im **** lmfao

Takes one to know one,
Avoiding tha fact
that you was ridin dr eryks dick a little more than his sack
I aint cuttin no slack. You questionin if im a Shogun?
Your simply Sho'Nuff, IM THA LAST DRAGON... back off tha scrodum
Like Bruce Leroy I run through you weak B-boys
Throwin sonic booms like streetfighter 2 wit elite street toys
U talkin bout decoys while all u do is speak noise Be poised
cuz tha lyrocks I drop meld minds like leonard Nemoy!!

to time bandit

oh and time bandit
soz i meant bumb-bandit
u said i was a faggort
ur the 1 wid the little maggort
u might be askin how i know
i was the one that operated wen u turned into a hoe
this is mc tolmie keepin it gangster
time bandit is a wannabe gangster
no that too big, he a wanna be hamster
he's gay,if he aint rappin bout me he rappin bout cum
i think i'll finish coz my rappin is done

to mc trikstar

Your a ponce like Frank skinner
Your tellin people to stop "holyin on your nut sack"
If you had something to rap about i'd give it u back.
i'm on my way back.
your lyrics are stupid,
you need to be special to make ya rhmes cupid
**** it your boring me now play boy, your easy to beat
don't bother replyin because ur aimin for defeat

oi trik

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Yo man I just signed up to this a2k forum two days ago , bitch/
no ma rival its the bumb-bandit (time-bandit) and I got a freestyle itch/
this is the MC TOLMIE doin it straight off free style ville /
toppin and droppin **** all over , I got da rappin thrill/
this is a simple little-get-ya-goin-flow/
cuz I like to see otha people got that Las-Vegas-Neon-glow/
I runnin to the top with 2 days on lock/
Tick Tock time is goin to fast to stop/
just watch me rant and rave as I shoot to the top/
you a freestyle mess thats just occupies the backdrop/
cuz once I start rollin ya think I was a tire made by DUNLOP/

...

people tell me what ya'll think....this was not aimed at nobody
Im tired of being in forums and people hating...
now i gonna show wat i can do through my own rappin

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we aint hatin man, u just oblivious to the fact that u suck

spit if u want, im not questionin ur freedom of speech, but stop pretendin ur like the god of rap

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theprofessor wrote:

yo lythic im serious i already have a six min song i did yesterday

compton bound this is for you

i tend to offend
children women an men
pull out my tech lines
they blow you away like tech nines
your a wannabe pac
battle me if you wannabe convulsing in shock
cock back my glock
if you owe me money for rock
you wont be able to talk let alone walk
i dont like your tone
i'll be breaking your bones
with lyrics hearter than stone
bricks i use to crack pricks
am i sick cause i worship six sick six
this motha **** licks dicks
a crack feen in need of a fix
i crack your spleen like a twix
you negate the facts
i commit negative acts
comet reacts against your skin when put on your tampax
sinkin in like sin
inside rotten flesh in the trashbin
battle me you get your faced smashed in
your out like 8d's fashion
i have a passion to give you a verbal smashing
your to mondaine
you expect to entertain
i'll disect your brain like cocaine
hopefully the pain will explain why you complain
comptonbound
you wanted to go a round
well your goin down against the devils hounds
in the river of styx your drowned

lets hear your come back compton
doc and lythic you be the judge

Just curious, pls. judge this rap battle from a way back:

I shoulda told u in advance
that you aint got no chance,
jus facin me made u piss in ur pants,
but other than that, they aint never been wet,
you haven't even hit puberty yet,
and now uve fallen deep into debt, u got no job,
cos u too busy getting blowjobs, round the clock,
lickin doctor's cock,
im a wannabe pac?
u tend to offend children and men,
ur a wannabe Michael Jackson.
so while u be singin thriller,
ill be ur lyrical killer,
puttin u down with a, lyrical tirade,
makin u speechless and tryin to play charades,
**** im a devil, my sins never sink in,
I do whatever the **** I want, I
can beat u without even thinkin,
imma waste u like u been drinkin,
six bottles of Bacardi dark,
ur facin me, surrounded by sharks,
a small fish in a big sea,
imma teach u to never **** around with me,
go ahead and try to smash my face in,
its ur own time ur wastin,
u couldn't even splash a stone into a basin,
I was plannin on erasin,
any skill that u had,
but **** u rap even worse than my dad,
I aint complainin, im just bein real,
if I had a dollar for every dick that u feel,
Id be a rich man,
get urself a bitch man,
quit living off masturbation.
u sound a little washed up, u need to take a vacation,
as a matter of fact, take one for life,
u about to die cos u just got stabbed with the lyrical knife.

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it was my first one, and against prof, and his shits always hot, i jus wanna know how we did

thanks

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tht was very gd compton , now judge dis , by the way i dont mean any of these coz i ave nothink against anyone, except the 1 against time-bandit
he a ****

to comptonbound3

u say im **** lmfao

Takes one to know one,
Avoiding tha fact
that you was ridin dr eryks dick a little more than his sack
I aint cuttin no slack. You questionin if im a Shogun?
Your simply Sho'Nuff, IM THA LAST DRAGON... back off tha scrodum
Like Bruce Leroy I run through you weak B-boys
Throwin sonic booms like streetfighter 2 wit elite street toys
U talkin bout decoys while all u do is speak noise Be poised
cuz tha lyrocks I drop meld minds like leonard Nemoy!!

LOL ONLY JKIN
BUT I WOULDNT OF DISSED U
IF U DINT OF DISSED ME,INNIT

to time bandit

oh and time bandit
soz i meant bumb-bandit
u said i was a faggort
ur the 1 wid the little maggort
u might be askin how i know
i was the one that operated wen u turned into a hoe
this is mc tolmie keepin it gangster
time bandit is a wannabe gangster
no that too big, he a wanna be hamster
he's gay,if he aint rappin bout me he rappin bout cum
i think i'll finish coz my rappin is done

to mc trikstar

Your a ponce like Frank skinner
Your tellin people to stop "holyin on your nut sack"
If you had something to rap about i'd give it u back.
i'm on my way back.
your lyrics are stupid,
you need to be special to make ya rhmes cupid
**** it your boring me now play boy, your easy to beat
don't bother replyin because ur aimin for defeat

I WROTE THIS YESTERDAY SUM1 RATE IT PLZ

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oi compton is ya dere

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Comptonbound3 wrote:

theprofessor wrote:
yo lythic im serious i already have a six min song i did yesterday

compton bound this is for you

i tend to offend
children women an men
pull out my tech lines
they blow you away like tech nines
your a wannabe pac
battle me if you wannabe convulsing in shock
cock back my glock
if you owe me money for rock
you wont be able to talk let alone walk
i dont like your tone
i'll be breaking your bones
with lyrics hearter than stone
bricks i use to crack pricks
am i sick cause i worship six sick six
this motha **** licks dicks
a crack feen in need of a fix
i crack your spleen like a twix
you negate the facts
i commit negative acts
comet reacts against your skin when put on your tampax
sinkin in like sin
inside rotten flesh in the trashbin
battle me you get your faced smashed in
your out like 8d's fashion
i have a passion to give you a verbal smashing
your to mondaine
you expect to entertain
i'll disect your brain like cocaine
hopefully the pain will explain why you complain
comptonbound
you wanted to go a round
well your goin down against the devils hounds
in the river of styx your drowned

lets hear your come back compton
doc and lythic you be the judge

Just curious, pls. judge this rap battle from a way back:

I shoulda told u in advance
that you aint got no chance,
jus facin me made u piss in ur pants,
but other than that, they aint never been wet,
you haven't even hit puberty yet,
and now uve fallen deep into debt, u got no job,
cos u too busy getting blowjobs, round the clock,
lickin doctor's cock,
im a wannabe pac?
u tend to offend children and men,
ur a wannabe Michael Jackson.
so while u be singin thriller,
ill be ur lyrical killer,
puttin u down with a, lyrical tirade,
makin u speechless and tryin to play charades,
**** im a devil, my sins never sink in,
I do whatever the **** I want, I
can beat u without even thinkin,
imma waste u like u been drinkin,
six bottles of Bacardi dark,
ur facin me, surrounded by sharks,
a small fish in a big sea,
imma teach u to never **** around with me,
go ahead and try to smash my face in,
its ur own time ur wastin,
u couldn't even splash a stone into a basin,
I was plannin on erasin,
any skill that u had,
but **** u rap even worse than my dad,
I aint complainin, im just bein real,
if I had a dollar for every dick that u feel,
Id be a rich man,
get urself a bitch man,
quit living off masturbation.
u sound a little washed up, u need to take a vacation,
as a matter of fact, take one for life,
u about to die cos u just got stabbed with the lyrical knife.

I'll judge this...

Structure : Both, Both were wack..
Flow : Both, Both had a good flow through-out
Meta's : proff..
Multies : Proff
Punches : Compton
Personals : Compton
Wordplay : None, if there was then it wasn't good. lol.. therefor I ignored it..
Enjoyment : Compton, He flipped proffs verse good, Sayin' my name in his rap wasn't a good thing though..
Vote : Compton
Explaination : yo, This was a close battle! Both came with the same ammount of skill, but Compton just edged it by a little bit. If proff just came a little harder then it would of been his battle, but Compton has my vote.. Good battle.....

Compton we should battle, lol.. if you want a lose, just hit me up. lol...

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oi dr vote mine

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Sure but post their raps.... YOu post their raps and you're then I'll vote you're battle...... but if its just a rap then I can't vote?!

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dr_eryk wrote:

Sure but post their raps.... YOu post their raps and you're then I'll vote you're battle...... but if its just a rap then I can't vote?!

MC TRIKSTAR WROTE
you bitch your gnna be done in
CHECK IT

Its not an obsurd rap attack cuz i heard u wack//
Thats why thy call me a fisherman, take-your-rhymes and i throw-them- back//
Cant spit an accapella?, this will be an extrodinary defeat//
Ill press your head to my chest, so you can hear the beat//
Im off course with force of coalition,im like a wrestler//
I dont need to 'knock you out', 'takes out cats with pain submission'//
I dont need the 'weed' to scientifically 'enrich-my-****'//
Its like your 'takin-acid' cuz you 'trip-on-kLip'//

TIME BANIT (THE GAY BUMB-BANDIT WROTE)
HAHAHA damn im just gonna do 8 lines coz damn that was absofukinlutely ****

tolmie cant u see, we the real G's
ur the pussy, wer the ones dat sting like bess
damn get a new style and make up new flows
fact is ur a homo i got u on ur toes
cmon bro, no hard feelings, do some rap take ya time
and make sure u impress us wit ur next rhyme
and stop talkin bout urself and cum
coz i know u want some
COMPTONBOUND WROTE
UR ****

I WROTE

to comptonbound3

u say im **** lmfao

Takes one to know one,
Avoiding tha fact
that you was ridin mc triks dick a little more than his sack
I aint cuttin no slack. You questionin if im a Shogun?
Your simply Sho'Nuff, IM THA LAST DRAGON... back off tha scrodum
Like Bruce Leroy I run through you weak B-boys
Throwin sonic booms like streetfighter 2 wit elite street toys
U talkin bout decoys while all u do is speak noise Be poised
cuz tha lyrocks I drop meld minds like leonard Nemoy!!

to time bandit

oh and time bandit
soz i meant bumb-bandit
u said i was a faggort
ur the 1 wid the little maggort
u might be askin how i know
i was the one that operated wen u turned into a hoe
this is mc tolmie keepin it gangster
time bandit is a wannabe gangster
no that too big, he a wanna be hamster
he's gay,if he aint rappin bout me he rappin bout cum
i think i'll finish coz my rappin is done

to mc trikstar

Your a ponce like Frank skinner
Your tellin people to stop "holyin on your nut sack"
If you had something to rap about i'd give it u back.
i'm on my way back.
your lyrics are stupid,
you need to be special to make ya rhmes cupid
**** it your boring me now play boy, your easy to beat
don't bother replyin because ur aimin for defeat

heres a little add on

Yo man I just signed up to this a2k forum two days ago , bitch/
no ma rival its the bumb-bandit (time-bandit) and I got a freestyle itch/
this is the MC TOLMIE doin it straight off free style ville /
toppin and droppin **** all over , I got da rappin thrill/
this is a simple little-get-ya-goin-flow/
cuz I like to see otha people got that Las-Vegas-Neon-glow/
I runnin to the top with 2 days on lock/
Tick Tock time is goin to fast to stop/
just watch me rant and rave as I shoot to the top/
you a freestyle mess thats just occupies the backdrop/
cuz once I start rollin ya think I was a tire made by DUNLOP/

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dr_eryk wrote:

Sure but post their raps.... YOu post their raps and you're then I'll vote you're battle...... but if its just a rap then I can't vote?!

MC TRIKSTAR WROTE
you bitch your gnna be done in
CHECK IT

Its not an obsurd rap attack cuz i heard u wack//
Thats why thy call me a fisherman, take-your-rhymes and i throw-them- back//
Cant spit an accapella?, this will be an extrodinary defeat//
Ill press your head to my chest, so you can hear the beat//
Im off course with force of coalition,im like a wrestler//
I dont need to 'knock you out', 'takes out cats with pain submission'//
I dont need the 'weed' to scientifically 'enrich-my-****'//
Its like your 'takin-acid' cuz you 'trip-on-kLip'//

TIME BANIT (THE GAY BUMB-BANDIT WROTE)
HAHAHA damn im just gonna do 8 lines coz damn that was absofukinlutely ****

tolmie cant u see, we the real G's
ur the pussy, wer the ones dat sting like bess
damn get a new style and make up new flows
fact is ur a homo i got u on ur toes
cmon bro, no hard feelings, do some rap take ya time
and make sure u impress us wit ur next rhyme
and stop talkin bout urself and cum
coz i know u want some

COMPTONBOUND WROTE

UR ****

I WROTE

to comptonbound3

u say im **** lmfao

Takes one to know one,
Avoiding tha fact
that you was ridin mc triks dick a little more than his sack
I aint cuttin no slack. You questionin if im a Shogun?
Your simply Sho'Nuff, IM THA LAST DRAGON... back off tha scrodum
Like Bruce Leroy I run through you weak B-boys
Throwin sonic booms like streetfighter 2 wit elite street toys
U talkin bout decoys while all u do is speak noise Be poised
cuz tha lyrocks I drop meld minds like leonard Nemoy!!

to time bandit

oh and time bandit
soz i meant bumb-bandit
u said i was a faggort
ur the 1 wid the little maggort
u might be askin how i know
i was the one that operated wen u turned into a hoe
this is mc tolmie keepin it gangster
time bandit is a wannabe gangster
no that too big, he a wanna be hamster
he's gay,if he aint rappin bout me he rappin bout cum
i think i'll finish coz my rappin is done

to mc trikstar

Your a ponce like Frank skinner
Your tellin people to stop "holyin on your nut sack"
If you had something to rap about i'd give it u back.
i'm on my way back.
your lyrics are stupid,
you need to be special to make ya rhmes cupid
**** it your boring me now play boy, your easy to beat
don't bother replyin because ur aimin for defeat

heres a little add on

Yo man I just signed up to this a2k forum two days ago , bitch/
no ma rival its the bumb-bandit (time-bandit) and I got a freestyle itch/
this is the MC TOLMIE doin it straight off free style ville /
toppin and droppin **** all over , I got da rappin thrill/
this is a simple little-get-ya-goin-flow/
cuz I like to see otha people got that Las-Vegas-Neon-glow/
I runnin to the top with 2 days on lock/
Tick Tock time is goin to fast to stop/
just watch me rant and rave as I shoot to the top/
you a freestyle mess thats just occupies the backdrop/
cuz once I start rollin ya think I was a tire made by DUNLOP/

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oi eryk u can vote it now

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its alright, but a few cheap ryhmes.... like maggot and faggot. that rhyme really sucks. but over all i give it a...

6.5/10

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cheers

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well Lemme tell you this, You need to elevate tolmie, you're battle between trickstR.. You lost, I mean cause his punches were harder.. he seems laid back when he's rappin' doensn't try.... if you picked up you're game onwordplay meta's multies' then you're set.

Time bandit VS YOu
Was a tie. Came with the same ammount of skill, was an okay battle, but just work on all elements of rap...

Compton VS you
I don't know I didn't see his rap?!

Tips : keep writin'. Readin'. Work on the elements...

TrickstR used to be not that good. I mean I beat him 4 or 5 times....( Props for admitin') then he practiced his **** and now he's pretty damn good. I could still take him though Razz

lol...
So just elevate man... work on the things..

aight.

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kk

is u da bst on here ?

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Just get some new ryhymes, something nobody's heard bfore, those are the real killer lines.

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lmao NO i'm not the best on the site... I don't know who is?

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