not bad.. for a quik one..
again, if i have time and someone to attack, ill dominate
whats with the qustion mark?
Well I've never see you battle anyone....
alright guys im white, a loser, and its my first time but ill give it a shot lol
yo let me to you right here right quick,
about carbons lil boobs and his fo inch dick,
he aintin got nuttin on me, and im here to win,
aint gonna let him take dis, dat be a sin,
and i aint trying to get hostile,
im just trying to make this rhyme worth yo while,
so sit back relax and tell me how i do,
cuz im fresh out of da box im brand new,
not a scratch on me call me bulletproof,
cuz im here to win, and here to make yo lose
lol he aint got nothin' on you, you just told him you're white, a loser and 1st time rappin?
yea man, i suck but im trying
lol alright, keep tryin'. lol...
do i suck? be honest cuz i dont wanna waste my time if im all **** and stuff
Tryin but ain't none of us buying
were still sittin here
the message is clear
your white ass dont belong on this site
or your ass'll get beat everytime you fight
our battles arent for the weak or faint hearted
so take yourself back to the place where the KKK was started
You get the idea alright, try to come with punches, meta's and some wordplay, you're verse well hit alot harder.. but that verse was okay if you're just startin' out.
damn carbone u are good ****
His last bar killed it.... was nice..
haha thanks thanks
im a lyrical gem what can i say
damn i need some tips, i wanna be made iinto a freetlye rapper
lol Lyrical Gem.. lol nice... dunno though?
Try the tips I just gave you, find out what they are and work on tht.. also write more often, read... you'll get words planted into your'e brain so when you freestyle you're lines well just rolll off the top.. and come out more fluid
im more into rating than debating
my skill doesnt need to be compared
if it is, everyone will run scared
lol I know you are carbon... You rate raps pretty good.... but you rappin? i dunno? lol just playin
