Neverending Rap Battle

VOTING STRUCTURE
Flow: trikstR
Structure: solja
Word-Play: solja
Metaphors: solja
Punches: trickstR
Personals: ------
Creativity: solja
Consistency: trikstR
Enjoyment: solja
VOTE: SOLJA
Explination: I think solja came harder, with is wordplay, and metephors, he tried to come at you with all the elements of rap man, allthough trickstR you did come hard, just not hard enough bro, you should work on some wordplay man, shows you have some skill.. I think you know what wordplay is, if you dont check my raps out, or theTruths raps out, He's mad crazy with his wordplay, YO and no disrespect with this battle, you guys had a good batle you too, good job playa's I'm out.

1-0..wuzzup yo..lol jk naw good battle man it was close...

yo who wanna battle

ill battle u...u spit 1st...

why i gotta spit 1st i spit 1st last tyme

ok 1, i spit 1st last time dummy, 2. that battle didnt even count foo no1 voted...3 quit bitchin up and go!

yo punchline make it hot like pizza cheese u aint a rapper u a singer like alicia keys cuz wat i spit is hot ill crippl ur style and make u live hip hop cuz man i aint hearin you kodak got a buisness tryin to picture me fearin u dawg but let me remind mmy verses will blind u if ur father was at a label man he wouldnt sighn u cuz ill crush all dese weak mcs whille u stay fallen like alicia keys cmon man ive been past great hit ur mom so good after im done she make me a slim fast shake u cant be serious test me if ur curious cuz im used 2 havin things dat rock i got a gun named michael jackson and wen things get hot id love 2 show u da reason its the king of pop and ima a pimp ur girlfriend let me curess her im as big as the klumps cuz she swallowed my nutty professors and ur gurls on my dick cuz im famous now i call her eistien cuz she got da best brains around pshhh ima stop rite der cuz i kno u cryn i ko it aint fair

to soulja

dis a friendly abttl 4 fun

fatal u weak

u gon attack back

iight...

yo...u wanna talk about my mom, well urs aint a woman the hoes name is tom//you aint ready for my style and flow, do like trillville and get on my level ho//only 13 and choppin peoples heads off, sounds like ur nerdyer then the dude who created microsopht//wanna talk big i bet for meals u beg, its gonna take mor then a mom joke to crack this goose egg// Dont try to act like you a tru mc, live in new york and got no dignity// sounds like someones obsessed with Alicia Keys, this aint a battle, mor like a strip tease// ill chew ya ass up like buble yum, got mor talent then u on my right thumb// if you grab the mic atleast have a topic, cuz wut ur spittin is lyrical vommit// my rhymes r so sick theyll give you the stomache flue, twistin ur mind with my lyricall voo doo// hows it feel to be pinned up against the walls, so deep they gotta pull u out with the jaws (Jaws of Life)// and like tupac said everyone has talent that aint tru, cuz u proove u got none by verse 2// i think u should listen to juels santana and drop a couple pounds, cuz its kinda hard to front when you weigh more then a rodeo clown// **** i dont even have to say **** to intimidate you, cuz u kno ill melt ya ass like 70's fondu// i mean cmon man ill tear you to shreads, and aint it about time for u to go 2 bed?// now ima let this go on a beautiful note, if we do a round 2 u betta not choke//1 mor think b4 i drop this mic, when u showed ur girl ur dick she turned into a dyke WOAAAAH!//

Lol all for fun homey...good battle we doin 2 rounds?

so wuts up wuz this a 1 round knockout lol

???

ok i guess this was a 1 rounder... umm erik or mc or sum1 judge this when u get back...use this voting structure
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ey man my baad i aint been here and yeah i was just readin yo raps and damn yall spit so fast neway yeah my baad aight

well battle later like a friendly battle knahmean cause i mean no disrespect we battle before and yeah

and like i said my baad

yo detox can u judge that battle right there

nah man i aint good at jugin trust me so im sorry man but no disrespect aight

that was some tite rappin tho

respect

eyo im spittin now

I got ya just when u thought I aint wit yo mama
Doin her im yo new father it's no drama
Hypothetically speaking go have a piss yo dick is leakin
Theres no treatment for a dumbass so pass on
And carry on with yo poetry so it to me seems like
Theres no line between u and mike despite
Mike goes down with a fight he fight for his life
You just give the devils affiket a suck on his dick
Then after 10 hours of foreplay u give this white-boi a ****
I cam on earth to make yo lifelivin hell
Yeah I know yo face is goin swell
I prepell u live in a fuckin cell
You can't even rap well
So low in the ground you can hear my brother yell
U bout to be hit with a pitchfork
I run you over my car has so much torque
You just another freak playin with his daddy's asscheek
You don't even know how to use a condom u little sneak
Every time u sleep you gotta sqeel squeak?
Im comin with the thunder make u splunder
U say u surrender u as bad as faded and determined with a picture of bender
U find yoself killed with sum1 else
Its no part to myself but himself or his health
But that's no issue quit crying and use a tissue
Aint no nigga goin miss you and u just piss yoself nerd
Im just tryin to be absurd u type so early u just a tiny early bird
Why u waitin for a ticket for masturbation
Use yo mind to rap no a diff niggas and fo creation
U put all of yo family in this situation
Bitch buy a franger at the petrol station
Why punchliner 13 are u here you cant rap every nigga no yo 13
so it seems I kill you in yo dreams
As you'd say okay Im leavin now so u betta be quick to write back to suck my dick

respect