Neverending Rap Battle

not bad verse whitey ,,, but u have some mistakes in here


ur structure is all over the place
ur punches are ok nothing to strong mostly Multisyllable run ons

ur not even flipping my verse to you LMAO

ur responding to things i wrote to DLC !!!

that tri angle line... whitey ur better then that , u just used it in the exact same way I did

I said tri angles ... and you said dont tri angles ...
(thats not creative at all) thats the same shiit


nigga , I wrote you a verse , thats all you can work off of

I know what you were trying to do with the BROTHER ALI line

but it didnt hit that hard

so most of this is just regurgitating what I said --- to say the least im unimpressed

ok theres one line i have to point out - (You were the fat kid in school who the bullies used to scream at
But he'll complain about all the struggles this G had)(no structure/weak punches, poor use of multis )

first off nick , ur the fat kid lmao , bitching about china gina
secondly - you know i have never claimed G status lmao

but you know i'll knock someones teeth out ... that doesnt make me a G ...!!!!

ur punches 7-8
structure- 5
multis-6
wordplay-7
personsals-2




k now heres something i just dont understand (Cuz you ain't coping with a loss right get on your grind and lose the bitch traits ) ---- didnt you just tell DLC to move on an he lost ????

so I won !!! then this line is complete garbage right ?

u can take this however you want whitey

I always have mad love for you


you said before you have high hopes for me ... thats great n all

but if your always trying to judge what i show you based solely on my previous renditions

and not judging the battles as it is at the time

when you rate 2 verses for a battle , you only are allowed to rate them for the verses used in the battle

n not base your opinion on what that person may or may not have done in the past


I know I won regardless, with DLC

thats not the point ... the point is , your telling me u expect better ...

I dont have to do better then ur past opinions

I just have to do better then the person im battling at the time

thats a WIN


n right now I got Tiger Blood ... cause im Bi-Winning

ok ... now i know your retarded


u think i meant gun bars as in Weapons

I meant GUN BARS as in a bar that serves liqour hence why the following lines tie in

I said ( as in you SUCK)

ecspecially at seeing the intricacy of a couple lines

(ur not out of this world
clean ya blackhole)--- ya thats a punchline soon as u put them together


the whole piece is a geometry cuss

can you judge my battle with dark nova

my verse is a few pages back
and he kept me waiting for that
most of it was him being attacked

pg 1124 to be exact

its not the first verse

keep scrolling
intill you see like 12 bars i think it is

Gun Bars don't serve liquor. There is no such thing as a Gun Bar.... So your a ******* idiot.
"Pour a full clip of bullshit bullets"---- This literally can never mean shots as in drinks.... So **** off dumbass.

You lost... Just deal with it.... You ain't ******* good at rapping....

Literally my Professor X line was better than anything you wrote.... By far... not even comparable.

yea i can no problem

actually there are MULTIPLE GUNN bars

pouring a (fullclip a bull **** bullets) -- how old are you >???? anyone who is legal drinking age would understand this

SHOTS= Bullshit bullets , so i said a FULL BOTTLE

why else would I be pouring them ???



im not going to discuss this further


u just had 3 people tell you u lost... u just cant take it


noone voted for you ....

I actually wrote that whole thing before I read your verse it just so happened we both used a Tyson reference

thou will shall not bend or break , fatter then rikki lake , in dickies made for youth , razorblade of the group , close shave or a ghost fade, I could casper a whole page , but id rather necronomicon an go comicon for days dazed , smoking that sage francis , cd's still burning holes through my memories melodies , develop split personality screaming remember me , to the mirror of shattered reflections , every moment a concept of perception , still percieving conception , readin eden , smoking the pages of what he once believed in , that heathen , with Rhyme an Reason


feeling the need for eScape , superman , feel like a DJ driving an escalade , with DiscBreaks,scribbling till his wrists break , wasnt a mistake , jsst takes his bones an writes poems in hemoglobin , you'll bloody know him , eating phosphorus , till his shits glowing , prosperous midas cyphers every scripts golden ....hip hops just like golf im all FOR the open , some holes for me to put my ball's in , whats prof a glock an tiger have in common? ,we put a hole in one , either way im a ace , birdie , flyer then all that chirpy chirpy ....

hotter then hells furnace , cooking for churches bake sale, in the pews with no excuse why the nun is screaming oh god , bitch calling me a dogg , for making the pastors wife use jesus name in vein as the preachers daughter cutting her wrists , to lubricate with , using her pussy as a martyr , dont cross me , cause i nailed it , she was screaming judas , I pulled out her mouth an said its pronounced dugas

a dugas , whats that ? a man , a plane , a rap ? im all of those thangs , , wait mane, how do u think ur a plane ? if i need to explain im fly as running a train on the sky , wow so perverted squrted on the nurses skirts did not make me nervous , necrophillac on track my dick in hurses , most say he killed it , illed it , on some real **** , slap u with ya nervous system if you dont feel it ... scribble a riddle wrapped around his triple helix .... FREESTYLE FREENESS



if u cant respect the truth,dont talk to me about being"Fake"

thats impossible whitey , i wrote it as soon as you said put up a verse an i did it in less then 30 min : , ???

Considering you told me yourself you were a fat kid who got bullied that's why I said it

The fat kid thing though in the Muslim religion I'm sure you know of the term jihad which they use as holy war but by definition it is meant as the struggle which is why I said the struggles this G had which progressed into the turban brother Ali(who's Muslim) into the skate segment

Yeah but I hadn't read it I was out at a driving semenar scribbling in my phone

ok cool , i liked most of it


some parts were just stale to me


but you know me PROF the PROFESSIONAL HATER

nigga on a personal note ... A FRIEND TELLS U SOMETHING IN CONFIDENCE

u dont say that **** in a battle mafucka thats below the belt

I didnt say **** about china gina : ,

but aside from that , my main reason for not really feeling ur verse was cause it was based alot on physical aggression

and not so much on hip hop and the intricacy / I didnt really laugh untill that last line

which u have used before

But also when your in a battle friendship goes out the window I've had kids **** on my mother having a heart attack and on my autistic brother when it's a battle you don't stress it that's my philosophy be as offensive as possible if you had of said something I wouldn't care and I've never used that before considering I learned the term penis coffin about 5 days ago lol

Yes they were physical aggression bars told with wordplay

Tyson
Fake meat

Lines never CONNECTED to make a POINT

I saw it as more than just physical aggression but whatever lol

Opinions are opinions

It's all good

friendship should never go out the window , but i feel like throwing you out one right now


YES you did , you said that **** on tinychat a few month ago

or your regurgitating someone else's line

so its either yours , jeremy genes , or tyler pheonix's

cause ur the only 3 that speak like that

and i have a clear memory of that line ....

actually dude i have to say your full a ****

u cant tell me that u never read my verse

cause half the **** you said was rebuttles

the sausage line --- dude if anyone were to read these theyd say exactly what i am

one or two things is a coincidence

but anything more then that is clearly on purpose

Yes it never goes out the window but nothing in a battle should ever be taken on a personal note

I've never said that line and I've never heard anyone else say it I haven't even been on tiny since whoever Jeremy genes is must have shown up and I never remember Ty saying it

sure BUD ...

my memory for this **** is always on point

and I know that ive heard that before