Neverending Rap Battle

Now let's go, I don't want to blow your mind
But the flow something you'll never find
I'm rhyming and can make couple predictions
You suck. and me? I'm future addiction
Oh man I just had a burst
of words that made up whole verse
Hey fagg please don't be so mad
Instead take ****, join club of nerds
I'm high and don't even try
To write rhymes or **** your wife
I just spit stuff which upsets you heart
You better run I am not even going hard

https://soundcloud.com/illustraight/beef-whats-all-this-war-about

LMAO


how bout you reread it an maybe look at every line an (C) the connections


in all honesty from the holy trinity line down

all punches you just have to read them


anyway i dont give 2 shits


punches are things as simple as wheres ur Mp3 mpc etc.. etc..

cause you want REALTALK

not just bullshit gun bars


theres so many personals in there aswell and nameflips


all sorts of **** you guys didnt see

lo0lol


DLC - U LOST ..... VOTES were to me by a landslide


so i just want to tell u personally

UR NOT BETTER ... U SUCK BIOTCH

lay beats on um like an album (punchline)
with another L for the record cause they ALL Bum
(punchline/wordplay)
murdock has trouble saying the word cock
cause he cant get it out of his mouth ...
(punchline)
pussy what are you talking about ?
(punchline)
**** you with a aids needle
in ya peehole
n bathe in the blood
ur lines horizontal prof lay a hater flat out
your not equal
(wordplay/punchline)
my vertical has vertigo , so high
im straight up
(wordplay)
hate ****
n leave you with a hitler stash
sniffin glass for hours
(hourglass the drug methadone created by hitlers scientists)
(metaphor/punchline/wordplay)
these asshole mini G's
think there gods dogg
prof call that holy trinity
(punchline)
a circle jerk
(punchline)
if they had nuff skills to go round
(punchline/wordplay)
tri angles
(punchline/wordplay)
u pussies aint tight
try kegels
(punchline)
prof hip hop god
ask dumb bars
gun bars
pour a full clip a bull **** bullets
(punchline)
ur fave , nut juice n ball liqour , ball lickers
(punchlines)
bull dick in ya bullox
butox
noone wants to hear your butt talk
(wordplay/punchlines)
asshole
ur not out of this world
clean ya blackhole
(punchline)
ur a C rapper
prof sittin shittin on the crapper
(wordplay/punchline)
dont give a crap bra
got all the tools , crafts mastered
ur a tool , mastercraft ya
(punchline)
u r screwed
wrench ya nutz n bolts
(punchline)
smoking frankenstein
puffing hulk
ur getting hammered
(punchline)
hamstered
labrat
guinea pig
injected with aids virus in they iris
does this look sick ?(punchline)
dog you look bitch (punchline)
prof is mvp (punch))
wheres ya mp3?(punch)
mpc?(punch)
prof got no empathy
just 3 emcees scared ta P
C ur to scared to B0
(punchlines/wordplay)
a master rapper
u chimp panzy's(punchline/wordplay)
baboons bafoons (punchline)
prof Go-Reala
(punchlines/wordplay)
then ya whole platoon
throat spilla , n pla tunes (wordplay)
on cb radios
3 vs 1 check the ratio
im not blown away by ur felatio (punchline)
grow some pubes dudes
u nevewr made a hor-mone(wordplay/punchline)
kings of terd island
I dont give a **** bout your throne (punchline)
prof
King of word whyling
Jets ,Birdies
yes chirpie
every words fly ,n
ur cyphers wouldnt make gold if midas
touched ya in ya diapers (punchline)
I plato ya mind (punchline/wordplay)
its my philosophy
above ya words , word , heard profs an apostrophe (punchline)
truth call this neuce a help line , talk ta me
cant hear these chokes
just C Hokes (wordplay/ Punchline)

C what im saying ? (wordplay/punchline)
uv bin graded faggets C minus (wordplay/punchline)
an aids positive (punchline)
stay positive (punchline)




so wtf were you guys talking about filler ??????

as i showed you there I outlined (42) different punches


in something you said has no punches an is all filler ????

yo prof the problem is they graded you based on older stuff you wrote they didnt grade you based on the piece i feel you killed em and plus you were faceing(defacing) 3 people

Lol no one voted for anyone. Its clear I won.
You're a ******* idiot who can't rap lol.

You can't talk about who won considering you've avoided battling several people for ******* weeks.

Maybe I used the wrong wording with filler I understood the punch lines I've seen better from you though I just didn't feel this one I guess and thought you could have gotten more specific because most of them were generic that you could apply to most people I just got high standards for you

Whitey ---- If I do what your asking , im the only one an maybe you will get anything


I did a text book abc here .....

as it stands though


Ya'll need to vote


Im tired of hearing DLC run his mouth


if i loose , then i loose by vote , not opinion



throw ya votes up

its generic in the sense im facing 3 people and not 1 person

hence why the wording could apply to most people !!!!

like i have the best multi's on the site

I have the tightest structuring


I clearly used more an have a better comprehension of wordplay

a packed that with punches


how can DLC even say he won , thats just ignant son ...

like that go reala line had multiple inlays , it was talking about Guerilla war fare , hence why im killin off his whole platoon

u say u got all of them , but you dont

I know u dont ...

he talked a bunch of gun bars

so i dropped personal refrences to his talking of gun bars and him talking **** to drew about calling me a hip hop god

and then i went a step further an talked about (tools ) which u percieved as regular tools ,

but i was going for the deeper premise of a toolie , or using your tool as in gun

an called him a tool - as in the ur a ******* asshole kind

i did so many personals an flips ... but nope , u didnt even notice ....


shaking my head right now....

Yes I understood the tool flip and I got the go reala line as well I understood alot of them

DLC

Punches- 7/10

Wordplay - 6/10

Metaphors - 5/10

Multis - 4/10

Structure - 7/10

Prof

Punches - 7/10

Wordplay - 8/10

Metaphors - 6/10

Multis - 8/10

Structure - 5/10

34/50 for prof

30/50 for DLC

Prof took 3 categories DLC took 1 and tie for 1

Only one I didn't get was hitlers glass until you read it

I skipped class for that chapter lol

K .. thats fucked whitey


his structure is nowhere as good as mine

hence why my structuring is so tight


wtf are you guys reading ???

his punches dont even come close ,,, theres proof in the tri angles line

I dont know who taught you guys what (structuring is ) but it has to do with the amount of syllables used per line


this guy is all over the place

11 -first line
13 -second line
23- 3rd line
7-4th line
18-5th line
12-6th line


there is no structure there at all .... so ur full a ****

u mean filler like this ?



or weak similies like this ???


go back to rap school , you dont know what your talking about

WHITEY - im calling you out for a battle

u even admitted you didnt get the hitler line

so u obviously didnt get it all an gave me a rating based on , not what was there , but what you could understand

its proof again , that I can write ill **** , but you guys wont even realize I dissed you , cause **** keeps flying over your head


the whole time DLC- was calling me fake , and then drops a bunch of gunbars

like wtf is your major malfunction ??

he disses me saying he listened to my soundcloud and it sucks


nigga ,I even put in my verse , as a personal rebuttle

wheres your mp3's
or mpc


he aint making tracks hes just full a ****

but hey I guess REAL , means all you do is lie , and talk trash

<<<< did he just rhyme points with point


WOW thats amazing i never knew rhyming the same word was a ******* talent


Word .....

I know if u heard it it would flow better but the way you write it out when I read it it is choppy and minus 2 run off lines for DLC it was for the most part about even