@theprofessor,
dude you scared me
i thought it said
PROF VS <DFC<King123<Murdock212
LMAO all love drew congratulations on your 1st year
https://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/sooey
thanks to Ill's for telling me bout that soundpack , thats how I created this beat
CHECK IT OUT ... 1 LOVE HIP HOP
nah i aint run sorry gots lots of stuff im working on but imma have the battle either thursday or friday but be sure imma do it
and do it hard
@King123,
so king whats the rating ???
@theprofessor,
Punchlines-- 8/10
Wordplay-- 10/10
Metaphors-- 9/10
Multi-syllables -- 8/10
Structure-- 7/10
i was diggin it
loved the word play at the end
wished the bars would have been a bit longer
to make it look neater
42/50
@King123,
cool
Lets see what someone else rates it aswell
hmm WHITEY wanna give a rate ?
and anyone else that feels like throwing in there 2 cents
@theprofessor,
Punch lines-- 9/10
Wordplay-- 10/10
Metaphors-- 7/10
Multi-Syllables-- 9/10
Structure-- 8/10
Overall 43/50
Only went 7 on the metaphors cuz i feel i didnt get all of them but i thought this piece was highlarious very well thought out epic due to the fact you were faceing 3 opponents
you want the truth ? here it is
I gave a ****
once upon a rhyme
I prayed deliverance
prayed to god to deliver it
made deliberate attempts to forget all that I have witnessed
still see my name on the reapers hitlist
I remember wondering whats on santa's wishlist
found out theres no santa that christmas
the truth is , noones got your back
not even god , thats why your eyes are in front
u can bend over an see these assholes n cunts
smiling back at ya , as they laugh at ya
sippin ceasars taking stabs at ya, im not a mad rapper
just a pissed off factor writing another chapter
for people that just listen to the beat
saying if it isnt heat , it isnt street ,
and dont hear a ******* WORD , word
when I wake up, i dont pray for forgiveness
I dont pray for deliverance
I dont pray on the weak
I praise the very moment of creation , when i feel my heart beat
but you want truth, im proof, of a system that allows vision to slip through the cracks, that you can give your heart to a **** , an she'll give you a bloody tampax back
Im proof that a roof over your head , does not make it a home
and a body can feel like a tomb , lieing in a heap of bones
ever had enough bucks to either pay for lunch, or munch on the receipt of tommorows food you wont eat , cried yourself to sleep , wake up with hunger eating you alive , cops took your ride , people ask wheres ur drive ? and you just wanna survive , hearing peoples thoughts of suicide , and you havent had the time to even think about it , to clouded by the rain inside , dont even notice the snow that froze you there , unable to move , feeling so cold ,need air , dont know what to do,feel like life is leaving you, feels like breathing through straws, as u claw up that hill , with all your will ,still chilled by the fact u might not make it to the top, something in your heart sparks an you cant stop , pick up your pace , pick up your face , pick up your faith and march onward , tears streaming , screaming I found grace
she sounds like oldschool mixtapes ,
her voice liberates my soul n I feel just great
**** FATE
i got her in the palms of my hands
destiny ,quit making suck face with my nutz, wait,u know im about to blow
@theprofessor,
This was not a rap battle. Save to say I won easily. + Real talk it was just a bunch of bullshit fillers.
Punches: 2/10 MAYBE
@Downloadable Content,
He's right a little to much filler not really punch punch punch
I believe you deserve more credit than a 2 though
6.5/10
@thedarknova,
https://soundcloud.com/illustraight/heart-of-darkness
And this is for everyone else besides Nova to listen to as well.
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
https://soundcloud.com/illustraight/what-some-real-men-do.
I thought of Alchemist, Infamous Mobb, Mobb Deep and the 1980's in general when I made this.
