Neverending Rap Battle

i feel you homie.......were here to help you if you need anything or would like to improve

Whats good people, good to see your all still chopping it up in here. This year has been hectic for me, im studying two courses and im actually getting into Boxing, I seem to have a natural ability for it and ill be having my first fight soon. All of that combined with the fact ive struggled with writers block or inspiration to write (as you all know) for soooo long, Ive put music on the back burner for now until I get that fire back in my belly to write, its been about 5 months since ive even considered writing again and im itching already so the break is working lol infact im here right now because im going to have fun and try drop some lines, if my perfectionist nature will allow me too I MAY drop some here, but I doubt it lol peace guys, your all becoming great lyricists.

example of my destruction..... bambi, prof and whitey would be proud

In two seconds, i'm wrecking precious lieutenant's
Its stupendous.. guess at times Im too hectic
My crew's reck less, a cruel menace
Leaving whole platoon's breathless
No surprise foes, cant distract this focused mind
Stranded ... immobilized
Handed me a cloaked design
.. Posses' shook ..
.. Get karate hooked..
Mushed.. and then thrown up in the donnybrook
Im the forsaken abandoned secret agent
Occupation is to siege the base of operation
Disgrace congregation
So you must assume I'm violent
As I flash the shotty riot.. No pause no silence..
The fight will cost your life.. Kamikaze pilot
When whats more .. is more and whats war .. is war
From the light in dark corridor's Fighting ripping titans
Ignite the horror core as god strikes bolts of Lightning
Slash the axe with a vengeance.. It gets dark
As I elevate an estimate
But no hopes to see the heavens gate
I question its place in space still we tell kids to believe
That its best this way using Lie's to deceive
Why do they try an make us just agree
But once we ask a question they tell us to leave??
Why cant they portray the evidence
A midst the elements I still spit benevolent
Feel the wrath and terror i've formatted these veterans
Your back pedaling.. we forward marching
To do harm and smack some skeletons .. Armed
With sack of medicine, fat .. as.. elephants
Drastic measurements, maxed back on bond's
That spawned a strong sentiment.. Beyond exodus
Feel the gloom as it come's along next to it
Drawn up a testament of lyrical intelligence
Wander the maze .. as I demolish and slay
Because tomorrow isn't quite promised today
Give honor and praise ... Even blindfolded
Still got my hands on the katana blade
Die slow.. eyes closed .. as I clobber on prey
Rob your grave, maraud.. plunder .. conquer & raid
Shock and awe .. Stomp .. Brigades
You can stop and watch me mark your fate
Roaring thunder hear applause from the elder gate
Go towards the bunkers
Or you'll fall out the shelter [wait]
Nope its too late its a helter skelter phase
Blown to smithereens chopping dome's with guillotine's
That will mos def make em spill the beans
The ghetto way .. fulfilling dreams
Your squad's dying.. sparks flying
The screams .. horrifying
Morbid sirens... mortals dying
When ive sorta been provided
The heart of a lion and the eye of an eagle
The largest of giants very violent and evil
Your silent and peaceful best not wage a battle
I'm brolic and lethal you pray up in a chapel
And then crawl in to the fetal
Make plans to radiate your weight scans
So throw on your ray bans now the mind's learning
Rhymes emerging, straight up out the wasteland
Shake hands and pay deficits, slain effortless
Hunger's a constant suffer, each day they're tested wit
The delayed neglected the ability to meet
A connecting bridge, sick kids with exposed ribs
Is that you suppose to live
Approach an obelisk that provoked a spoken script
I potray a messages when these words are like weapon
To a terrorist its how to sub stain excellence
Beyond the day that you perish admit its destined
Smuggle ammo shadowed by the armory
Cosmic waves buried deep so traces dont fall on me
From caves of lethal rage breathe deep
And dont impede on secret ways
The Lies hide beneath a demons place
Darts flying.. spark the iron
Clashed this dark alliance
Spare with tyrants words
Surpass the modern day art and science
Horrifying sounds leave flesh broken
Get a quick indirect hit.. And shiiit
It'll rip the chest open the victim's breaststroking
Head swollen, neck broken climbing to the summit
Only to find a sea of body fluids
As blood Leaks from the stomach, stop he's useless
Preachers try and ward off hordes of demonic forces
Symbolic crosses of orchestrated losses
Overstated wounds just a Novice to a boss kid
This nitwit gone sick ..I hold the mic like a hostage
Im in the breaker room burning haze, Intaking fumes
Of hazardous waste .. as im contemplating views
A monumental truth ... Wronging the heads of youths
Now dont get Hit from flying shrapnel
Cause then youll be in a ditch asking yourself
Why he's such an asshole

dam thats good
"Because tomorrow isn't quite promised today" best/most real thing in that

thank you

I aint a killa but dont push me revenge is like the sweetest joy next ta gettin pussy

picture paragraphs un loaded wise words bein quoted...lol love that song

It's nostalgically good to see you back, Charlie. I'm supposed to be having a tournament with this guy called J. Blake any time now, but I guess for old times' sake, I guess you and I can have a sparring match while I wait.

Yo, lets go a few rounds on the rap roller coaster
Forget the rock an hip hop, and drop the bieber poster
Although you're already been roasted and toasted at tier 2
How much you've boasted is how much, that we're through
Fear you? This queer's new! But I ain't afraid to slash and gash and near too,
So you must respond, bond with rap, drown in a pond of rhymes and words
So many turds, in one package, call you d12 for "just smack it!"
Smack this fat cabbage, vegetable, not edible, not even half the incredible!
The mood's settable, I bet you're cold, cold as your heart of coal
You're fuckin bul' I'll muffle, you're fuckin soul, till its the size of a tootsie roll
How many licks plus one filthy prick, whose name is just a bendy dick
My mind is fuckin sick to think of this, but you can't **** a chick,
with yo dick in your own clit, so stop, before I unload a clip
Into this filthy kid, who's mom's a bitch, playin with her tits
So to finish off, I just gotta cough, and I can't put up with this
**** this ****!

Round one
Eight bars

Yo, come back at me, cousin

you aint no killa you a pussy
that ectasy you takin got you all emotional and mushy

my bad, ill start in a little bit dude, got a lot of **** to do

I FUCKIN cant write **** right now..

i cant even start a simple 16 bar written

cant flow to a beat and they all sound like **** to me right now

HELP

Wu tang fo lyfe

raekown and rza .... my ****

Listen to that cunninlynguists song I posted you slut it's exactly your style lol

Allow me to help you.

16 bars are as equal as 16 cars
when they crash each other, making a military barge
If you do get that far, then you're in charge
like large batteries that power up big tip lorries
And what I mean by that is the kind of impact you cause
when you rhyme 16 bars and you make them world-class
like packets that you sort at the local office
transported, locked and then shipped to Austria
Australia, in the Outback region
where the kangaroos jump and the dingos sleep
Or even Transylvania, where Dracula creeps
and sleeps in a coffin in a castle so deeply
haunted, you're gonna need Helsing to storm it
These bars are sure to give a freak a warning
If they ever **** with you, then you can beat her off
16 bars, ************, please be warned!
(electronic digit sounds)

Haha, good one... But that was 8 bars. 16 LINES

no it is 16 bars

Derp, yah, sorry. I was thinking of "new" rap bars which are 2.5 lines.

The **** is up with new rap? Some is okay, but most is all about fast and revolting.