@Wrathe,
you got a point
instead of having 1 rhyme per line which 2 would equal 1 bar
they have 3 or maybe even 4 rhymes per line to create 8 bars in 2 lines
which is hard because they need to have meaning behind it
@dfc100,
Ugh... My brain... That "hip hop/rap" institute/college/university you guys were talking about sounds good right about now...
@Wrathe,
hey when i first came to this site i was fuckin dumb...i still am but thanks to ill's shutdown, bambi, whitey and prof...they have helped me understand alot of things and they helped me improve..i just learn from them
intro- hey man whats up - voice 1
voice 2 - the sky is a delightful wonder today beyond the pantheon
voice 1- yo lemme ask you , do u think your smarter ? or just more informed because you have bin to university and every grade of school ?
voice 2- it's clear you are astute , however my intelligence is far beyond your miniscule comprehension !
Voice 1- **** that , you take in whatever information is given to you well , your a good library and can recite what you have learned , but can u create and develop new patterns of thought on your own ambition
PROF- is it possible or even probable to fall 50 stories off a hospital
hit the pavement , another patient asking did that hurt , not at all
, get up an walk it off , doors locked in your mind
, ima rhymer knock it off the hinges
, so yo sick , inches away from reading your obits , oh shiit
, i got homies coffin syringes,
rumor of a tumor in the part of the brain i process humor , doing zoomers , aint it hilarious, sniffing fairy dust ,
n im the only one climbing out the dirt they bary us,
wait werent you prescribed some contribe ,
this pussy looking **** eyed ,
i told you werent ******* getting better , huh ? the **** lied !
yea with the legs spread open , hopeing youd show up at the aids clinic
procedure will only take 8 minutes ,if its free they'll cum
your sister , mother , daughter, a ******* bum
didnt do **** , his whole life , no pipes , no booze ,
all he had left , cops said he had no rights , no loot, said the lawyer
steal aint got no shoes , no job said the employers
after those huckle berries , he's fin . tom sawyer
his given name , his christian name , aint religous
lord dont even know his bitches name, know his pistols mane
doc you and i stitch the same , price the only different thang
, freeze , please , i dont need **** fer pain
death I aint playing pick ya game
head up ur ass , **** fer brains
all these pussies get dick the same ,
your talking to the head like its a brain ,
psychic scripture stains
on ya sidekick , i need a batman ?
why what you robin, hey einstein tell mission control
we have a problem , hey divine , hell we missin a soul
wonder where god went ? does ya , do you ? gutta voodoo
muthafucka screwloose , biitch keep them lips tight
go do some kegels well eating bagels or lego my eggo **** waffle
prego sauce all over a pregnant stomach , here want some noodles
zoodles , u bitches want tea cup poodles
, n say u dont like how doggy style tastes
hmm you want knowledge, how much can u swallow ?
oh so u went to college , so u learned how to follow ?
intermission- voice 1- so u really believe your smarter ?
voice 2- I know I am (scoff)
Voice 1- ok then answer me this !
Prof- whats more intelligent , to be relevant ! or seek malevolence ?
its it better to be a show off , or slow talk , till people say your no pac,
no em , no jay , yea theres no way , cause there "so great"
you reap what you sow, sweatshop kids killing those clothes
so what?, people say ur so fucked , get frustrated ur so ughh
uh ? what the **** ??? , others say ur so so , so often
u often show caution, words are heavy,to carry this weight
its barely mistake , its given to those who have it within them
wisdom , isn't vision , yet still see how most children are living
is dumb , is'nt any better the parents prison,transparent ,decision
incisions , cutting through the heart , with sharp remarks,
so bright , hard to see when ur the only light in the dark
brainstorming ,forewarning , lightning will spark
a flash of brilliance, odds this'll hit one in a million
twice in a life time , 1 in a billion ,
another life force like mine , 1 in a zillionkajillion aliens
or maybe , im just crazy and think everyone can
everyone , man
, woman
, child ,
trans-gender
and bender from futurama
is it , how much ? or how you use ur grammer ?
jesus , isnt it how you use ur hammer ?
i think I nailed it
when I die , do not speak only of my goodside,
but my hoodside, my good guy , that would die for those he loves
and all those times i got high n had to steal my grub
no patronsaint ,not everything saten aint , im makin paps
mistakes, n cake , have an ancient ache bin achey break
for a long time , n ive watched it all , clocked the fall till id gone blind
yelled till I lost my voice and found my ears deaf to my own breath
now i speak no , hear no , see no , evil , death , jsst keeps shoutin
tounge can taste the dirt , beaten so many times cant feel the hurt
hungrier then hell, ate the devil off my plate,
started coughin fate into a coffin , faith smells great , i cant wait
for a new mandate,or some canned apes from a greasy handshake
that was, suppose to have milk in it, filth filled grimace
look at the heart when its dark and see the spark built in it
is it the tortoise or the hare which will finish ?
i'll let some finland girls give me the swim hand , with the will to finish
what they started , you aiming , or u shopping at target?
outro-
voice 2 - well i need to match my car to my carpet !
voice 1 - for someone soooo smart ur ******* retarded
PROF-" pooofff " is it magic ? or did i just fart it , betta check ya arses ....
@theprofessor,
never worry homie , life is a special thing , in time all is revealed , in different ways for different people , all will be revealed.
it's your choice how fast
and your choice what you do with them ...
Peace Prof
@dfc100,
That's not how it works... Bars if you wanna get specific should really be determined by the beat youre using like if I did this
Slut butt dump truck dumb **** suck nuts
That's obviously not 4 bars on a beat it probably wouldn't even take up half a line
@theprofessor,
I'm autistic, and not to be fucked with
You piss off him quick and this hot-collared kid will sorely flip
like a monstrous narcissist who's armed to the hip with an arsenal of monster clips
to drop these chicks, pop the cartridges, make awesome hits
and watch them split like chocolate chips
This isn't Armageddon, it's an apocalypse
It's dark as **** - well, not ****, but it's as dark as a Mars bar
covered and smothered in the sloppiest droplets of the awesomest confiture
any posse can possibly get
This is nothing more than a sombre hit
crossed with hip-hop and opera, call it a "soppy hip-hopera"
but it hasn't got Nas or Pavarotti in it
Jump on a whore's back harder than a bronco on horseback
with a poncho and a glock strapped to his Docker's pants
You haven't got a chance, cross wands with a sorcerer of rap
kicking prosperous ass much more than a donkey cast
So tell Farmer Jack to gather more bags of Granny Smith's apples
so that I can chomp them and make the doctor mad
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
ohh i get it...so its determined by the beat
@dfc100,
Yo, you challenged me a while back, and I responded. You gonna forfeit the game on round one? No you ain't! Come at me!
@theprofessor,
Hey, that competition! Wanna start soon, or save it for New Years? Yknow, if the world doesn't end?
anyone on this site have REALLY GOOD sketching talents??
if any if ya'll do, lemme know. i need an album cover sketch.
i got some peeps around here that are sketch artistss but i know prof you have many talents. and ill i know you do too..
so hmu. im willin to pay if the price is reasonable..
ill give you all the ideas and whatnot if anyone could just sketch it..
@Wrathe,
but..................... i said i needed time
dont want to waste my lines on you......i'll save them for the tournment
@Bambino,
I have someone that is really good , if youd like ? I can link you up !
im sure he'd either do it free or give you the friend price
Just punched a 40 year old white dude wearing a cookie monster shirt in the face WOOOOOOO PUMPED
@theprofessor,
Yeah that'd be great playa
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Da ****.. Why did you do that?
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
this is serious dude, no lie
today in school i was bout to punch a retarded guy
not meant to be a bar but it rhymed lol
this is true though
@Bambino,
To make a long story short My dog got out and the muphuka tried to run him over so I chased the car flipped a **** on him he swung at me I dodged am punched him in the face spit on his car and left
