Neverending Rap Battle

AND NOTHING IN THIS VERSE RHYMED

and that isnt explaining your verse....line by line

That's just my style. I'd rather use different words than the same ones we see and read every day.

I'll try to incorporate that, thanks. Similes are the first thing to pop into my mind and metaphors are more difficult for me to grasp.

Maybe it's the way you're saying it. For the most part I seem to have decent flow in between bars. That's the hardest thing about this; it's harder to be creative since it's all text. I have to hope you read it the same way I do, otherwise it's bound to sound different.

Uve never been laid and it connects to how u said ur internet and cable went down

how the **** does it connect...i never even said that

i said my t.v and computer doesnt work...this is on my phone...read it again...

that **** made no sense

It's great to use new words but try to connect them otherwise they just loom like your trying to sound intelligent use multis though "back hands, rap fans, last stand, etc" rhyme multiple words it will increase your flow as well because it won't end up choppy

It wasnt a verse i was explainin
U want a vers fine here it is


Hey imma rapper it helps me control my mind
If u cant take control of ur own brain how can u mine
Yes i did bite lotto but u bite the style of em during kim
U no what **** u ur mother ur brother even jonny yes **** him
Dont mourn ur ass will meet with him soon
Ur just made the bitchs dont swune
Around u think about this bambs got that texting chick whitey had the mother and china gina prof got his baby girl i have my girl i made the rap for
U dont even have a mother ******* man whore
I cant free i ******* get it but neither can u
when u got down and blue raps what u ran to
Yes its an out let and one that dont involve ur penis (lucky for u)
Rap with out it ur no where near the meanest
wait even with rap im more of a fuckin dick
And yes id be the one caught ******* ur chick
Im ranting ur chanting
Cuz selling ur soul to the devil
Is the only way ur better than me ur not a ******* rebel
U run when ur mom gets home
Yes i run from my dad ur not alone
But stop acting no one cares u got us as a fam
And i am sorry about johnny, man
We do hope **** gets better and good
I hope **** goes back to they way it should
cuz theys battles got way out of controll
We need to go back cuz this shits getting old

I said ur cable and internet is the only thing that went down on u

ESKIMOS IN MEXICO

[Verse]
I met a few Eskimos in Mexico
Dressed in sombreros eating vegetables on pedestals
Having sex with a few lesbian professionals
Drinking chemicals from empty bottles of Malibu
Getting into tempers that are radical
Lifting women's legs up, that coochie is edible
Plant a few eggs in you, fertilise them, let them grow
so they can be Mexican too and walk around heavy-tattooed
Making everyone harden like statues
They always got nuts that are harder than cashews
Violence is peanuts if they've got physique
Plus they're multiplying by the start of the week
Wearing hooded coats, constantly armed with the armoury
And they got weapons that puts shards in your artery
Walking around with bodyguards as their comradery
Adopting such philosophy as "Brother, don't **** with me!"
They don't catch fish, this ain't Antarctica
If you don't dress like them, they'll straight laugh at ya
And make you look like a joke read from comic pages
Reason with them and they'll go into demonic rages
while puffing on the woodbine and chronic for ages
And beat you up much faster than Sonic and Tails is
But some of them are probably failures
because they always act gangster, adopting some aliases
like, "AG Dolla" and "Vigilante"
"Lightnin MC" and "Vincent Gigante"
Scarface, Carlito Brigante
They might as well call themselves Twinkle and Akshay*
Why do they act so hip and so fancy
when all they ever do is talk their chicks up in bad ways?
I'm surprised they don't get hurt like bad aches
and go to the clinic and get stitched up with Band-Aids

* Twinkle and Akshay are two celebrities from India.

i'm really tried of battling back and forth..not really doing anything for myself...i should have saved the bars for the tournament...i'm done...makin another track...be here soon...

few bars you will see

i didnt sell my soul..it was stolen
collapsed heart, paralyzed......broken
fall...brain damage......mind is swollen
thoughts are gone...but still think of lyrics that are golden
body broken
the father spoken
i am chosen
the angels woken
Satan's choken
but hells on earth.....world erosion

My god! NOVA AND DREW ARE TAKING THEIR RELATIONSHIP TO THE NEXT LEVEL! Jus kiddin veja started just like I did, asking questions

TERRIFIED


terrified, pick a side, c'mon unlock by slide, Wendy and Clyde died by pickin the wrong one
I'm an open book opened by crooks with crooked looks (arg!) how long does it take to shake the feeling that your life's at stake, the knife won't break!
It twists, aimin for your wrists, your throat is the target avoid splurge and what's started, the poison makes you evil hearted you're not smarteder(what?)
Just another guy, willin to live and to TERRIFY!

(Chorus)
Bring it on fuckers
Stupid cocksuckers
Your out o yo luckers
Your out of the MONEY

So bring it on fuckers
And pottymouthed truckers
You're out o yo luckers
Your out of the MONEY

Bunny! I'm comin honey, picture it, the day is sunny, all jokes are funny
And life
Seems great
Then rains of fire and electric wire roads are marked with tire, rubber burns flames leap higher trial by fire! The vole feeds off of weeds, and poor people's knees and needs, no one hears their pleads! Then THUNDER and the people flees last thing they see, is something that'll-
TERRIFY! Ingulf the sky! They wonder why, escape they try! And a man stands up and says:

BRING IT ON ******
YO STUPID **********
YO OUTTA LUCKER
YO OUTTA THE MONEY
(Chorus here)

Just walk it off, what started as a cough, becomes apocalyptica, a cock is sick sucka, so walk it off...

Cleanse the would! Simple cleanse the pain, that oh so drives you insane
So cleanse the wound, cleanse the wound...

They terrify... Leave then terrified... It only takes... an average guy... to
TERRIFY

I plan to extend it and make a beat on garage band... Just came up with it. Oh and

TRICK OR TREAT BITCHES!

haha dont push me
i respect darknova
hes a great dude and a good rapper...but you... you now what...i'll let whitey handle the jokes...serious talk..i'm batting you now...dont battle others..battle me

Hey guys, been away a while - Anyone wanna battle for practice for the 1K tournament?

Mr zone is back!

you scared of me.....every time i ask you to battle..you never reply...
well come on..battle me
make my fuckin day

I'll battle you

oh god lol....idk..now i'm scared

Be careful what u wish for cuz u just might get it

Wrathe, battle, 3 verses, 8 bars, no writtens - go.