Wrathe
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 10:11 pm
What's filler? What's tiny? What's going on?
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 10:25 pm
@Wrathe,
Filler is basically rhymes that really hold no meaning in battle rap especially it's about set ups and punches

I'll show you an example

This bitch ************ takes advantage of the effort heaven gives
(now this is a set up it allows you to flow into your next line if you can get to a point where your set ups can double as punches then you know you've gotten somewhere)

Now the punch

And your name is the closest you'll get to one of the seven deadly sins
(basically saying your a pussy but instead of saying it in a stupid way like "oh this wussy, is a pussy")

There's a difference between rhyming and rapping at this point your rhyming just stringing words together for the most part without a meaning behind it

Now for battle rap specifically just make the other person feel like an idiot and expose **** about them no holding back I don't give a **** if someones mom dies of cancer your in a battle your allowed to say it I once told a kid I wanted his paraplegic mom to fall down an up escalator till the rest of her body don't feel anything

REBUTTALS REBUTTALS REBUTTALS
this is more commonly known as a "flip" using someone's line against them here's an example

Charron(he's a bitch) - I really don't give a **** what you be talkin about so put a dick in your mouth like I do to your baby daughter whenever I come to your house

100 bulletz- *flip* now you decide to mention my 2 year old daughter son I should drop you for that stunt/ cuz your sister Meygan is 15 with 2 abortions but I didn't mention her once

See? Just using the other persons line to ur advantage

Just a little lesson on battle rap Wink
VejaDu
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 10:26 pm
@Wrathe,
Authenticity is hard to find and high in demand,
but I could count your original verses on one hand.
The new prodigy is here, lyrical Mark Twain.
Cleaning up piss rappers like OxiClean on stains.
Talking to yourself in front of a mirror is not a rap battle,
I'll rain on your parade like we're living in Seattle.
Our only thing in common is our springtime of youth,
but I'll take you out like I was pulling out a tooth.
So call me a dentist: I scare little kids and take money from your pockets.
And call me Jeremiah, regard me as the modern prophet.
The truth to my words will put you into neurotic depression,
scheduling therapeutic sessions just because of my aggression.
You're in no man's land while I'm kicking celestial dust;
you're lyrics are but a meager breeze, mine are like Sandy's gusts.
I'll surge water like an elemantalist and food for thought,
targeting your blind spot with a chamber thick like a blood clot.
I hope you know that rhyme, theme and flow are rap essentials—
but, I mean, you're still rapping to Successful instrumentals.
So this is just the beginning but I thought I'd keep it light.
I'll give you time to consider, I'm sure you'll be up all night.
theprofessor
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 10:28 pm
@VejaDu,
ur more of a bitch then dog vag, ur a biiiiitch i know how a dog raps
u can lick my ass crack , and find more **** to spit then if we stuffed ya lips with dog crap , oven mitts, gangbang porn puffin dick
,for sixty six weeks , couldn't cum up with a thought hitchhiking a hitch with a thumbs up, pussy leave u gun fucked , dumbslut u ******* wanna shot at brains , bathed in so much bathsalts it'll rot ya brain, strangle ya lifeforce with mic cords , write forbes on money rappers undies who couldnt afford a ford accord or the sorta drive to survive with there aorta inside , leave insides in quarters cork ya eyes n pop a bottle over ya head , this flow taste like hemoglob , a face where demons go n defecate , son accept ya fate , b4 i make time bombs inside mom detonate ,u ready to blow up ,baby im surprise u survived the skull **** ,shove almond packages all in , think ya'll nuts , midgets banging smurf , an smurfette says ur a small **** , you going through hell in this game , never getting called up , jesus an muhammad bombing u with cellphones ring ya bell homes , bell tone ghandi screaming go the hell home , devils dick in this android banging heavy metal screaming hello , stuff a cello up ya muff an play ya mellow ,wylin vile grin violin snapped over ya back as i wrap the phone cord around ya thorax an dial in , hung up b4 i cum u dumb slut , never done **** , wipe my ass with one buck , before u lick it , get off my dick bitch , god jacking off in the corner lord as my witness ,keep this out the scriptures jack the ripper rip a vicors ticker out n put some bloody heart in ya mouth as you choke on the snickers as ya snicker
or throat a boat of bannana's an choke on the sticker
send you to jail wrapped in bandanna's see how fast you get pancaked aunt jamima , blow ya brains out n stuff um back in just to remind ya , ima finer rhymer lines a 5 ta 9'rs n 9 to 5's , give you a high five an putting a nine to ya eyes , finally see ur shot coming , hip hop running her hand in an out her gushing pussy , im balls deep u ******* pussy, shits anal , biiiitch all these lips with same flows , when im done u'll know i came hoe , im weed indeed ima mary jane u cocaine an dames , u blow , throw fights judo ,sweet glucose n fructose , two doses of sugar pills tell u if a nucka real , how my knucks'll feel rebar ya pee bar if u think u fuckin steel still ****'n peelin ya grill ,
with a foreman george ,weak cats cheap ass pussy jsst like forign whores , flooring endorphins start snorting ya lymbic system , limp dicks pissing away there chance of ******* being hard eaten smart candy trying to get brains , u zombies u'll understand me , crack ya head open with a grammy , video tape me rapeing the censors an g rate it for ya family ,put it on youtube or ya boobtube an degrate it, u think ud no more shiit fagget ........ur dead leave the condom ribbed with maggots ......
ur both covering up for a dick , all that cock in ya mouth you cant say **** .....
theprofessor
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 10:39 pm
@VejaDu,
that was easy lol
theprofessor
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 10:39 pm
@theprofessor,
im getting bored again CAN EVERYONE BATTLE ME AT ONCE ???
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Wrathe
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 11:16 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Haha my favorite is when you say the last line, something witty and unforgettable. Sorry to use this example but back when I was oopan I did a rap about his "rap train" and I have to say although it wasn't good, the lyrics were smart and pretty good. Thanks for the info on fillers dude Smile goodnight my peeps
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Wrathe
 
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Reply Tue 30 Oct, 2012 11:42 pm
@theprofessor,
Nice dude! I love the "instrumentals"
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thedarknova
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 04:09 am
DFC U SHOULDVE KNOWN I WAS CUMMIN FOR DAT ASS

one you aint had pussy since pussy had u
If i do leave this world yes it will be the same way i came in its true
Ill be bathed in someone elses blood and screamin unlike drew
I have been in a fight other than with my parents and ill strike u 2

Listen ud be lucky if i dont shove my sternum in ur anus
See ill give u a case of sternumidius
Dude ur not totured ur a twilight nerd dont try to play us
And another thing ur internet and cable are the only thing that will ever go down on u, cliterius

Get it u need to expand ur verisons
Ps ill do frees with nigs all i want cuz unlike u were risen
U no how every group has that one person that there despisein
Well its u cuz ur always bitchen and cryin

Like ahhh my moms and dads are bitchs and my basements flooded
Pop that **** round here ud get cripped or blooded
Imma mash dat ass and bend u over and ull get spudded
ur like a babies but ur not rugged

I got one thing to say to u, drew mother **** u cuz ur mother fucked u


Lol now to lighten the mood no hate to drew and yes i did mean wat i said in the potatoe line Wink
thedarknova
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 04:34 am
@dfc100,
Drew like a joke ur rap becomes less clever the more u explain it
if i did die id be killed in action cuz i practice rap and train it
While ud be like osama killed for terrorism to rap
U deserve a slap for that crap
Unlike u i dont need to write a ******* book
To leave a crook afraid and shook
I dint even take the time
To fully read ur rhymes
But took time out of my ******* amazing life to read it
Get some help cuz drew u ******* NEED IT
dfc100
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 04:58 am
@thedarknova,
none of that **** made sense...at least make your verse real ****...not here and there....and really my basement is the only fuckin thing you can think of.......yea your improving alright
dfc100
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 05:18 am
@thedarknova,
**** crips and bloods they are a bunch of gays
kill all of them with my boys....the three K's
yes motherfucka i'm crazy with terrorism
you look like a baby born addicted to heroism
i mean just look at your generic rhythm
i mean look at this ****...but it might take some time

Dude ur not totured ur a twilight nerd dont try to play us
And another thing ur internet and cable are the only thing that will ever go down on u, cliterius

to realize you put cliterius at the end just to make it rhyme
i mean just face it
your rhymes are basic
i deserve a slap for that crap
that line is the best you could think of...my anger is pullin back
i'm bout to snap...
your ******* vertebrae
intill you admit you ******* heard of may ( ME)....made it rhyme
you black fucked up shemale
choke your mom till shes pale
send a pic of her body in half..through email
prof, whitey, and shutdown told me never let a verse get to you but my brain always rattles
but then i realize your not dissing your trash talkin...that dont win battles
yes i do it to
but i'm changing that cause i refuse to lose to you
remeber when little darky first came..first rap..thinking about it had to wait a while
but then he went a stole em's lyrics from 8 mile
than bambi called dark a wannabe.......true
then he said where wannabes of dark...why would we want to be you
your second verse was horrible i stoped half way...didnt want to put my head through it
but then i clicked the reply's button and saw that i responded to it
then you responded we ad a battle but then you got soft and cried to your mommy
then stoped battling me because of verse i had for johnny
then you went off on bambi like WHAT THE ****
but then i felt bored and said dark novas drawings suck
your just a little white...punk
prof choose you to draw and ****...he was drunk
he takes a huff
lets out a puff
as if he wasnt high enough
your the reason he smokes to much
you little ****
i'm getting bored sick and tried of battling you
maybe dark so practice some moves
before ever batting drew.................................DONE


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VejaDu
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 06:03 am
@thedarknova,
How exactly does one shove his sternum in someone else's ass?
Wrathe
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 07:48 am
Ha. Hey, what's up with the competition?
For VejaDu (cool name bro)..

Addiction to my music you've got alwratheaphobia/ now listen yo bout to get the rake's dose of ya/ the rake is a beast as ugly as you/ the only difference he's white while your coming black and blue/ I'll steal your pride I'll feel your side/ measure for weakness you leak this and seep jizz on your parents/ c'mon Clarence/ insurgence and insurince don't help ya one bit/ you cum ****/ ya poop in their vagina ya whina an no one likes ya one bit
I'd insult your looks/ but I can't even see/ I've been blinded ya crook!/ damn hurricane sandy/ it isn't all rainbows and candy/ c'mon, your new name's Mandy/ you're like me/ one syllable rhymes/ only difference is my unkillanle time/ multi syllable rhyme?/ bitch I'm willingly fine/ I'll leave you blind/ I'm the hurricane/ my lyrics bring the rain/ I'll break your spine/ twist yo mind/ take yo blood and leave you dry/ I heave a sigh/ this was easy as pie...
thedarknova
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 08:15 am
@dfc100,
which didnt make sense ill splain it
thedarknova
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 08:18 am
@VejaDu,
very carefully Wink
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Albo 47
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 08:52 am
@dauer,
yo i got only two things to say,
that im on my rhymezone,
and i aint talkin about the website
where u get ur rhymes from,
you dumb,
your bitch wanted some,
i told her all i got for bitches,
is hard dick and bubble gum,
and i allways carry heat on me ,
flying with them birds,
cuz im high like HALO ,
on my Banshee
Wrathe
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 08:53 am
Good morning peeps. Gettin ready for school? Or are you past that? I wonder where killzone went? I still don't know what tiny is. VejaDu your turn on rap battle. Who is winning?
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Wrathe
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 08:55 am
@Albo 47,
No rhyme and you rapped against someone who isn't here. N°°B»
Rap against someone here!
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Wrathe
 
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Reply Wed 31 Oct, 2012 09:16 am
Decide eat the deathbell/ take ya last breath, hell/ I can wipe out nations/ give parking ticket citations/ cause reincarnation/ yet I can't make ya rap any better cause your worse, are ya under the weather? Makin big declarations/ clutch my Uzi, it's a doozy yet I fill ya up with bullets, your losing/ blood fast/ no bombast/ c'mon Elmer Fudd, your comin in last/ lay down bleedin/ you're a navy retreatin, yet still a baby teethin
Go ahead, ask me to make a track/ stake in yo back/ then I fake a rap/ that was nothin/ I'm rare as a summer puffin/ you're a dumber stuff in/ purgatory/ so purga-boring!/ more like purga-snory/ time to forge a story/ FORE!/ you missed. Shall I add another point to the score?/ you're doint and for you golf is a chore/ me? Damn every sport is a bore/ unless rapping's a sport/ then I'll dribble a ball in my court/ I'll sizzle you all on my porch/ I'll poach/ singing Papa Roach/ his ears ringing like a bomb explodes/ there you're dead now/ yes. Time to milk ya like a cow/ leash ya like a dog, how wow/ shut the **** up an bow/ you can make a vow/ but I'll pike ya down/ strike a frown/ I'm done you can get up like, now!/ you spontaneously combust/ talkin bout being robust/ you know us/ I'll just lift up a rojo bus/ Marco Polo, oh shut yo ****/ I'm like a bull I buck/ the bus falls/ and us? It kills all/ down comes the wall/ that why you don't **** with us y'all!

That was for vejaDu and new dude.
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