@MattDavis,
Frank
Is this a correctly worded sentence:
I didn't understand Fresco's joke and was happy Spendius asked for an explanation, but I didn't understand the explanations even more than I didn't understand the joke.
Or do you think that should be shortened in some way?
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Matt
Fresco's joke made reference to things outside my semantic world view, causing me to feel hope that this incoherence could be reconciled by Spendius's efforts at clarification, however, ultimately my semantic world view became less coherent with the world view of Fresco.
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jtt
I got, with a quick count, 42 words in both. They contain the same number of words. But Frank didn't ask for a rewording, he asked,
"Is this a correctly worded sentence:"
and
Or do you think that should be shortened in some way?