10
   

I am SICK and TIRED of PEOPLE'S CRITICISM regarding my comics and other things

 
 
firefly
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 11:43 am
@JGoldman10,
JG, what age reader are you aiming at with your comic? I think you really have to give that a lot of thought.

A good many of the details you obsess about are likely unimportant, irrelevant, or even overly confusing, for a younger reader, yet the appearance of your characters, and some details of your plot-lines, seem too juvenile to have much appeal for an older reader.

You aren't creating this comic just to amuse and interest yourself. You are creating it to appeal to readers considerably younger than yourself, and I think you have to consider your target audience when deciding what to include and exclude. You seem to lack an over-all, well thought-out, concept for this comic, and not considering who you expect to be reading it.



JGoldman10
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 11:46 am
@firefly,
Kids is the target audience.
firefly
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 11:48 am
@JGoldman10,
What age "kids"?
djjd62
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 11:58 am
@firefly,
firefly wrote:
What age "kids"?


http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/9/9d/Kids_film.jpg/402px-Kids_film.jpg
a group of sexually active teenagers in New York City and their unrestrained behavior towards sex and substance abuse (alcohol and other drugs) during the era of HIV in the mid-1990s.
izzythepush
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 12:10 pm
@JGoldman10,
JGoldman10 wrote:

If I wanted it to be comedic, then yes, I would use geese.


Be afraid, be very afraid.
0 Replies
 
JGoldman10
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 12:41 pm
@djjd62,
Something that will appeal to young children and teenagers, but I am cleaning it up.
izzythepush
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 12:46 pm
@JGoldman10,
JGoldman10 wrote:

Something that will appeal to young children and teenagers, but I am cleaning it up.


So which is it, something that will appeal to young children and teenagers, or something you'll clean up?
JGoldman10
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 12:48 pm
@izzythepush,
Both- I am keeping it clean.
izzythepush
 
  1  
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2011 12:59 pm
@JGoldman10,
You run the risk of appealing to neither, as FF has already pointed out.
0 Replies
 
JGoldman10
 
  1  
Reply Fri 9 Dec, 2011 02:42 pm
People are criticizing me because I am making a kids' comic about streetfighting cats and dogs that fight crime - some ask me why I am doing that?

Very simple. Anthropomorphic cartoon animals are easy to draw.

Cats and dogs are territorial and so are street gangs- it is a natural fit to put the two of them together.

Kids like action and adventure.

Kids like cartoony stuff.

I am going to include slapstick in it and some humor.
0 Replies
 
JGoldman10
 
  1  
Reply Fri 9 Dec, 2011 02:42 pm
@djjd62,
What age kids? I am doing a G-rated thing so what age does that usually attract?
izzythepush
 
  1  
Reply Fri 9 Dec, 2011 04:48 pm
@JGoldman10,
What the **** is g rated?
FOUND SOUL
 
  1  
Reply Fri 9 Dec, 2011 04:56 pm
@izzythepush,
Thinks out-loud, we are now on page 48, my age, I'm old:)
0 Replies
 
JGoldman10
 
  1  
Reply Fri 9 Dec, 2011 06:20 pm
@izzythepush,
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/G-rated#Ratings

Rated G: General Audiences – All Ages Admitted.
Sturgis
 
  2  
Reply Fri 9 Dec, 2011 06:24 pm
@JGoldman10,
Quote:
Both- I am keeping it clean.


The easiest way to keep it clean is by rolling the skin back and washing underneath.

Oh, you meant the imaginary cartoonery. Yes, you found the easiest way to keep that clean as well, by just not ever actually doing anything except asking the same drivel again and again and again and again....
0 Replies
 
izzythepush
 
  1  
Reply Sat 10 Dec, 2011 05:01 am
@JGoldman10,
JGoldman10 wrote:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/G-rated#Ratings

Rated G: General Audiences – All Ages Admitted.


What's wrong with U, universal? You're just being bloody awkward.
0 Replies
 
MontereyJack
 
  1  
Reply Sat 10 Dec, 2011 05:07 am
G is for General Audiences, all ages admitted. It's part of the American movie rating system. U is not.
MontereyJack
 
  1  
Reply Sat 10 Dec, 2011 05:09 am
I mean, we could have ratings like
DBIS--Don't Bother, It Sucks
or
TSSH--Total ****, Stay Home

But we don't. Just G and PG and PG-13, and R and X
0 Replies
 
izzythepush
 
  1  
Reply Sat 10 Dec, 2011 05:17 am
@MontereyJack,
Like I said, you're just being bloody awkward.
JGoldman10
 
  1  
Reply Sat 10 Dec, 2011 03:40 pm
@izzythepush,
So sorry your country doesn't have a film-rating system but that is how things are done in the States.
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

Random rant about God. - Discussion by KoreanGodBeliever
Clean off your f@*!$@!# car!!! - Discussion by ebrown p
Rant/Ex Advice - Question by Ineedhelpuwu
My Controversial Rant about Racism - Discussion by Aopde
What is with you people? - Question by One Eyed Mind
The fraud of evolution - Discussion by gungasnake
 
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.03 seconds on 09/30/2024 at 08:22:52