mcdaddysmith we'll if you'v never done it before that was an alrite drop for a beginner u still betta than few emcee on here...
read over ya lyrics correct spelling add in more metaphors...
try make the PUNCHES hit...use PERSONALS that i wud get offended by.
here an example in your style of a multie!!
blazer the one who is going to need secure protection/
blazer the one who struggles to ever produce an erection/
plus it personal cause if i did have an erection problem i'd be offended lol
play-school words go deeper in to your vocabulary.
ie' in style you write ill change the starting lyrics
here i is, bitch i'm back with another attack
gonna put u down like a kick to the sack
I enter the forum with vengeance, producing another deep attack/
I have your skeletal system filled with cracks/
so think before you sit back an relax/
somthing like that... only example
you flip the lyrics well though... taking my lyrics and reversing them
safe peace out -1- you want to go again.