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Neverending Rap Battle IV

 
 
shefki kuqi
 
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Reply Sun 18 Mar, 2007 12:13 pm
yo blazer
this is big K the batlle is still on blood



i sense someone's tapping into my phones, why do
I got this feeling in my bones I might die soon
The FBI might be trying to pull my file soon
I might be walking blindfold into a typhoon
I might be seeing rockets light up the night sky
Right outside the window of my living room
And if they do you can say good night and by-bye to them iTunes
If I don't try to record as much as I can before I do
The plan is to have as many in the can as I can
As I stand before you in this booth of walking dead man
Blank stair, dead pan, look on my face as I gaze into space
As I wait to be scooped up in that van
As I mysteriously disappear into thin air
And they gonna say a sniper just appeared out of nowhere
And I'll go down in the history
As the bloodsucking leech who hid behind the freedom of speech
Tried to take the 5th Amendment, use it, twist it and bend it
And ended up dying to fill out the hero's (???)
The business way to end this, I can feel the tremors tremendous
In remembrance of September 11th
Flash back to September 7th when 2pac was murdered in Vegas
He said it, he predicted his own death, let us never forget it
Should we ever live to regret it
Like that day John F. Kennedy was assassinated in broad day
By the greatest lunatic with a gun
Who just happened to work on the same block in the library book depository
Where the President would go for a little Friday stroll
Shots fired from the grassy knoll
But they don't know, or do they
Who's they, for 'em to say, touche'
We're all vulnerable and its spook-ay
This is about as kook-ay, as I've ever felt now
Count down to nuclear meltdown
7,6,54,321
You can run, you can do what you want to
But you know you ain't gonna do nothing
When its time, it's your time
You are the prime target
You have become Public Enemy # 1

Freshenal
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blazer
 
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Reply Sun 18 Mar, 2007 05:54 pm
yo 'kuqi' blood was a good drop yeah... but you need punches in there blood if they were ya battle barz... no hate... juts tellin ya how to improve...

was sick drop no doubt way betta than ya other drops big improvment...

if ya want me to hit ya back on that i will blood yeah safe peace out -1-
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Macdaddysmith
 
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Reply Sun 18 Mar, 2007 10:14 pm
shefki kuqi--

wut was that ur ryme was weak
u need a new style a new technique
f**k blazer step up 2 me
andd u will see
a place u dont wanna be
lookin up at me from the ground
as i empty a round
u better not make a sound
i'm reppin my crew
steppin to you
b!tch ur threw
ur gonna be scared i will watch u cowar
leave u destroyed like the f****ing twin towers
this is my attack
it hurts like a quick kick to the sack
better watch ur back
watch me scream watch me shout
i stepped up 2 god and knocked that b!tch out
man i'm dun with this so peace out
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blazer
 
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Reply Mon 19 Mar, 2007 07:48 am
are you kiddin me blood mcdaddysmith onistly your not contest for me ya play school lyrics need changin blood an structure... but if ya want ill merk ya .... -1-
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Macdaddysmith
 
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Reply Mon 19 Mar, 2007 06:44 pm
well hurry up then
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blazer
 
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Reply Tue 20 Mar, 2007 07:00 am
what u mean hurry up i was waitin for ur reply...

itte then ill drop sumin...
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blazer
 
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Reply Tue 20 Mar, 2007 07:38 am
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big ploppy3
 
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Reply Tue 20 Mar, 2007 02:34 pm
yo blood this is ploppy on the mic
betta watch out cause ive dominated this game from the tric.

yo mc jim this is for u essay


yo mc jim
you betta but ur rhymes to the bin
cause man, they r shockin!!

Aight Aight!!!!

man im verbal arsonist
i should even be chargin for this
cause theres no way u can dis

peace out hit me back

ur rhymes r shite
you'd do a better job at flying a kite
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Macdaddysmith
 
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Reply Tue 20 Mar, 2007 05:09 pm
that was pretty dope man......here u go blazer

here i is, bitch i'm back with another attack
gonna put u down like a kick to the sack
ur ryme was good but it needs one correction
blazers the one who's gonna need the protection
imma bash u and take out ur mid section
talkin bout midgets,, b!!!tch there taller than u
u need to think thrrew
who ur steppin too
ur sittin there all dazed and confused
i'm spittin this then spiitten that
kill a b!!tch then take u back
hit u with a crazy smack
knock you through a pain of glass
u'll get scars get some stripes
u be livin a tigers life
u be the king,, all ur diamond rings
watch me rap this **** dont need to sing
then u get put down like kennedy and lincoln
a new king appears thats wut i be thinkin
i be risin higher as ur battle ship be sinkin
u best rethink this was no mismatch
bot u just got more than a scratch
................................................................................................

man ur ryhme was dope and i never dun this b 4 so if u got n e pointers 4 me just holla aight man.....respect..
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Jaden11
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 02:58 am
never ending rap battle.
Maybe it would be worth getting into but until you'll learn how to spell so we can understand what you are trying to communicate.....?
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blazer
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 03:45 am
mcdaddysmith we'll if you'v never done it before that was an alrite drop for a beginner u still betta than few emcee on here...

read over ya lyrics correct spelling add in more metaphors...

try make the PUNCHES hit...use PERSONALS that i wud get offended by.

use MULTIES

here an example in your style of a multie!!

blazer the one who is going to need secure protection/
blazer the one who struggles to ever produce an erection/

plus it personal cause if i did have an erection problem i'd be offended lol

play-school words go deeper in to your vocabulary.

ie' in style you write ill change the starting lyrics

Quote:
here i is, bitch i'm back with another attack
gonna put u down like a kick to the sack


I enter the forum with vengeance, producing another deep attack/
I have your skeletal system filled with cracks/
so think before you sit back an relax/

somthing like that... only example

you flip the lyrics well though... taking my lyrics and reversing them


safe peace out -1- you want to go again.
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pimponline
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 05:46 am
yo listen
yo listen up this is gngsta,


like i said yeh pure bread gangsta,
got nines an mac 10s bullets waitin to sank ya,
like J.M.E opposite of negative wont hesitate to shank ya,
so ima take this to a whole other upper levle,
me bustin a double treble, next time u say a rhyme,
this like netball u passed ma 3rd so that equals nine!!
BANG BANG ur bitch is seeing another bloke,
screw this **** its like murder she wrote,
when i got ya throat fucc u pussy i dont even need guns,
squeeze ya wind pipe hard an suffocate the oxygen from ya lungs,
there ya like puns,
fucc this **** ya skeletal form lookin something like auithoritist thumbs,
you know fuccin with me is obserd,
so i geuss ma rep is preserved,
to a perv who deserves, applouse and commendation from this world,
got more words than post GCSE nerds,
so go eat a dictionary u need to learn!


yeh that was pimponline big up blazer!!
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blazer
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 07:31 am
Quote:
squeeze ya wind pipe hard an suffocate the oxygen from ya lungs,
there ya like puns,
fucc this **** ya skeletal form lookin something like auithoritist thumbs


haha Laughing that ill rite there blood keep doing ya thing
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pimponline
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 03:54 pm
ceers m8
cheers blud
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Macdaddysmith
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 04:39 pm
yah man heres my next line
................................................

I'm kickin another verse that'll make your bones shatter
your teeth chatter
I'm goin up quickly climbing this ladder
I'm gonna be famous and quick like Jackie Chan
Blazer is gonna be my biggest fan
As he sucks his girls dick he'll be sayin how i'm the man
This is a battle and your battling the beast
I'm world known from the west to the east
I'm getting promoted while your getting your release
I'll be your death, I'll be your assassination
Murder you with no hesitation
Never lose my concentration
Send you to the emergency room
Like dynamite watch me go boom
I'm gonna explode
Knock your a$$ right off the road
Knock all your teeth to the back of your throat
Make you lose hope
Just try and cope
I'm winnin this just like world war one
I'll be droppin bombs against your little guns
You will feel the hit and know that i won
Your bones, Your nerves, muscles even your lungs
Are all gonna feel the sting when they get stung
About to get hung
Breakin down walls to get through
Just to get to you
I'm a deadly sickness kinda like the flu
Turn yah lips blue
Now I'll let you think about what you can do
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blazer
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 05:51 pm
see that was good drop blood yeah yeah ill hit ya back soon -1-
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Macdaddysmith
 
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Reply Wed 21 Mar, 2007 08:59 pm
yah man... write soon then.....respect......peace
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pimponline
 
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Reply Thu 22 Mar, 2007 07:48 am
heres how ya drop
hey lil homie,
heres how ya drop!

/////////////////////////this is a lil story lol\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\

my lyrical dominence is prominent when i drop it son,
ma enemys comiting felonies like an avon run,
droppins not a hobby its way way of life or so to speak,
me spittin ma sh1t is a hit so ive mastered ma techniuqe,
someone whos 'maybe crazy' with the whole world at his feet,
my politeness causess exciment when me and a costomer meet,
but its like good cop bad cop
the polite-one goes all quite and the one who wants to fight him gets to speak,
leaving him frightened and his heart rate reaching peak!
and the one who was polite shows not to be to nice and his hearts raises up yet another beat,
as the dril penetrates ur knee cap for the dept you didnt pay back saying
"lets keep this between u and me"
but he gets scared and runs off to call the cops,
but where not really bad people, where jus doin our jobs,
at least where not claimin social of government like all the homeless slobs,
as ma mate bob said nock it off,
i pulled ma 9 from beneath a rock,
and put 2 holes in the pussy and said there so I SHOWED HIM WHAT WAS WHAT,
so theres the story of a man and his dept,
so either payback or spray ur gat, or you to will end up dead,
so tonight tuck up with your guilty concience in your bed,
and reminesen on what i sead,
i mean fucc it do u want two holes in ya head!

peace out to all ma homies man rep blazer waddup blud
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blazer
 
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Reply Fri 23 Mar, 2007 11:29 am
soz it longerzzz inet problems get me

anyways here it go

~BLAZER~ ~check it~

As you abscond me to think my thoughts run untamed~ like I been raised in a caged~/ Im outraged~/
now you been set in a confined space~ Claustrophobia differs in my case because it wasn't a factor~/
But when your to be found in a situation similar to mine it's your heart that becomes a fast reactor~/
Your just like Jackie Chan you're nothing but an actor~ each outtake you see his body gets abused~/
Confused by that punch, you would be! ~/
bottom of the ladder messing with a force like a nuclear war between two countries~ im top of the tree~/
physically bruising emcees with lines that eat through military armoury with ease~/
step to me do as you please~/
When you depart the stage in a black bag secluded from the breeze~ mother with the palms of her hand on her face, weeping on her knee's~/
You call your self a machine, you weren't built for the job~ as your cogs cease, spilling oil that's the equivalent to a human that's bleeding~/
verbal skills of destruction in the text that your reading~/
Your like dynamite~ put up in a open field watch you go boom, hole in the ground but there nothing left to you~/
Im like a screw that been cross threaded~ your entire crew can attempt to remove me, but Its going to take more than that to undo me~/
You like blazer sucking his bitches dick~ for your benefit that was her clit you untrained prick~/
I recognize how you bear a resemblance to it~ because your penius is an identica portraile of it~/

as it hailing blades you dont need to duck~ because your plot being discussed by the portal while your system begins to **** up~/


had to rush that but it alrite i spose

anyway wahgwan people...

good drop 'pimponline' blood....

peace out -1-
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blazer
 
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Reply Tue 27 Mar, 2007 06:39 pm
wahgwan ppl~~~ no1 even dropping anymore...lol ?????? get me!!!


peace out -1-
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