Neverending Rap Battle IV

^ True..

Ayo..This is Hitman J

chris were do you get beats from ??

hyrbrids divided into 3 parts jaw, skull,an ,spine
take ya domino ciphers make ya fall in line
i see ya drop at 6:30 , ya all fall in time
i remain raw hot and dirty , the way i brawl in my rhymes
see my enemy be russian talk,like its stalin time
i'll beat you physically or academicly bich
your even close minded when ya being medically stitched
my arsenal of tactics is from general wit
ya a half fag half bich ,seriously, ya ass has genital lips
the D.E.A. arrested you for suitcaseing estrogen
ya scared as a pedifile doing a fereal bit
relax i'll put you under cardiac arrest again
cause A, i'll B C'ing u if you wanna get alphabetical bich
but i say ya the type with the mic ta let it all go an quit
im tight with the mic with a golden grip
i type, an i write , i flow an spit
ya styles a baloon, ya always blowin it
i'll bring this to a volatile end, ya doomed without knowin it
from the flame i spit when im flowin scripts
igniteing ya phosphurus when ya flowin ****
yo body does'nt goin the winners circle,
**** ya go in crypts
here you won , everybody i'll no beat the winner purple
with these pucnhlines throwin wit
its crunch time now ya just toes an lips


copywrite 07/may calgary alberta ,mic dugas

all over
some i make, some i buy from producers, some from myspace and a few other sites, and some are used but not copyrighted. Those ones you cant sell, but you can use for promotional purposes. Check myspace forsure, they have alot of beat makers on there selling there beats.


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Re: all over
Kruger, you "drop" old wordplay too. Stop the bullshit buddy or i will highlight what you played.

hmmm.. I said write me a battle.. not your little bullshit side chatter. If you're going to address me, call me sir kruger! and write some lyrics biotch

Heres A Key I Put On Anothre Site:

Ya Raps Are Faded, ya Mad I Made It,I'm GLad Ya Hate It..
Just Gives Me A Reason To Leave You Decapatated..
Lines Crackin' ya Teeth, I Just Rap For The Beef..
Tape You Up, And Test Drugs At The Back Of Ya Jeep.
Flip The Feds Off, Blow Their Heads Off, Grab The Pot, RUN!
Laugh Until The Cops Come, Blow 'Em Up Wid A ShotGun!
Wreck Some Jaws, Trigger Only A Seconds Pause..
Stagger On Stage..Vomit, N Still Get Applause..
My Drops Straight Toxic, You Ain't Worth My Image, G
Just To Prove, I'll Come N Slice You With Perfect Symmetry.
Your A No Go, You So Slow, Like 'Sinking Gardens' You Can't 'Flow, Ho!'
You All Blow So..I Got Chicks Showin' More Clevage Than 'JoJo!'

Ok Here I Go Now:

I've Scarred Writers, Writ In Blood With Arthritus..
The Effect The Of Combustin', One Bar, The Mic Bust..
Theres No Sun, I'm Frozen, Nobody Acknowladge Me..
I've Been **** On Half My Life, With No Apology..
But Who Cares? I Keep Writing Until My Hands Numb
Like A Little Child At Times, Throwing Tantrums..
I Can't believe I Wrote This, Some Say I'm Hopeless
It's Like A Curse, N I'm Forever lacking Focus..
I'm Scarred Forever, Sh*t's As Hard As Ever..
Just A Strugglin' Man Puttin' His Heart Together..
I Don't See The Light, But I Know I'ma Be Alright..
I'll Get Back Up, Just As Soon As MC'z Will Write..
It's Hard To Breath, I'm A Scarred MC Who Starts To See..
That Some INfectious Virus Is Taking Over A Part Of Me..

this ones to the suburban poet


this kids a child at times
throwing tantrums
kids gotta grow up get wild at rhymes
start throwin anthems
my rhymes broaden ya mind till your goin phantom
im heavy weight ya bantum
phatter then the heavy dates you wanna sex with
but you ,cant ,um
you were ugly already but now you'll never be hansum
my breath left ya entity blottered
mentally slaughtered this look alike ted dansun
i got ya head for ransom
I shot ya brain dead and dumb
ya styles mass produced
ya ass is loose an when the cash is loose
your past the truth
as soon as fumes past ya tooth
just ask the goof
who's the master dude
with faster food
to brain improvement
first master fluid
brain movements
fucc how the masses do it
heres how the master do it
i'll cast ya throught it
i was brought up bringing light where night pressin
psyc lessons
spit mic sessions
develop a hit if ya use the mic essence
relic a spit coming at it with the right presence
this robin hood
showing you what happens when ya fight peasants
lotta good it does when ya robin hood's
trapped in infored light testing
i dont no what you might be ingesting but im suggesting
investing in intestines so you can stomach what im professing
thats not perfect symmetry
ya spitten
thats pure gimmicry
ya written
get yo ass kicked on stage and off stage its pure mimicry
when ya get hit then
you wanna know why we dont acknowledge thee
cause ya rhymes lack the quailty
like useing safety scissors in anthroplogy
im causeing heads to land like fallin leaves
fucc quit ya crying to me , the real mc's demand an apology
as im brawlin these the childish internet colonies
stop ya crawlin please ya stallin me
ya appauling me
i rhyme sweeter then honey and polon G
my breath flow
makeing your breath go
like you're body fluids during ur last day on death row
it all comes out
you treat this like rock an a crack head ya'll run out
done out with my verbal gun out
no doubt son ya out done
when you flow with out one ya mouths won
zero out none

2007 the professor mic dugas calgary alberta

Alright Proff, I Can Stand Some Decent Competition :wink:

'Toilet Problemz'? Don't Even Ask, Of 'Course You A Dick'
..'Cuz Like 'Constapation' You Seemingly 'Forcin' ya ****!'
In My 'Storyline' Your A 'Groupie', A Fag, A Bitch!
You Ain't Nowhere Near Bein' A 'Protagonist!'
I'm The 'Reaper' Confirming Proff's 'Death Wish'
Casting Eerie Illusions That Leave You 'Breathless'
Like A 'Broken Computer'..****, ya Haywire
You Rap Wack, 'Cuz When I Spit, I Spray Fire..
Fake Rapper! Proff? Only Poet Got Skill, You Fake ****!
And Even Thinking Such Absurd **** is Humilliating..

Alright i'm not gonna waste my life here...nice verse proff, props

Hmm, This site really needs to know how to forumlate a punch...

I mean, Proff's verse was okay At best.. His Structure sucks.. Like, I take one look at it and I have to force myself to read it.. in all honesty..

im heavy weight ya bantum
phatter then the heavy dates you wanna sex with
but you ,cant ,um

^ wow, talk bout running outta **** to say.. lol...

I mean, You have multies down, yes.. But an actual punch is rare to see from you. like, I didn't know if that was just random spitting, makin' **** rhyme or an actual diss verse.. Cuz when you said, "This ones for Poet" I was expectin' a diss verse, but its just a bunch of babble babble.... like, your good at rhyming, that's bout it.. But battles and disses you need serious work..


NOWWWW POET aka Hit man J!

Your verse was Decent too... your opening bar was PLAYED AS FU@K!! and after that it didn't get much worse, cuz you came with no punches.. at all.. you did how ever come with self hype, but even that's played.. and your closer wasn't even hard man. lol your closer needs to hit hard.. cuz your closin' your verse.. honestly, if you post that verse on any real battle site, you would get eatin up hard! come with punches, wordplay and stuff, I know ou know how...

Just my two cents.. dont get all mad now and go write a wack diss.. cuz if it's wack, I won't even respond....

Lol Naw Eryk i can take some creative critisicm...

No matter what a nigga say, I'm gon be stuck in the game
Just like them 26 inch rims, stuck on the frame
I'm in the hood full time, I still kick it the same
And still got a nigga baby mama, giving me brain
I been the Truth since a youth, I fell in love with the streets
Like the body of the slab, fell in love with it's feet
I put the Cheve to the floor, and run it to the concrete
With a bitch in the back, head banging to the beat
Try to run up on a G, I'ma put a nigga to sleep
Plus the heat up under my seat, will make a nigga retreat
I'm a boss, ******* with me I promise you'll never eat
And if you wanna go to war, then I promise you getting beat
They know I been around the world, and brought it back to the hood
Threw a hook of diamonds on, and brought it back to the wood
Niggaz stay in Hollywood, but I stay where I stood
And I'm gathered with them Assholes, up to no good

800 tousand people still jumping from ther seat/
throwing roses on my feet,mohamad back to he's team/
mohamad is back here,with some rymes never seen/
spiting lyrics like never ever been/
illieteracy in alll ur heads,never victorios in ur raps/
24 hour like catching in ur hand a caliber to have fun with deads/
battling;repeating;throwing rymes ,improvment in all of u?/
all ur rymes ostrasize,simple rap nothing nice/
20 000 lyrics dies,no one ganna win from u , all going down like fries/
i can see it in ur eyes,holding the vengeance that will rize/
transforming to something bad,like a werewolf or something close to that/
hit me back in scrupulous,dont throw something bad uncosious/
i want a rematch with,macdaddysmith /
i want it now solider,i want to battle u i want to blow ur compsure/
i want it now i dont care if ur older,i m back with my new horror/
i want t put the big lost on ur shoulder/



hit me back, mohamad z , Rap on raP

yo all i have to say to doc is

thanks for the critism , but instead of talking like you've made it or are the best battler in the world

drop a rhyme , i dont care what you say unless you battle

i mean im willing to hear you out, but i cant really understand what your saying when , you dont spit n e more ,and all u do is trying to tell people
whats what , when a real rapper would just show them


ps: knock me all you wont , im just gonna hit you harder

See, Now I knew someone was gonna say some **** like that, Like "Oh why don't you post a verse/you talk like your the best" and **** like that, but if you look at any of my posts, I never said anything about me being the best.. lol i need work too.. I know where I need work.. I don't need ya'll to tell me on that..
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And Proff, You can't come hard.. lol, you just babble man.. and My last verse would eat any thing you post up.. Real talk, I'm not tryna start e-beef with you, cuz i'm cool with you, I'm just sayin'.. Forumlate a punch, and for God Sakes change your structure!!!!!!!!! I'm suprised people actually read your stuff lookin' like that. or if people are just sayin' your good..
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and I'm no rapper, lmfao I do this **** for fun, still eatin' yous up..
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i laughed when i read this "Ps: knowck me all you want, im just gonna hit you harder"
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c'mon now, we both know that'll never happen.. But if you want me to post a verse agianst you, then I gladly will. I'll show you..
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For ya'll who don't know, I'm Native.. yesssir...
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Here we go, remember you asked for it...
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Here's punches for you!!!!
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Professor gettin' all pissy, Can't take my advice and I'm just sayin' the truth..
Your 'wordin' kills' your verse.... Irony is - That's what Mine will end up doin to you!..
C'mon Proff, your running out of **** to say.. concepts that dont stroke any luck..
BUT you 'Ran Some' dope multies.....Now the bitch is lookin' broke as fu'ck... (Ransom)
You a Hoax, Now what?!! Sayin' you'll win this is rare, thinkin' you know all...
He's better off usin' my 'neighbors phone' if he thinks beatin me is a 'close call'..
you know you'll fall! now I'll beat the **** outta you, make sure you head for death
My punches are 'mint condition'....
............ ^ & Proff, Their about to freshen your breath!..
Quit with the stress.. Eryk already won, but i'll do more additional blastin'..
Cuz I can rap 'circles around' this faggot....... like My traditional dancin'....
But this bitch is less, Even on this site your ranked lower than the newbs...
Cuz your sooo much of a 'Zero' <-------------- Coca Cola is threatening to sue...
I tried to to teach lessons to this fool.. Now hes wack as fu'ck, so why try?!..
Sayin' I don't rhyme anymore is okay..,,
..................cuz aginast your verses. ^ it's pretty obvious why!!
I'm the hottest guy.. now this kid really needs to know how to formulate punches..
But you did have a good run Proff, too bad Imma be the one to put you in crutches..
so take my advice and chew it, On some real talk, you already know who the first is..
Cuz C'mon Proff.. My fu'ckin' Teepees have better Structures than your verses..
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You brought that on yourself...

LMAO
Its rather funny that Eryk made the statement "I know where I need work.. I don't need ya'll to tell me on that" and yet makes comments about other peoples ****

and as for the drop against prof where are the personals? you could have written that for anybody man.


Chris Mitchell

now why would anyone here even take your advice?
look at your last post you contradict yourself twice!!
you live in a Teepee, so your neighbor don't have a phone
just some buffalo hide and a f****** Totem Pole!!!
U mention "blastin", I wonder where you gonna get the glock?
when all you got are bows and arrows, made out of Sticks and Rocks!!!
this guy thinks he'll take out the prof by himself
atleast at arts and craft time you can make the F***** Crutches yourself!!
Proff hasn't dropped a verse and hes passing you man
hes 1 point ahead cause technically hes jacked you for you LAND!!!!
Notice these are personal, aimed at Eryk himself
So in his next post watch this bitch piss on himself.......


Chris Mitchell

Now i've tried to make this verse as wack as i can Just like you said Eryk. So because it's wack i guess you "wont even respond"
http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=92575&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=340






Now i wonder how long it will take for you to contradict what you said this time......

Don't talk smack about people, constructive criticism or not, unless you can take some yourself

^ What Are You, Proff's Mom?

Stay Out Of It, You Don't Just Jump In Like That With Stupid Sh*t...

lol
you mean like you just did?




notice how i said other peoples ****

the word "peoples" for those who don't know is plural. As in more than one!!!! As in I was talking about more than Proff


http://www.able2know.com/forums/about92575-0-asc-340.html

And you say what i said was stupid? Why because its true? lmao is this not a battle site?????????????????????????????????

done
anyways i'm done with this text stuff, it's just not my thing. this is my last post

peace

Chris Mitchell